《The Successor》1 - A Profound Disturbance
Advertisement
The Immortal God Emperor is dead.
The announcement sent ripples of shock through the Four Worlds. A being that represented the height of cultivation, who was blessed by the gods, the demons, and all manner of man and beast alike. A hundred thousand years of prosperity under his reign, and how he was just gone?
The loss was felt, like something had been ripped from the very fabric of the worlds. There was a gaping hole, and try as they might, no one could fill it.
Instead, Nine Elders of the great Clans banded together to restore the balance of the universe, and in doing so they came across a whisper of power left by the Immortal God Emperor, a message to the people he had for so long ruled.
"My Successor will come in time".
How much time was uncertain, but the reassurance that there would be a Successor was enough. The Nine Elders, knowing that there would be many who would step forward to take the Immortal God Emperor's place, each took one of the nine remaining Tools of the God Emperor. Each tool was imbued with the ability to channel God Emperor's immense power, and thanks to the power they each possessed, spirits with their own will inhabited each item. These spirits may give their loyalty to others, but the only beings who would earn the loyalty of all of them was the God Emperor and his Successor. Originally there had been twelve items, but three had been lost with the God Emperor's death; the Crown, the Seal and the Talisman.
The remaining items that were split among the Elders were the Sword, the Pen, the Scroll, the Armour, the Goblet, the Dagger, the Bow, the Hairpin, and the Necklace.
The Nine Tools that remained held Will enough to understand the plan of the Nine Elders, and hence chose one each as their temporary masters, allowing them access to a portion of their powers. With the Tools lending them Divine Power, the Nine Clans began to rule over the universe in place of the God Emperor.
Advertisement
And so, the Universe waited for the Successor to be born.
And waited.
And waited.
…and waited…
…until the Universe moved on, and the Immortal God Emperor became legend.
It was at this time, when the Four Worlds had found new and exciting paths beyond anything the original Immortal God Emperor could have perceived, that a great disturbance was felt. Like a ripple on a lake, barely anyone noticed it but those who were in a state of high sensory concentration, and of those, there were few who could interpret it for what it was.
The Nine Clans mobilised, determined to go to the source and discover it. For something to cause a disturbance so profound in the fabric of the worlds, it was surely worth possessing.
They were led in the hours that followed to a city called Laou Ren in the Kuran Empire of the Mortal World. It was a B Class City, a population of five million, and a few points of note for the average tourist.
The Clans searched everywhere, the antique market, the cultivation schools, the greatest points of Feng Shui in the city. But while there were some items and individuals of minor note, nothing seemed to resonate in the same way the disturbance had.
Morning arrived, and the mobilisation of key members of all Nine Clans caught the attention of the Media. Rumours of something of great significance occurring in Laou Ren abounded. And while the world turned its attention to the Nine Clans, a common, unremarkable mortal couple drove away from the city with proud and loving smiles on their faces.
"Well, with a short delay we'll be back home in Nui Dan this evening," said the man.
"Oh, but wasn't it a marvellous delay? Our little Kai Lan just couldn't wait to arrive into the world!" the woman gushed, looking over her shoulder at the little bundle of blankets nestled in a baby car seat behind her.
Advertisement
"Couldn't wait is right, nearly gave me a heart attack on the road," the man grumbled, a smile twitching on his lips.
"Oh, stop," the woman huffed, "You're as happy as I am".
"I wasn't denying that," the man smiled.
The couple continued to drive away from the city towards their home town, blissfully unaware that the son they had just had, a week before his due date, was in fact the very disturbance that those great clan figures had been searching for.
They were also unaware that the kind old man who had been in the hospital for his own son who had been in an 'accident' had been fully aware of the kind of child they had had. His cultivation was quite high, and while not on par with the Elders of the Nine Clans, he was not to be laughed at for his accomplishments.
With a kind and generous appearance, he had blessed the young couple, and bid them to have their son wear the lucky seal that he had used for his children when they were young.
"I had my son wear it for his first two years and he was never sick, nor was there anything of concern about his body. Later my daughter was the same, and my second son," the old man had claimed.
"Oh, then we can't possibly-"
"I insist, with a name like Shan Kai Lan, and the aura I perceive upon him, your son will go on to achieve great things, and I only wish to help him along," the Elder had insisted, "I'll tell you what, two years from now, I will come to visit and retrieve the necklace, that way I can see for certain that it has worked. If it hasn't, at least you entertained the beliefs of this old man".
The couple had seen no reason not to take him up on his offer. But the necklace did more than simply block out disease. The necklace was a powerful talisman that suppressed the aura of the wearer, making them invisible.
"Father," the Elder's son had asked as they watched the couple leave with smiles, "Why give the Aura Concealing Jade to an unknown family?"
"Mark my words, son, that boy will grow up to be one of the greatest cultivators in the Four Worlds," said the Elder, "I am simply making sure he survives that long, and if he does, he will be grateful for our favour, and we will have gained a powerful ally".
"Indeed," the Elder's son replied, "Should I prepare a protection detail?"
The Elder shook his head, "No, we want no attention drawn to them, not before the boy is ready. Send only one of the Owls to watch from a distance".
"Yes, Father".
Advertisement
- In Serial245 Chapters
The Path of Ascension
The story follows Matt, a young man planning to delve the rifts responsible for the monsters that destroyed his city and killed his parents. His dreams are crushed when his Tier 1 Talent is rated as detrimental, and no guild or group will take him. Working at a nearby inn, he meets a mysterious and powerful couple. They give him a chance to join The Path of Ascension, an empire wide race to ascend the Tiers and become living legends. With their recommendation and a stolen skill, Matt begins his journey to the peak of power. *** Chapters will now be MONDAY and FRIDAY AT 4:00pm EST. This is a mix between LitRPG and Xianxia. It's like a car that looks like a LitRPG with dungeons and skills, but the interior and engine are all Xianxia. So no blue boxes and clicking +’s to get stronger. *** What you won't see in this novel: Bland protagonists. Bland love interests that immediately fall in love with the MC. Murder hobos who kill entire families and clans for looking the wrong way at somebody. Pacifist MC’s who wouldn't kill a single person to save millions. Cartoonish villains who are bad just to be bad. *** What to expect: A MC who acts rationally. World building that has more depth than ‘strong people 'stronk'. There will be no rules only benefiting the strong and no rule changes as they see fit. An empire that actually cares for its citizens. People who act and talk like real people. A magic system and progression system that are logically and internally consistent. Realistic fight scenes.
8 666 - In Serial8 Chapters
181: Dark Vision
Task Force 181 was established in 2018 under Mr Wojtek Wojciechowski’s direction. Everything was obscure until the new director took over. From then on, everything changes, members of the 181 are no longer carry out routine duties. Gradually, they realized, they would be under tremendous pressure from many sides, and their responsibility would be exceedingly influential. Will 181 fulfil the responsibility? Or will they fail and die in dishonour?
8 93 - In Serial11 Chapters
Recovery: Ignis
My Name is Keiren. Keiren Ignis. At least that was what IT told me. Now all I have to do is figure out everything else. No simple task when you're an amnesiac. Honestly, why do I know these words and what they mean, but I have no idea who or even what I am. Except for what IT told me. IT is whatever is causing the wierd pop-up screens that appear in my vision when I think about certain things. Seems like I'm going to have to play by ITs rules until I get a better understanding of everything else. This is my first attempt at writing anything. To be honest I'm not 100% sure as to what direction this will take. GLHF It became sci-fi. There will probably be a romantic subplot at some point. There will be some implied sexual content, but nothing more explicit than kissing will be written. Will try to release at least one chapter a week, but there could be none, or possibly 3 or 4.
8 136 - In Serial16 Chapters
My Precious Flower
Male Isabela Madrigal x Female ReaderBased on the Disney movie Encanto.(Y/n) = Your Name(H/l) = Hair Length(H/c) = Hair Color(E/c) = Eye Color(S/c) = Skin ColorI OWN NOTHING!!! ALL RIGHTS GO TO DISNEY!!!
8 201 - In Serial16 Chapters
Dark Percy One Shots *NOT ACCEPTING NEW REQUESTS AT THE MOMENT*
A series of one shots and extra stuff from my PJO/HP crossover series. *Basically a bunch of character studies for my version of dark Slytherin Percy*
8 172 - In Serial7 Chapters
How To Get Reads, Votes, and Comments - A Guide
How do I get more reads, votes, and comments?If you find yourself asking that question, then I have some answers for you. What can you do to reach out to readers and potential readers? How can you encourage readers to comment and vote? What are all the different ways you can promote your stories?This #1 ranking guide is written by a Wattpad ambassador and especially geared for new Wattpad authors. Lots of tips, advice, and personal opinions await you - including everything thing I've done to promote my own Watty's finalist and winning stories - but only if you turn the page.Reader testimonial by @AyushiPandey-- 'I read your guide for Wattpad success when I first started writing my story last year in August, and now it has been an entire year when I stumbled upon it again. I just have to say, I loved reading it again, it has the best tips one can find (take it from me, I have read many, many guides here). Thank you so much for taking out your time to compile such an amazing book!' Reader testimonial by @suspishfishy-- 'I have to thank you again! As soon as I wrote a book that focused on what I wanted to write, instantly people started to read my books and give me feedback!'**THIS IS NOT A PLACE TO ADVERTISE YOUR STORY. This is where you'll find detailed instructions for the proper places to advertise and find readers. If you ask people to read your story here, your comment will be removed.**Thanks to @EnjxiiBlxck for the cover.
8 167

