《Prophesy of the Elven King》Not a chapter just a not from author (addressing minor changes)
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A commenter claimed Juren doesn't think because he broke a gods curse and he couldn't possibly know more than a god and that makes him overpowered. Well, first Juren's soul based magic is just unique and greatly suited to breaking curses. Second, he couldn't possibly know everything a god does or is involved in! To address this I've decided to change the god's description from "Dark God" to "Evil God". It leaves less room for assumptions because the all-powerful system is declaring that god as evil. I initially wanted to leave a gods morality out of their title because it leaves more room for doubt of other gods morality. Especially the ones people think are good but are truly douchebags. Also added a paragraph at end of the chapter explaining that Juren was not just curious and pitying Luna but also afraid she would kill herself out of depression as his secretary did. I added that to end of this, so you don't have to go back and read the full chapter if you don't want to.
"I admit my emotions may have gotten the better of me this time. I was afraid because the last person I knew who had experienced Luna's trauma killed herself. They sank into a dark depression... and in my past life, there was nothing I could do. Since I had the power to do something I felt I had to do something. Now I realized I a should have asked first before taking action. The fetus was originally soulless which meant it would be stillborn after removing the curse, but now it had a soul. Luna could very well be pissed off by this. Damn! I messed up! Well... here's hoping she ain't too mad at me."
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