《The Savior Of CHS》Chapter 7: A Formal To Remember
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You, the (Hu)Mane 6, and Spike had made it back to Carousel Boutique after cleaning the gym with every other student's help. You all held accomplished grins as you walked through the front door.
Fluttershy: I still can't believe we pulled that off.
Rainbow Dash: I can! We're awesome!
Rarity: Enough chatter everyone!
She said which got all of your attention.
Rarity: We need to get ready, and we need to look fabulous!
(Y/N): Well, seeing as how you're all getting ready, I'll just be on my way and get myself a Fall Formal suit.
Rarity: Wait! Before you go darling, take this with you.
She said before handing you a box that was big enough to hold a suit in.
Your eyes widened upon seeing this.
(Y/N): Is... is this for me?
She giggled.
Rarity: Why, of course it is darling! I wanted to make sure that you would look absolutely stunning tonight, so I made this just for you.
(Y/N): Well... thanks! But, how did you get my exact measurements?
Rarity: Oh, I may called your mother to ask her for them.
She said with a mischievous grin. That's when you remembered back about two weeks ago that your mom wanted to get your measurements. At that time, you assumed that she was doing it so that she could get you a suit herself, but now with Rarity telling you this, it was a rather big surprise for you. You couldn't help but smile at just how generous Rarity was.
(Y/N): I... I really don't have any other words besides... Thank you Rarity, sincerely.
Rarity: Consider it a gift for being you darling.
She smiled before giving you a hug. You reciprocated before you separated from each other.
Rarity: One more thing, the girls and I will be traveling by limo to get to the dance, are you going to join up with us or will you meet us at the school?
(Y/N): I think I'll meet you guys here. I've always wanted to ride in a limo! That way I'll look at people on the streets while saying to myself, "Yeah, I'm in a limo and you all aren't!"
Rarity: ** Very well then, we will meet you here tonight (Y/N).
(Y/N): Will do Rares. See you all later and thanks again for the suit.
She blushed at your pet name for her before she waved you goodbye as the others did as well before you made your way out the door.
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A few hours later, we see you in your room while looking at yourself in the mirror as you wore the suit that Rarity gave you. You couldn't help but admire it. It also came with a matching top hat.
(Y/N): (Y/N) my friend, you are one handsome devil.
You said to yourself before leaving your room and walking downstairs. Your parents were there as they both saw you come down and they grew huge smiles.
(M/N): Oh (Y/N) sweetie, you look absolutely handsome!
(F/N): Dang son, you remind me of a younger version of myself! In fact, you might just look even better than my younger self!
(Y/N): Heh, thanks you guys. Hey mom, Rarity told me that she apparently called you to ask you for my measurements.
She nodded.
(M/N): Yeah, she did. At first, I was curious as to why she was calling until she told me about the Fall Formal coming up and how she wanted to surprise you. That's when I decided to help her out by measuring you that one day.
(Y/N): Well, thanks for helping her out on that.
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(M/N): It was my pleasure sweetie.
She said while smiling.
(F/N): So (Y/N), is Twilight going to win the title of Fall Formal Princess?
(Y/N): She sure is, dad. She's pretty much already won at this point with how angry the students are at Sunset Shimmer. I'll eat my own hat if she still somehow doesn't win this.
(M/N): So, who'll you be going to the dance with?
(Y/N): I'm actually gonna meet Twilight and the other girls at Carousel Boutique and we're gonna take a limo over to the school.
(F/N): Wait, how many of them are there?
(Y/N): About six girls in total.
Your father's eyes widened with amazement.
(F/N): Six?! Your going to the Fall Formal with six girls?! Son, you have made me so proud!
You and your mom sighed at that.
(Y/N): It's not like that dad. We're all going as friends. Also, really dad? Really?
(M/N): Yes honey, really?
(F/N): Aw, come on honey! You and I both know that our son currently has a bunch of girls who are attracted to him. The only one of them who doesn't seem to be interested is Twilight and even then, five is still a big number.
(Y/N): Look, it's not that simple or great for me dad. It's honestly a hard decision to make for someone like me. They're all wonderful in their own ways and I honestly don't know who I would choose as a girlfriend.
They both nodded before your mom threw on a sympathetic look and spoke.
(M/N): Yes, we know (Y/N). Hopefully, you will make a decision that you're happy with in the end. We won't rush you or anything, right dear?
She asked your dad who sighed at that.
(F/N): Of course. Take your time (Y/N). Only make the decision when you feel that you're ready to make it.
You smiled at them.
(Y/N): Thanks you guys, Well, I should get going. I don't want to keep them waiting.
They nodded once more.
(M/N): Alright sweetie, have fun.
(F/N): See ya later, buddy.
(Y/N): I'll see you guys when I get home.
With that said, you walked out the door and made your way towards Carousel Boutique.
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After many moments, you finally arrived and walked inside. At first you didn't see the girls anywhere so you decided to call out to them.
(Y/N): Hey, girls! Where are you?
Rarity: Right here Darling.
You turned and you went to where the girls were and you came to a dead stop. A blush soon made its way to your face as you saw that Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Applejack were all wearing their Fall Formal dresses while posing. You had to admit, they looked quite beautiful in them.
(Y/N): ** My gosh, they look absolutely gorgeous! Thank you author for this wonderful gift you've bestowed upon me!
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While you had your personal thought, the girls looked at you and they soon began to blush while having their own thoughts as well.
(Hu)Mane 5: ** Wow! He looks so handsome!
You all quickly got rid of your blushes before you spoke up.
(Y/N): So, what do you all think?
Rarity: It's looks absolutely stunning on you (Y/N)! I knew you would look good in it!
Pinkie Pie: Yeah (Y/N)! You look super duper handsome!
(Y/N): Thanks! You all look incredibly beautiful in your dresses as well. I mean, every girl at school can only wish that they could be you right now.
They all blushed from your comment.
(Hu)Mane 5: T-Thank you (Y/N).
(Y/N): Wait, if you're all here, then where's Twilight?
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Twilight Sparkle: Right here.
She said before coming out of one of the changing rooms while wearing her dress.
Twilight Sparkle: So, what do you all think?
Rarity: Darling, you look simply amazing!
(Y/N): Yeah, it does look great on you Twilight.
She smiled at your compliment.
Twilight Sparkle: Thanks (Y/N).
(Y/N): So, is everyone ready to go?
Twilight Sparkle: I am.
The girls nodded in agreement.
(Y/N): Alright, let's get this party started!
With that said, you all left Carousel Boutique and saw the limo as it was just arriving. The driver lowered his window to look at you all.
Limo Driver: You all are heading to the Fall Formal at Canterlot High?
(Y/N): That'd be correct.
Limo Driver: Alrighty then. Climb on in and let's get going.
You walked over and opened the door.
(y/N): Ladies first.
Rarity: Oh my, such a gentleman!
She commented before the girls stepped inside before you went in after them as you all began heading towards CHS.
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Later that evening, we see you and the girls finally arriving at CHS as the girls got out and started heading towards the front doors. You stopped for a moment to fix your bowtie before you heard a car pull up. You looked and saw a black car with a lightning bolt on the sides. The driver stepped out and they were revealed to be Flash Sentry.
Flash Sentry: Hey, (Y/N)!
He called to you before he walked over to you and you fist bumped each other.
(Y/N): Hey, what's up Flash? That's a cool car you have.
Flash Sentry: Thanks. It took me quite a while for me to afford it. Anyways, you're looking pretty good.
(Y/N): Heh, thanks man. You don't look too shabby yourself.
Flash Sentry: Thank you. So, who are you with tonight?
(Y/N): I came here with the girls in a limo.
Flash Sentry: Really? You're quite lucky if you got to ride in a limo with a bunch of hot girls. But umm... where's Twilight?
You soon grew a smirk as you began looking around for her.
(Y/N): Umm... Oh! There she is.
You pointed to her as she was standing by the front door stairs while talking to Rarity. He was about to go to her before he hesitated.
(Y/N): Well, what are you waiting for? Go ask her if she wants to dance.
Flash Sentry: Dude, don't you remember her rejecting me?
You shook your head.
(Y/N): No actually, she didn't. Listen, I talked to her after she freaked out and she told me that when she said no to you, it wasn't that she was rejecting your offer or anything. She was saying no to something else entirely.
His eyes widened before a hopeful smile made its way onto his face.
Flash Sentry: Really? So, what was she saying no to then?
(Y/N): Eh, it's a personal issue. She didn't tell me the reason. Look, just go on up to her and ask her again. If she still says no, then at least you had the courage to ask her.
Flash looked at you for a moment or two before he threw on a confident look.
Flash Sentry: I will. Thanks for the talk, man.
You nodded.
(Y/N): No problem. Now, go get her tiger!
He nodded before he jogged over to her.
Flash Sentry: Uh, Twilight!
He called out which got her attention as he finally made it to her.
Flash Sentry: Look, I know you said "no" about going to the Fall Formal with me, but would you reconsider and at least have one dance?
She looked at him for a few seconds before she smiled.
Twilight Sparkle: I didn't say "no". I mean, I did, but... I didn't mean no, to you. I was... Well, what I mean is... yes. I'd love to dance with you!
He smiled at that before he linked arms with her. He took a moment to look back at you as you gave him a thumbs up. He nodded at you before he accidentally smacked right into one of the doors. You immediately facepalmed at that before he recomposed himself and they both walked inside. Suddenly, Pinkie appeared right next to you and latched onto your arm.
Pinkie Pie: Come on, (Y/N)! Let's go!
She immediately pulled on you as you were quickly brought inside while letting out an iconic yell.
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Just a few moments later, we see the dance as it's in full swing with everyone enjoying themselves while they were either talking to each other or they were dancing. Flash and his band, which was called Flash Drive, were up on stage rocking out. You were currently on the dance floor with the (Hu)Mane 6 which was going spectacularly before Twilight got a serious look.
Twilight Sparkle: Anybody see Sunset Shimmer?
Rainbow Dash: Maybe she was too embarrassed to show! She's gotta know you won by a landslide!
(Y/N): I don't know about that Rainbow. Sunset really wants Twilight's crown so she's gotta be planning something.
Fluttershy: What do you think she'll do?
(Y/N): No idea. But I'm sure that it's somewhere along the lines of being troublesome. Which is why I'm gonna go look around and see if I can find them anywhere.
Applejack: Ya sure about that (Y/N)?
(Y/N): I'm more than sure. Have fun girls but also be careful. We don't know what Sunset Shimmer could do now.
You said before you walked off. Soon after you had left, Flash and his band stopped playing and Principal Celestia stepped up on stage and grabbed the microphone.
Principal Celestia: First off, I wanna say how wonderful everything looks tonight. You all did a magnificent job pulling things together after the unfortunate events of earlier. And now, without further ado, I'd like to announce the winner of this year's Fall Formal crown.
She said before Vice Principal Luna stepped up on stage with a box before she opened it revealing Twilight's crown while also holding an envelope. She soon gave the envelope to Celestia.
Princess Celestia: The Princess of this year's Fall Formal is...
Everyone waited with much anticipation before Celestia opened the envelope and read the name.
Princess Celestia: Twilight Sparkle!
And with that announced, all of the students cheered which of course included the (Hu)Mane 6 as Twilight began to walk up to the stage. While this was going on, you were continuing your search for Sunset Shimmer or Snips and Snails until you eventually sensed the two morons and saw them.
(Y/N): ** There's dumb and dumber.
You thought before you threw on a sadistic smile and started playing the Jaws theme in your head and started sneaking towards them. Back with Twilight, she stepped up onto the stage and everyone cheered for her.
Principal Celestia: Congratulations Twilight.
She said as she placed the crown on Twilight's head while it glowed for a second. She took a moment to smile as her crown was finally back where it belonged.
Snips: HEY, LET US GO!
Everyone immediately stopped and looked to see you holding both Snips and Snails in a double headlock as Spike stood by your feet.
(Y/N): Really? There's two of you and one of me and I'm somehow strong enough to subdue the both of you? Quite sad, really. Anyways, you doing okay Spike?
He nodded.
Principal Celestia: (Y/N)! What is the meaning of this?
(Y/N): I am so glad you asked Principal Celestia. The reason for my sudden behavior is because I found these two idiots trying to steal Twilight's dog. Again, you really shouldn't do or say things out in the open when others can easily see or hear you.
Snips: L-Look, you got us all wrong man!
Snails: Yeah! We totally weren't going to steal Twilight's dog because Sunset Shimmer told us to do it!
Snips kicked Snails' ankle.
Snips: ** Shut up!
(Y/N): You know, it's quite pathetic. I mean, look at the both of you. You've been reduced to nothing more than Sunset's lap dogs by doing her bidding like trashing the gym or stealing Twilight's dog or spying on others when you really shouldn't. Honestly, I'm sick of it.
Principal Celestia: Snips, Snails, is what he said true?
The both of them glanced at each other while sweating before they sighed simultaneously.
Snips: Alright, Fine! We admit it! We did all of those things that (Y/N) mentioned on Sunset's behalf!
Snails: Yeah! She forced us to do all of that!
(Y/N): Listen you two, in order to get out of this predicament you only need to do one thing for me and don't worry, it's very simple. All you have to do is tell me... no... tell everyone here the reason why you decided that it would somehow be a smart decision to work for the bully queen of CHS.
Snails: She threatened us okay?! She said that she would post our most embarrassing secrets online if we didn't do what she said!
Snips: SNAILS!
Snails: We've already been caught Snips, so what's the point in hiding it?!
Snips: ** I guess you might be right about that...
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