《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 41: Final Part Of Jōnin Exam - Part 4: Finals, Sealed Away And Power.
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"Speak" people speak
'Thought' people thought
demon/demonic speak
'demon/demonic thought
"" Jutsu
-----Arena Floor-----
Naruto and Naruko appeared via shunshin. Naruto in black, silver wind and Naruko also in wind but in golden color. They stood in front of each other. Yamato looked at them and they nodded. He also nodded and shouted "Last fight in Jōnin Exam may begin!" and he jumped back as far as he can knowing this match don't end well.
After that Naruto disappeared and appeared behind her and went to kick her in head which she blocked but was blow out by force. She looked at her hands and saw their red. She looked at him and he smirked.
"You wanted me to go all out, right?" he said with fox grin. Everyone shivered at this knowing what he can did in previous phases in Jōnin Exam. She looked at him and smiled.
"Yes I know. But I didn't know that you will start that hard." she smiled at him and some seconds later her smile turned to also to fox grin. Again everyone shivered at her grin that looked like Naruto's.
Naruto took 'Raging Fox' stance and activated his Kitsune Eyes which looked like dark-blood. He grinned maniacally and looked at her and said in low demonic voice ""
Everyone was scared about Naruko. Even Naruko flinched a little. She also took 'Raging Fox' and lowered her gravity seals 10 times. He saw this and also lowered his seals 6 times. They looked in each others eyes and everyone can saw their Bloodlust. Then they started to run at each other.
Two of them stood and looked at each other then smiled. Everyone was shocked because of this fight.
-----Konoha Teams-----
Everyone stood there speechless. But Menma choose to break the silence.
"H-He is going to kill her?!" He shouted. And everyone looked at him.
"I don't think so." Shikamaru said.
"What do you mean?" Menma asked.
"First of all look at their faces. They are smiling. And second I don't know but all I know is that I have a bad feeling about it." Shikamaru answered.
Everyone looked at him worried then they turned their look at Naruto and Naruko.
-----Kage Stands-----
Minato and Kushina were scared about their daughter while everyone was the same thought 'They need to be sealed away.'
Then Raikage started to talk "Minato where do you plan on sealing them?"
Minato looked at him still scared a bit. "Yama no Kuni." Minato said.
"I see." Raikage said and nodded. Then everyone turned their looks at Naruto and Naruko.
-----Arena Floor-----
They stood there still smiling at each other. But then Naruto looked at Sasuke and nodded. Sasuke saw this as a signal to put three of them in Genjutsu. Sasuke activated his EMS and whispered "". Then Sasuke, Naruto and Naruko blacked out. Everyone was worried about Sasuke and Naruko but no one about Naruto. But when Naruto was about to black out he said "" (A/N: It means Suppress Healing.) And with that Naruto's, Naruko's and Sasuke's body didn't heal. All Konoha teams and every kages and their guards went to them in hurry and some even with fear. When they was near them Tsunade went to them and checked if everyone is alright. She sighed in relief when she checked Naruko and then went to Sasuke and also sighed in relief. She dragged Sasuke down and laid him besides Naruko. She then looked at Naruto with fear knowing that she need to check him if he is okay. And when she was about to check him Minato interrupted her.
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"What?" She asked confused.
"Leave him be. We need to take them now." Minato said in serious voice.
"Where Yondaime-sama?" Sakura asked worried about Sasuke.
"To Yama no Kuni." Minato said.
"Why there?" Sakura asked even more worried.
"They will be sealed there for the rest of their life." Minato said a bit sad knowing that he need to seal her only daughter.
Everyone was shocked besides kages and Menma.
"W-What?" Sakura asked crying "W-Why?"
"They are threats to Shinobi World." Minato said.
"I understand that is only that demon was sealed..." Sakura said pointing at Naruto. "But why Sasuke-kun and Naruko?"
"Like I said that are threats. Naruto was teaching Naruko for whole month and all of you saw how strong she is. She was that fast that even I can't track her movements. No one can. And about Sasuke I think that Naruto said something to him when he activated that privacy seal and Sasuke choose to follow him." Minato explained.
Everyone was speechless.
"Kakashi, Asuma, Gai. Take them we will move immediately." Minato said.
"H-Hai!" Kakashi, Asuma and Gai said and take them on their backs. Then Minato started to move towards gates and everyone followed him. Now they was in a trip towards Yama no Kuni. But no one spotted a person in black cloak with red clouds that was observing whole exam and disappeared in a vortex.
-----Somewhere In Yama no Kuni Deep In Mountain-----
They arrived in their destination. Sasuke, Naruto and Naruko sit in the middle of the big room chains all over their arms, legs and torso. Many Chakra Suppressed seals all over their bodies. Everyone who went on that trip looked at them.
"Was that really necessary, Minato?" Kushina asked sad.
"To be honest I don't really know but that was our only option. If there was other way I will choose other option." Minato said sad when he looked at his daughter and son.
And then all three opened their eyes. They started to look around and tried to move but can't they spotted chains and seals on them. Then they turned they look at each other and then spotted other Ninjas.
"So you finally awake?" Minato said.
"What is this?" Naruto said with anger.
"Seals that you can't heal and escape." Minato said.
"Where are we?" Sasuke asked.
Sakura was about to say something but Minato place hand on her mouth and looked at her with look that said 'Don't say them anything.' She nodded and he take off his hand of her mouth.
"That is none of your business." Minato said.
Naruto's eyes changed to purple color for longer but no one noticed that.
"So you just abandon me just like Naruto?" Naruko asked with anger.
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"I didn't want to do this but because of you three Shinobi World might be in danger." Minato said sad.
"Why?" Naruko asked with more anger and her hatred towards here family and village rise faster.
"Only if you didn't go with your brother I might change my mind towards you two." Minato said and looked at Naruko. "And for you..." he looked at Sasuke and said "I don't know what he told you in that privacy seal but I had feeling that you could go with him against village or whole Shinobi World."
Naruto's darkness emotions rise. His eyes covered hairs and he can saw that he was sitting in his own blood because of injures that didn't heal. He saw his eyes morphed and his hairs turned whole black.
'Kitsune Eternal Mangekyou Rinne-Sharingan I see. That fuzzball didn't even tell me that my eyes can be even more powerful! Sorry dad but I'm second Madara. Haha.' Naruto thought to himself.
"Dad?" Manma said.
"Yes Menma?" Minato asked.
"I think I have a other option but this is only for Naruto." Menma said and smirked.
"And what is it?" Minato asked curious.
"Since he is sealed here why don't we extract Kyūbi from here and seal it in me?" Menma smirked.
"Hmm... Since we didn't have any Bijū we can do that." Minato said. Everyone was shocked at that.
"But he will die after that." Tsunade said.
"I know and it hurts me that I need to kill my own son." Minato said.
Then everyone started to hear chuckles. Everyone turned their look at Naruto and everyone was shocked that his hair are now black. Then his chuckles turned to full evil laughing. Everyone flinched.
"W-What's so funny demon?!" Manma said scared a little.
"You can try extract Kyūbi from me." he said still looking down.
Everyone was shocked at that comment.
"W-What?" Minato asked in disbelief.
"But I will tell you this I'm already stronger then Kyūbi." Naruto smirked evilly.
"I-Impossible." Kushina said frightened.
"Also you can't extract him from me. I modified your seal Minato that no one have access to it and that no one can extract him from me. If you want Kyūbi power you need to seal me in that bitch." He said and looked at Menma with his Kitsune Eyes that was much more bloodier and darker before deactivating his Kitsune Eternal Mangekyou Rinne-Sharingan.
Everyone started at him in disbelief no one wanted to hear that or accept that.
"But then still. He can die because of that and I will be free again." He said and grinned maniacally at them. "No one have that strong seal to contain me and no one can create one. This is whole different power then Kyūbi's. Do you still want to do this?" he asked with his fox grin.
"Ye-" Menma was about to say but Minato place his hand on his mouth and said "No I can't loose another children. But I have a question. Why your hairs changed to black?" Minato asked.
"None of your business, Yondaime." Naruto said with venom that cause everyone shiver.
Minato looked down knowing he lost his son for good along with his daughter. "Let's go everyone." He said and started to leave.
"Yondaime." Naruto said and Minato turned his head to him "When I will be free..." his voice turned to more evilish and demonic ""
Minato stood there for some seconds paralyzed from fear but he snapped from it and started to leave again "Let's go. I don't want to be here anymore." Minato said and everyone nodded. Everyone then looked last time one their faces and leaves.
-----Some Minutes Later-----
There was silence in a chamber. Naruko and Sasuke looked at Naruto who was looking at his own blood under his legs.
"Naruto?" Naruko said.
He turned his head to her "Yes?"
"Why your hairs turned black?" Naruko asked.
"It's because of my darkness inside of me. You can say that I will be there for the rest of my life. But look at your hair. Yours also turned much darker." Naruto said looking at her hair with Sasuke. She looked at them and saw that they turned to more blood-red than gold.
"How much we need to wait for Itachi and that Tobi figure?" Sasuke asked and Naruto sighed and looked down.
"Maximum 5 months. But I have a feeling they can be here faster." Naruto said and smiled.
"If you say so." Sasuke said. "But now what?" he asked.
"We will wait then we will introduce you to Demon Foxes and train you." Naruto said.
"Okay." Sasuke answered and three of them looked down thinking about only one thing REVENGE ON WHOLE SHINOBI WORLD.
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