《Manan ff: rab ne bana di jodi ✔》part-9
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It was night time ....everyone was sitting in living room after having dinner....all were talking when again nandu's phone rang....
Cabir(irritated)-nandu who is that caller who is calling you in every ten minutes???...
Nandu-woh jeejs...I will be back ....bus two minutes saying this she left from Thier disappointing one soul!!!..cabir noticed his restlessness ....All noticed nandu's unusual behaviour as she was mostly on phone talking to someone she wasn't telling the name of from afternoon ....it was not her habbit...she hardly uses her phone if it's not about work...and here she hardly left her phone from afternoon....navya and abhi were worried for Manik that he doesn't take it in bad sense...whereas Dhruv,mukti and Alya thought it to be a friend and chucked the thought!!!and our Cabir baba was happy seeing manik's reactions because he can easily read it and was happy that atleast he feels something related to her which is a good sign in a growing realtionship!!...after sometime Manik too excused himself and left from Thier....while going towards his room he heard some voices of Nandu talking to someone....he stopped in front of the room to listen it...he was only able to listen one sided conversation which did nothing but stabbed his heart in million pieces...
Nandu(on phone)-yes meri jaan...I will pakka promise...yeah...and when you will come I will give you lots of kissi...sachi!!!...no..not now...jab you will come tab....aww....I love you too.....no I love you more.....srsly....soo sorry baby....Okey promise...hn hum shaadi krenge....yes....hn unn Mr.malhotra ko tum bol dena...obvlsy baby I am all yours!!...yess...Nandu promise!!!
Manik felt betrayed and something he never felt before ....he came to his room....and shutting the room...went in bathroom...and splashed cold water continuesly on his face trying to control his feelings....he was a guy who would never disclose his pain to anyone but would prefer drinking his pain....he tried everyone possible think to control his tears and at last decided to talk to nandu in morning....with a heavy heart he slept....whereas Nandu slept talking on phone with a beautifull smile on her face...
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Next morning....today decoraters and other related stuff to marriage was going to organised .....
Everyone was hell busy....Manik was trying ways to talk to nandu whereas Nandu was continuesly looking at her phone and door....
On dinning table everyone was having breakfast and discussing marriage stuff ....manan were sitting together....
Manik in nandu's ear whispered- I need to talk to you...after breakfast(he said it in a blank and cold tone which surprised Nandu because manik's voice always held some kind of patience and postivesness for her...
Nandu(whispering back)-what happened anything serious???...
Manik(sarcastically whispered)- oh..soo now you are not free to talk to me??...
Nandu got hell confused after listening to manik's this tone...she looked at him surprised and was about to continue when her phone beeped indicating a message....Nandu smiled seeing it whereas manik rolled his eyes....Nandu stood from her seat confusing everyone ...
Vik-princess atleast finish your breakfast....what happened??..
Nandu(excitedly)-dad I have a surprise...and trust me you all are gonna love it!!..
Cabir-what surprise Nandu???
Nandu-aare jeejs wait...let me come back...
Saying this she went outside. Everyone followed her to see what it was ...they saw Nandu hugging a guy ..manik's face fell seeing it and he turned his face to other side....
Nandu shouting -i missed you!!!...
The guy twirled her around and shouting in same tone...-i missed you doll!!!..
Manik frowned and looked at them with a hurt expression....whereas navya and abhi ran towards the guy and took him in a hug making Manik frown more!!!..
Navbhi-i missed you!!..
The guy chuckled at this and replied the same....after few minutes they broke the hug...now we can see a well built man in his late twenties looking hot and dashing!!and then entered a lady with a sweet and positive aura around her and soon she was pulled in a bear hug by three pairs of arms!!..
All in unison- we missed you bhabhi and Bhai!!!..
Manik's face lightened listening to Bhai!!!and a sweet smile adored his face!!!..
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Introducing Raman and ishita murthy
The cousin brother and bhabhi of the murthy siblings...a very soft and kind hearted couple..Raman is the son of vikram's late sister!!...he treats everyone as his kid specially Nandu as she is the smallest one whereas everyone finds a motherly warmth in ishita!!...
A voice came from behind screaming -i hate you all!!...
Now we can see a small boy of around 6-7 years standing with an angry face glaring at each and every elder present Thier!!
Introducing shravan murthy uff shravo...jaaan of every one hell possissive for his Nandu bua and angry from everyone for getting her married!!...
He pushed everyone near Nandu and hugged her which she responded with equal favour!!!..
Shravo-now tell me !!how is this Manik who dare to get married to my love!!.
Nandu chuckled on it and from finger pointed towards Manik....Manik was adorning them with a surprised and happy face and now everything which nandu was saying on phone was making sense to him!!...
Shravo walked towards Manik and from his pajama signed him to bend down....Manik did the same!!...
Shravo-soo you are gonna marry my love!!listen you!!only I have the right to marry her and get all her kisses!!..
Manik and nandu's face turned red listening to this while others smiled at his cute complaint and his love for his Nandu bua😍😍...ishita holding his ears...-shaitaan..atleast greet him!!and talk nicely he is elder then you!!..
Shravo-aa...maa...leave my ear...I was just warning him to stay away from Nandu bua!!...
Ishi-we will talk about it later!!chalo now go and meet everyone....
Soon everyone exchanged greetings and got comfortable and were talking....Manik was somewhere feeling guilty for doubting on nandu...
Cabir-waise Nandu who come you know that they are coming!!
Nandu-i was in contact with this chotu shaitaan from yesterday!!we were talking in every ten minutes!!..
Everyone smiled listening to it whereas manik felt more guilty!!...and again they started talking with everyone...Manik silently went towards Nandu and ask her to meet him!!Nandu was first surprised then remembered his morning talk and making an excuse left from Thier...Manik to left from Thier after few minutes!!
In nandu's room...
Nandu-what happened you were sounding different in morning too??.
Manik made her sit on bed and knelt down in front of her- I wanted to confess something...
Nandu frowned listening to it ...
Manik-i misunderstood you!!when I heard you talking to someone on phone yesterday on breakfast and when I saw you busy on your phone talking and even saying that you will marry that person I felt extremely hurt and betrayed ....I don't know why I felt soo...I though you cheated on me and that's why I talked rudely to you in morning....but after learning that you were all this while talking to shravo I am feeling guilty for misunderstanding you!! I am sorry!!...
Nandu was first confused but then a sweet smile came on her face!!..
Nandu- you know Manik you have a golden heart!!I mean you confessed me and told me everything soo honestly that I have no choice other than. Forgiving you!! You would have hided it too but you choose to reveal it which I really appreciate..!!I am truly blessed to have a Freind like you!!...
Manik smiled hearing to this both shared a eye lock which was soon disturbed by a knock it was navya telling her to come down because of some work!!!
Soon the day came to end ...next day was very important for them as it was day....
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