《Naruto: Beginning of Hatred》Chapter 10: Shocked Informations And One-Eyed Fox.
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-----One Year In Prison-----
Naruto now is 14 years old. He is one full year in Blood Prison. Few days ago he started training about his own style. It's called 'Raging Fox'. Naruto's conception about this style was speed and agility. Attacks was unpredictable just like raging animal is attacking randomly. This is what he want. He trained his speed at first place. Strength is in second place. Of course his strength is very good due to work in forge near 9 months. Due eleven months in prison, Naruto managed to killed 73 men.
Naruto is now 5'6 height. His muscles is now visible just like his scars over his body. Some are short and some are long. But still one scar is visible much more then other ones. His left eye. He wore black dark-red jacket with hood and without sleeves with stripes like whirl to end in the circle where in is kanji. On back of jacket is placed kanji 'NINE' in blood-red circle, but in front is placed kanji 'FOX' also in blood-red circle. Black ANBU pants and blood-red ninja sandals.
Coups on his life are now more often then before. Groups have about 10-15 men. Naruto always managed kill at least half group. But he also is injured but not that much like the rest of groups. He tried his best to not kill every one because of Mui's request and that he don't want to be locked in isolation ward for another weeks.
-----Mui's Office-----
Someone is knocking.
"Come in!" Mui answered.
"You called for me, Mui?" someone asked.
"Ahh... Naruto. So you came?"
"Yes. What do you want? I have work to do, you know?" Naruto answered coldly and irritating.
"Yes I know. This is why a called for you."
Naruto is confused. "About my work?" Mui nodded. "What about it?"
"I need more weapons and armours." Mui said.
"I'm weaponsmith and you know I can't make armour."
"I know very well. But I know you make good weapons. So I have proposition." Mui said and caught Naruto's attention.
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"What proposition?" Naruto asked with curiosity.
"I know you can make near 5 swords per day. But I want that you make at least 10 swords per day. I know how many time you make 5 swords so from now on you will be 9 hours working in forge." Mui said.
"Okay, but what will I get in return?"
"I know you train much after work so I can give you one training ground to your disposal. Also you will receive more food because of work. Do you accept?" Mui asked.
Naruto thinking about this for few minutes 'Maybe I can make a better deal.' Naruto thought and fox grin appear on Naruto's face. Mui of course sees this grin 'What are you planning, Naurto?'
"I think I have a better deal." Naruto said.
"I listening."
"First of all I accept your deal, but I want to add few things."
"What things are you talking about." Mui asked worried.
"I can make maximum 15 swords but in return you give me a cell beside training ground. I don't want to go to my cell about midnight only to receive beatings by guards."
"Hmm..." Mui thinking about this for few minutes. "You have a deal, Naruto." Mui reached out and after a while Naruto did the same after shaking hands in honor of entering into a deal. "You will start from tomorrow. To that time you are free." After that Naruto leave to his new training ground.
-----Naruto's Training Ground-----
Naruto is now at his training ground and looked around. To his surprise this is large room without some kind of weapons. Just simple dummies and other simple things. 'Hmm... So here I will be training. I wonder how is Kurama.' Naruto thought and all of a sudden he remembered what plan with Kurama he made. 'I need to check if I can use at least a little bit chakra.'
Naruto start channeling his chakra to his feet and hands. To his surprise he can use chakra. He added more chakra until he can feel pain in his chest due to this seal he have. Naruto now have a fox grin 'Hehehe... So I can add this to my style. And also create a new one.' with that thoughts Naruto starts training. After training he went to his cell and go to sleep to rest for tomorrows work.
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-----Two Years In Prison-----
Naurto is now in canteen eating his meal. His clothes didn't change besides that they are bigger. On nearly two years Naruto managed to kill 157 men. He also acquire new nick name 'One-Eyed Fox' due to his scar and his fighting style he use often then other one. Yes, Naruto managed to create his second style base on little chakra that no one can feel or detect. His second style was 'Calm Gorilla'. This style based only on strength and time reaction. This style is based mainly on counterattacks. He use little chakra to speed up his movements to evades hits. Then he counter in full strength but if opponent is stronger then he also use chakra to add more strength to his punches.
Someone is coming towards him. He ignored him and begin to eat his meal. That person sit besides him. In canteen Naruto and mysterious person can hear whispers.
"Oi. You see some one sit besides One-Eyed Fox." one prisoner said.
"Yeah I see. One wrong word or thing he do and he is dead." second said.
"It's lame that he is from yesterday and going to die today." another one said.
-----Naruto's Table-----
"What do you want?" Naruto asked emotionless.
"Hello, I'm Jack. What's yours?" the mysterious man named Jack asked.
"I asked once. What. Do. You. Want?!" Naruto rise his voice that some people starts shivering.
"How rude from you. You are from Konoha?" Jack asked.
In that moment in Prison everyone can feel Naruto's killing intent. They who are nearby have hard time breathing including Jack. He laid on floor breathing heavily. "Don't you ever speak about this villa" Naruto said in demonic voice.
"Yes... Mister... Can you... Stop... Release your... Killer Intent?" Jack asked politely knowing next time he asked about this he might die.
"Ok you don't die from that direction so you can live." Naruto stopped release his killer intent. "But don't you ever speak about this village. Understood?" Jack stood up and nodded.
"Good. I don't want to kill new ones here. My name is Naruto no Yōko." Naruto said.
"Naruto?? Hmm I know I heard this name before but where?" Jack thinking about from where he can remember Naruto.
"Two years ago. I failed mission to bring back Sasuke Uchiha."
In that moment he reminded Naruto. He is Kyūbi Jinchūriki. His eyes widened of fact that he is still alive.
"Y-you a-are a-alive?" He asked scared because of Naruto. He too was cheering that Naruto was sent to Blood Prison.
"Yes. Yes I am." Naruto answered eating his meal. "So how is in this village?"
'Should I tell him about Sasuke. AHHH!!! Screw this!' Jack thought. "Sasuke..." Naruto looked at him with curiosity what he was going to tell. "He is back... He managed to kill Orochimaru and Itachi... Obtain Mangekyou Sharingan... Take his eyes... Transplant his eyes... And obtain Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan... People cheering that he is back and kill two missing ninja from Konoha... Tsunade still is Hokage... And everyone think you are dead..." Jack said and wait for Naruto's reaction.
After few minutes in silence, Naruto starts to speak " When he came back?" Naruto asked.
"Four days ago."
"So... You telling me... That traitor... Just come back... Like nothing?" Jack nodded nervously. Naruto's anger starts to rise also he starts release his killer intent and bloodlust. "" Naruto said in demonic voice that everyone is now shivering. At this moment every guards including Mui is in canteen
"Naruto!!! What is going on here?!?!?!" Mui yelled at him.
Naruto starts to calm down. "eceived some information. Everything is Okay. I didn't kill anyone." Naruto said and starts eat his meal. "Leave me alone and don't bother me ever again, Jack." Naruto said to him with death glare.
"H-Hai." Jack starts to run away from him. Then everyone starts doing what they did before. Naruto after meal starts walking towards forge to work.
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