《Avatar the last airbender the last stand》In to the spirit world
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Aang held the reins guiding Appa as Katara sat beside him head laying on his shoulder as Sokka sat in the saddle looking out for fire nation soldiers. Sokka- look what is that? Katara- it looks like a scar on the earth. Aang looks sadly at it. They land and Sokka investigates. Sokka- fire nation those evil savages! Katara looks at Aang. Katara- Aang? Aang- I should have been here to stop this. Katara- you can't be everywhere and I think I have something to cheer you up. Katara throws a acorn that hits Aang in the head. Aang- ow how is that suppose to cheer me up? Sokka- it cheered me up. Katara hits Sokka with one too. Sokka- ok I deserved that. Katara- look at it Aang. Aang- it is a acorn? Katara- yes so that means the first will grow back and all the animals can return to their homes. Aang- thanks Katara. Katara kisses Aang. Katara- your welcome. Old man- excuse me but are you the Avatar? Aang looks at Katara who nods. Aang- yes I am. Old man - please my village really needs your help. The follow the old man to the village where he introduces them to the governor. Aang- so how many I be of assistants? Governor- every night our village is attacked by a spirit named hie bi and it takes one of our own with the winter solidest coming up I fear it may get worst. Katara- why would it get worst at the solidest? Governor- because that is when the spirit and physical worlds are closest together, please Avatar you are the great bridge between our worlds you have to help us. Aang- I will. Katara- Aang can we talk? They walk over to a window by themselves. Katara- can you help these people? Aang- I don't know but I have to try. Later Aang is waiting for hie bi to show up. Aang- its sun down where are you? Spirit I ask that you leave this village in peace. Aang looks waiting for something anything a sign but still nothing. Katara- what is he doing? Sokka- I think he sense something its to quite he knows its not over. Aang- where are you? Hie bi appears and growls. Aang- hello hie bi I am the Avatar..... Hie bi tries to attack the village but Aang sends s gust of wind blowing it away. Aang- no! Why are you attacking? Sokka and Katara watch as hie bi growls and slaps Aang knocking him across the village. Katara- no! Aang! Sokka- that's it he needs help! Sokka takes off to help Aang. Katara- Sokka wait. Aang gets up and lets out a bit of a growl himself. Aang- so thats how its going to be. Sokka runs out and throws his boomerang at hie bi. Sokka- hey hie bi over here. Aang- no Sokka get out of here i got this. Sokka runs at hie bi with his club but hie bi picks him up and takes off. Aang- no! Katara- Sokka! Aang opens his glider and takes off after hie bi to save Sokka. Aang- Sokka! Sokka- Aang just a little closer hurry. Aang reaches for Sokka's out stretched hand but just as they touch hie bi and Sokka disappear. Aang- no! Katara sits by the gate entering the village, she is holding Sokka's boomerang gripping it to her chest as if holding her brother close to her heart. Old man- I am sure they are ok. Katara- I hope so. Aang is slowly coming into view looking sadly and regretful. Aang- Katara I am so sorry I failed. Old man- I would be shocked if the Avatar returned with out him. Katara- I know, he is probably doing everything in his power to save Sokka and stop hie bi, but still I am scared. Aang- Katara I am right here. Katara- if you don't mind I will wait right here for them. Old man- of course. Aang- wait a minute you can't see or hear me am I in the spirit world? Katara- Aang where are you? Aang- right here sweetie. Aang reaches out to touch her on the shoulder but his hand goes through her. Katara jumps feeling as if something had touched her but sees nothing there. Aang- I am in the spirit world! Katara- hello is someone there? Aang- yes! Katara looks scared but still sees nothing. Katara worriedly - Aang? Aang- yes its me come on sweetie I know you can figure it out. Aang walks over and kisses Katara's cheek. Katara spins around looking for Aang she felt the kiss and knew it was him. Katara- Aang! Aang grabs her hand holding it. Katara doesn't move this time but looks at her hand she can't see nothing but can feel that something is there. Katara- Aang is that really you? Aang squeezes her hand gently. Katara- can you talk to me? Aang lets go. Katara- so thats a no? Aang grabs her hand again and squeezes gently. Katara is figuring out this way of communication. Katara- can you see me? Aang squeezes her hand gently. Katara- is Sokka with you? Aang lets go. Katara- why can't I see you did hie bi do this? Aang grabs her hand and squeezes gently. Katara- is there any way I can help? Aang lets go. Katara- I know you can figure this out , I love you. Aang kisses her on the lips for a few seconds then pulls away. Aang turns to see a spirit dragon. Aang tries to airbend but can't. The dragon reaches out at touches Aang on the head. Images fly through Aang's mind , of a comet , of at temple where there is a statue of Avatar roku and how on the solidest Aang can talk to him. Aang- I understand but right now I need to save my friend he was taken by a spirit named hie bi , is there any way you can help? The dragon leans down for Aang to get on, he does and the dragon takes flight. The dragon takes Aang back to his body which is on top of a statue of a panda. The dragon nods to the statue. Aang- I don't understand. The dragon touches Aang on the head again and he sees images of the forest being burned and hie bi get upset over it. Aang- thank you. Back in his body Aang returns to the village. Katara- Aang! Aang- I know how to get Sokka back and why hie bi is attacking. Katara starts to speak but a noise stops her. Aang- hie bi is coming you better get inside I got this. Katara nods then goes inside. Aang spots hie bi. Aang- stop I know why your upset but the forest will grow back sees. Aang holds up a acorn. Hie bi turns back into a panda and grabs the acorn then leaves. All the missing people reappear. Katara- Sokka! Katara hugs Sokka. Aang- guys Avatar Roku wants to talk to me but to do so I have to go to this temple. Sokka pulls out of his sister's embrace. Sokka- ok what the problem? Aang- its in the fire nation. Sokka and Katara both look worried. Katara- well do what we have to we are in this together. Aang- but..... Sokka- oh no your heard her together! Aang smiles. Aang- I knew I could count on both of you.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. 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