《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 14: Changed, Something Unexpected, Present With Power And Informations.
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"Speak" people speak
'Thought' people thought
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'Thought' demon/demonic thought
A/N: Hello world! If you see errors, please write. I will accept any constructive criticism. Please enjoy!!! I don't own Naruto.
-----Five Years In Prison-----
Naruto have now 18. His skin is lighter than before just like his hairs and brows. His heair and browns are now light gray. Also his hair are longer. His hair style reminded of Uchiha Madara. His eye lost their oceanblue color and changed into gray. He only wore blood-red sandals and black ANBU pants becaouse his jacket is too beg for him. Now he is training. 'Hmm... My chakra control is at Kage level if even higher... Just like how much chakra I have by myself...' his thoughts interrupted snore. 'Snore... There is no one in this place besides me... And... KURAMA!!!' Naruto yelled in his mind.
Kurama woke up and looked around 'KIT?!?!' Naruto heard Kurama's voice cheered likea child that have candys. Naruto calmed down and sits in meditation position.
-----Naruto's Mindscape-----
Naruto opened his eye and sees Kurama.
"OI~! KURAMA! OVER HERE!" Naruto shouted.
Kurama looked at Naruto and sees scars all over his body. But the scar on his eye caught his eyes.
"Yeah. I know. But you must tell this style on me isn't bad." Naruto said with fox grin.
'Oh, this smile again.'
"Kurama? Can you heal my eye? But I don't want to heal scars but to have them as a souvenir."
"That's okay. Besides we can always talk about what happened there where i was alone by myself."
"Okay, Kurama. See you soon."
-----Naruto's Cell-----
Naruto opened his eye a he can feel Kurama's chakra going to heal his left eye. 'Time for training...' with that thoughts Naruto starts training.
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-----Five Years And Four Months In Prison-----
Naruto is training his style 'Raging Fox'. His speed is faster then Raikage without chakra in feet. But if he will use chakra he will be faster then his 'father' Yondiame Hokage. All of a sudden Naruto's eyes starts to hurt. 'KURAMA!!! WHAT'S GOING ON?!?!' Naruto shouted to Kurama.
'I DON'T KNOW! COME TO YOUR MINDSCAPE!' Kurama said in Naruto's mind. Naruto did as Kurama said.
-----Naruto's Mindscape-----
"Kurama. What is going on to my eyes?!" Naruto laid on the floor and his hands are on eyes due to unbelievable pain.
Naruto opened his eyes and Kurama is shocked.
"What is it?"
"Morphed? In what?"
Naruto is shocked he have Sharingan. He woke upfrom shock.
"But?"
"Yeah. So what abilities they have?"
"Can I obtain Kitsune Mangekyou Sharingan?"
"Kurama. If you think I am still this same like over 5 years ago then you are wrong."
"I killed 204 men in this prison."
"They organized coups on my life."
"It's okay. Now let's search for memories."
Naruto starts searching his mind for the worst memories he can find.
-----Five Years And Eight Months In Prison Still His Mindscape-----
Naruto was watched for over four months his beating, that he was torched, raped, almost killed. That cause unbelievable pain in his eyes.
"Kurama. I think i obtained Kitsune Mangekyou Sharingan."
Naruto do as he said.
"Thanks. But I need to know something about this eyes."
"Can I obtain also Kitsune Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan?"
"How I can obtain them?"
"Then I will never obtain them." Naruto said with sad smile.
"Only one precious to me is you. And you can't die."
'Should I tell him that if 100% my chakra come back we will fuse??? I can't... If he knows, then he won't be able to obtain Kitsune Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan... I will tell him when chakra come back... Four months and we will become one my only friend... I'm sorry that you will need to be alone from then...' Kurama thoughts to himself. Kurama do as he said. he stopped in one moment 'WHAT?!?! HE WORKED IN FORGE?! Now he can be a lot stronger.
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"Yea. And what?"
"I think... Yes."
"What's the name?" Naruto asked with curiosity.
"If this can be last one bars in Shinobi World this need to be expensive."
"What do you mean?"
"Power levels?"
"Hmm. I will try to make this sword. But can I made other seals?"
"Good. I will go train. See you later."
-----Naruto's Cell-----
'Oh shit! I forget to ask him something.' Naruto thoughts. 'Oi. Kurama, I need to ask you something.'
'What is it, Kit.'
'When your 100% chakra come back to you.'
'I think four months.'
'Really?!'
'Yes. Now go train.'
'Hai, hai.'
Naruto starts training with his 'Raging Fox' and 'Calm Gorilla' styles. 'He really is something... To create own style in such age... I really proud of him.' Kurama smiled.
A/N: First of all I know I used 2 time this same photo and in last one only changed his eyes. I'm really sorry but this photos was the best I have. This is second Chapter today and I going to do another one. Tomorrow I think i will write only 1 chapter becouse of work. Sorry and wait for another chapter. SAYONARA AND SEE YOU SOON.
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