《Poems of Rain》10. Let's Meet Outside
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This poem is based on a real-life accident, called the Sewol Ferry Tragedy.
In 2014, high school students were traveling to Jeju Island, South Korea. Their ship sank, 250 out of 325 students on board died.
In one of the live videos from inside the sinking ferry, a student did on-the-spot poetry, so I thought to complete his poem. Most of the lines in this poem are translations of words directly said by that person and from conversations he had with his friends. I arranged their words into a poem. Rest in peace.
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They are sailing this ship
But it's tilted at 85
I have a lot of things to do
I still hope to survive
They say that the rescue
will come in a while
But if we need to be rescued
Does it mean we can die?
The life vest is a savior
But it was made in 1994
One has a broken chain
Other is too tight on waist
I can hear the helicopter
The rescue at last
But there isn't enough time
For 300 down the mast
It feels like the Titanic
Should I sing the title song?
Call me a man without gravity
Cause all the angles feel wrong
We are still laughing
And playing mobile games
We'll be texting our parents
Till the end of our names
Why did I board
This cursed Sewol ship
My sister, I am telling you
Never go on a school trip
We used to fight a lot
But still thank you
And sorry to my brother
I am going without seeing you
I think you can hear this
The sound of splashing water
The footsteps of the ocean
Leaking into our room
And cold is this water
But my head is at 100 (deg C)
Cause the captain ran away
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And left us for the dead
Captain, I die because of you
You did nothing
All my silver dreams should
Haunt you forever
Today I make this video
But what can I do
About the Japanese animations
That I left incomplete
And to all those I know
I am sorry if I ever said wrong
And I love you a lot
My parents and friends at home
I don't know what will happen
I don't know where we'll go
But me and my friends
We'll do it together
You know, looking back
I've never done anything bad
And I'm not sure if I'll make it out
But let's all meet outside
They were told to
stay still and not move
But only those survived
who didn't follow the rules
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Some information on Sewol Ferry Tragedy.
This is South Korea's worst maritime disaster. On 16/04/2014, a ship en route from Incheon to Jeju Island sank. Out of 476 passengers and crew, 304 died in the disaster, including around 250 students from Danwon High School.
The captain and the crew basically saved themselves and left the children and other passengers. They were told to stay still and not move around and wait for instructions. But help came very late, they all died.
Of the approximately 172 survivors, more than half were rescued by fishing boats and other commercial vessels that arrived at the scene approximately forty minutes before the Korean Coast Guard.
The ship sank bcz of overweight cargo and illegal adjustments to ship design. Not only the government not provide help, they even tried to downplay the whole incident to save their reputation. The captain and the crew were all punished along with the falling out of the then government and jail to the President. All those people died bcz of greed and corruption.
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And it's 21st century, the passengers recorded videos and called their parents while the ship was sinking. They laughed and joked till the end, knowing they might die but had so much hope that they would survive.
Their parents could see the ship sinking on news. I feel like this is the saddest truth, the world saw them but the world didn't save them. When the bodies were found, many had their hands entwined with each other. They stayed together till the end.
The yellow ribbon movement was created in their memory and to seek justice.
I hope they all are resting in peace... I'm not sure if I believe in rebirths, but I hope that all the lost souls will find a new dawn.
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