《Gravity and Divinity: Apocalypse System LitRPG》Author Note 2 - The beginning chapters have been rewritten
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I don't know if it matters at this point, the story score is pretty much sunk and I'm falling hard on Rising Stars. But I guess I might as well point out that Chapters 1 through 4 have been rewritten. Chapter 5 was edited to help transition from the rewritten work to the older work. It's been a big effort to get it done, too, because my style has changed thanks to future developments (I'm at the beginning of Book 2 at this point).
What has changed?
Well, Chapters 1 thru 4 became longer. I'm not sure if that's good or bad. But I'm pretty sure it makes for an easier transition into the story. Most of that is due to getting more of Jay's perspective/introspection. That and Chapter 1 has a lot more action in it while leading up to the big reveal. I find it kind of entertaining. Chapter 2, Chapter 3, and Chapter 4 take their time lay the groundwork for Jay, the Champions, and all the personalities involved. Then Chapter 5 moves us from the world to the dungeon adventure and we go from there. Not too much changes. But I tried to eliminate some of the cringe.
And there are less "keks."
Hopefully, you like the new chapters better than the old version. If not. Oh well. I did my best and I have to move forward.
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