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THE TEN ELEMENTS TO A MAIN CHARACTER

to create a

great main

character

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great main characters – heroes, protagonists, deuteragonist, whatever you want to call them – have ten things in common. ten things that are easily developed, once you know what to create within your character.

WEAKNESSES

main characters should be flawed, but i'm not saying this because it will make them more realistic (though it will) – i'm saying they need to be flawed because if they're not, they shouldn't be a main character. story is another word for change, or more accurately, character growth. not character as in "fictional person", character meaning "heart and soul". story is someone's character changing, for better or worse.

main characters at the beginning of the story are lacking something vital, some knowledge of themselves, some knowledge of how to live a better life, and this void is ruining their lives. they must overcome these weaknesses, if they're going to become complete, and reach a happy ending. there are two types of weaknesses: psychological and moral.

psychological ones only hurt the main character. moral ones cause the main character to hurt other people. easy.

GOAL

characters exist because they want something. desiring something, and the fight against opposition for that desire, is the lifeblood of story; and because character is story, it's also desire that can breathe life into words on a page, and begin the process of creating a real person in a reader's mind. it's this 'desire for something' that sparks that first connection between reader and character. it makes us think "well, now i have to find out if this person gets what they want."

this is a powerful link. (how many mediocre movies do we suffer through, when we could easily stop watching, because we're still trapped by that question of "what happens?") so if this is powerful enough to keep people watching an annoying movie, imagine how powerful it can be in an excellent story.

like in up, the goal is to get the house to paradise falls.

WANT

if the main character wants something, they want it for a darn good reason. usually, they think that attaining the goal will fill the void they can sense in their lives, the deficiency they can feel, but don't know how to fix. and they're almost always wrong. getting the goal doesn't help anything; which is why, while pursuing that goal, they discover a deeper need that will heal them. which brings us to ...

NEED/ELIXIR

main characters are missing something, a weakness in their innermost selves is causing them to live a less-than-wonderful life. through story, these main characters can be healed. once they discover what's missing, and accept it, and change the way they live to include this truth they've uncovered ... they're healed.

learning this truth, whatever it is, forms the purpose of the story for the main character. the reader, and the character, think the story is about achieving that big tangible goal the premise talks about; really, underneath it all, the story is about someone achieving a big intangible truth, that will ultimately save their life and future. often, this need is exactly what the character fears or professes to hate.

like finding nemo, where dory states exactly what marlin needs to learn.

GHOSTS

not this kind of ghosts.

ghosts are events in your character's past which mark the source of their weaknesses and strengths. because these happened, the character became who they are. all we need to know about backstory are these moments, because who the character became is all we care about. there's really only one ghost you absolutely need: the source of their moral and psychological weakness. something happened that knocked the character's world off kilter, and everything from that moment onward has been tainted by what happened.

this moment haunts them (hence the name), and holds them back from uncovering that need that will heal their weaknesses. pixar are masters of this: the source of carl being stuck in the past, curmudgeonly, unable of loving anyone new? ellie dying; his ghost.

in finding nemo, the source of marlin being suffocating, protective to the point of being harmful, possessive, and fearful? his wife and 99% of his children being eaten in front of him; his ghost.

TRUE CHARACTER

these are the strengths, values, convictions, fears, faults, beliefs, worldview, and outlook on life that make the main character who they truly are.

CHARACTERIZATION

this is everything on the surface of a main character. the way they look, talk, act, etc. all of this originates from those deeper elements of their being, the strengths, values, ghosts, weaknesses, needs, that make them who they truly are. so often, you can think of this as a facade they're projecting, a way to shield the the truth about themselves, how they wish to be perceived.

the story, and the other characters, are slowly going to see deeper than this characterization, revealing more and more of the reasons it is the way it is.

ARC

if the character is going to change from "incomplete person" to "complete person" there's going to be a journey they go on to make that possible. the external story, the pursuit of that big tangible goal the premise is about, is causing an inner journey to take place. what they have to do in pursuit of that external goal will apply pressure to those weaknesses, and pressure causes change.

this process has seven steps, but if i write it all here this post is going to be obscenely long. so i might wait and give this its own post.

CHANGED PERSON

who is the character going to be at the end of this story? they better be different, or else the story didn't work. how do they show how different they've become? what is the moral choice they make, that spins their trajectory from "the future doesn't look so great" to "happily ever after"? this should be known right away, maybe even before anything else is settled about the character. this gives a distinct end goal, a way to work backwards, a destination in mind that you can navigate towards.

FASCINATION AND ILLUMINATION

thee surface characterization, and the brief glimpses of the true character underneath create curiosity in the reader/audience. what the character says, and the implied subtext beneath the dialogue, creates a puzzle the audience wants to solve. actions they take work the same way; if the writer indicates there's deeper motivation behind why a character behaves in the way they do, we buy into solving that mystery right away. we can't help it. "who are you really? why are you the way you are? and how is that going to effect the story?"

these are all the unspoken, almost not consciously acknowledged, questions that fascinating characters provoke. searching out meaning, connecting the dots to find the truth – we can't resist this. we're not fascinated by tons of backstory and exposition about a character; we're fascinated by story, by mystery, by the technique of withholding information and having to interpret and hunt out the truth on our own.

so gradually, the story and the characters will force that character to reveal a little more, and a little more, until we have a complete picture of who this person is. crucial that this information isn't told up front. gradually illuminate it. it's just like getting to know a real person.

let's take a look at flynn rider/eugene fitzherbert, because almost everybody has seen that movie.

MORAL WEAKNESS — he's selfish. he's a little greedy. he's a little rude. he uses his charisma and bravado to keep people at a distance from the real him.

PSYCHOLOGICAL WEAKNESS — insecurity, fear of vulnerability, feels like the real him (eugene) would be unwanted, unlovable, and have nothing – just like when he was an orphaned kid. also, he doesn't know who he wants to be, what he wants to live for.

GOAL — flynn wants to get that crown. so he has to get blondie to see the floating lights, so she'll give it back to him, and then they can part ways as unlikely friends.

WANT — why does he want the crown? what does it mean for him? he actually states it (reluctantly) in song: "i have dreams like you, no really. just much less touchy feely. they mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny. on an island that i own, tanned and rested and alone. surrounded by enormous piles of money." he senses there's something off in his life, something is missing. but he mistakenly believes this missing piece is money, which will allow him to buy a lonely island, where he can live out his days as flynn and no one will ever know eugene.

NEED — "all those days chasing down a daydream. all those years living in a blur. all that time never truly seeing, things the way they were. now she's here, shining in the starlight. now she's here, suddenly i know. if she's here, it's crystal clear, i'm where I'm meant to go." he wants a crown ... he needs to fall in love with rapunzel. he needs to love something more than himself, and find out that love isn't something to fear and push away. he needs to abandon the 'tales of flynnagin rider' ambition, and get a more worthwhile, new dream.

GHOST — the source of all of his weaknesses can be linked to his "little bit of a downer" childhood as an orphan. interestingly, he isn't aware of another facet of that ghost, and rapunzel points it out to him. "was he a thief too?" she asks. he looks taken aback, before answering "uh, no." something's gone wrong. the choices he's making are not living up to that original role model.

CHARACTERIZATION — flynn's charming, funny, smart, charismatic, and arrogant (in a somehow charming sort of way). he's also rude, contemptuous, and sarcastic. all traits that help him keep up that 'swashbuckling rogue' facade, and push people away from the real him.

TRUE CHARACTER — underneath all that, he's a disney prince. that pretty much sums it up.

CHANGED PERSON — "started going by eugene again, stopped thieving, and basically turned it all around." he started the story as the guarded and evasive flynn, he ends as the selfless and thoroughly-in-love eugene.

FASCINATION AND ILLUMINATION — imagine if everything about flynn had been told, right up front. we know he's an orphan, we know he's upheld a fake reputation, we know he's a kind and loving guy underneath it all, we even know about his "tales of flynnagin" childhood dream. you know what happens? we like him ... but we're not interested in him. there's nothing we need to find out. there's no curiosity. and if there's no curiosity, and nothing being illuminated, your story's not going anywhere. so instead, we find out – alongside rapunzel – more about flynn as the story progresses. and that is how it should be.

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