《Rab ne bana de jodi》Part 9
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Next morning Ishita wake up first and find her self sleeping in ramans arms resting her head on his chest she blushed and got up slowly so he doesn't wake up
She changed and wore a nice yellow short dress with her hair open diamond earrings and white shoes......she ordered breakfast for them and as room service arrived she woke up raman
Ishita~raman utto na....dekho breakfast be agaya....its 9 am
Raman~sone do na Ishita.....waise bhi abhi chote mile hain
Ishita~chote matlab
Raman pulled Ishita towards him
Raman~isa hain madam apka pati apko yaha honeymoon ke liye kai hain aur woh competition ke kiye.....taki ham dono aram se romance kari
Ishita blushed
Ishita~matlab you lied to everyone in home
Raman~no i lied only to you....waise kisi ka dil chorani ka irada hain kiya
Ishita~haan hain koi mr ravan kumar
Raman~acha
He put his arms around her and kissed her tightly wrapped his arms around her they broke the kiss due to door knocking
Raman~are yaar
Raman went and opened the door
Man~sir this is the car you booked yesterday and this is movie tickets
Raman~thanks
After that he changed and they had breakfast and started their journey of exploring they went shopping and sightseeing then went to the place where dance competition will be held
Man~sir whats competitor name
Raman~Mr and Mrs Bhalla
Man~oh acha please follow me
Raman~haan chalo
Both went with the man and they found a huge number of couples waiting for their turn
Raman~oh my god itne sare people
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Ishita~its a competition raman...waise half chale gai gain lets hope we got selected
Raman buts his arm around Ishita shoulder
Raman~madam tume dekh ki select kare gain
Ishita blushed hand hits his chest playfully
Man~mr and mrs bhala
Raman~chalo chalo
Man~sir mam app ko is song be dance karna hain
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Raman~oh ok
After the man left both were shocked
Ishita~raman its so fast song hena
Raman~haan but we can do it
Ishita~haan....acha chalo lets change itno dancing clothes
Raman~lets go
They wear changed and came back to their seats
**they were wearing like srk and anushka **
Women~mr and mrs bhala your turn
Both head inside
Man~hello....umm please don't be nervous just dance your heart our best of luck
Raman&ishita~ thanks
Both danced but their mind where dancing with each other they lost in each other that much that when song stoped they still were dancing and clapping of the judges made them come to reality
Women~i mean wow what can i say.....itna pyaar pehle mahi dekha main ne
Man~app dono ne acha dance kiya....aur in hope this love stays
Women~i like it really ke app ne dance karti wakt kisi ka dehan nahi kiya thats fab
Both smiled looking at each other
Man~your marriage is love marriage?
Raman~no sir it was arranged marriage but bepanah pyaar ban gaya
Ishita~mere liye toh woh love marriage thei.....kunki main inse beyhadh pyaar kiya tha
Man~such lovely couple best of luch.....see you in the competition tomorrow
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Thats it guys
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