《Knights quest》Qs Progress
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Deep within the south
As dawn approached,Q and his personal guard kept too the main road, avoiding all conflicts with the tribes. Coming upon a hill side the squadron looked down upon what seem to be a city. It took them by suprise to see such a civilized society within this savage tribal area.
From the hill Q use his true eyes to see further within this city.
"This is weird, not a tribal member in sight. Aslo it seem as though it just one big city centered in the midst of this area. I cant sense any malicious intent from anyone within Q proclaim."
"Lord Q, what if this is just an elaborate trap?"
"No, so far the only forces we kept on sensing was that of the tribal members. YES! it's the Nine's symbol, we're heading down" Q order.
"Lord Q what if we're attacked on arrival?, we cant hold out for very long, plus we still aren't sure if that Church is still running"responded the squad leader.
They continued back and forth on whether they should approach the city, Q was certain that they may have allies within the city and that they will need every bit of help to go up against King when he comes.
South Central
Word had spread among the citizens that foreigners had entered the south once again. This had very little impact upon anyone who lived within the south. If it wasn't a tribal war or various clans clashing or even the many organizations within the south warring over territory then it wouldn't be a normal day within the south.
"Seems the foreigners had the balls to try and raid the Black Sky's nest."
"Shush!.. they could be members of the Suits here."
"Who cares, the shadows are everywhere they probably inform all the higher ups by now."
As the residents of the city continued to gossip on about the situation, Suits suddenly appeared.
"Are you sure this information is correct? I don't want to be chasing any false leads" Blue suit leader said.
"He said that the pervious members of this old church wore similar attire and carried that symbol on them" replied the squad member.
The Blue suits made their way on to the church of the Nine, it was built to resemble a castle even having it's own Moat. The town had been built beside it, mostly use for travelers to send messages from various parts of the region.
As the squad came upon the castles territory, members from within emerged and approached them. Both parties shared information, then the members from within the castle pointed towards the hill side where Q and his squad had set up camp.
"So they carry the symbol of the Nine as well. Bring them to me, I'm curious about this symbol" the head priests stated.
"Leader, we have orders to dispose of them. We cant disobey Sur's orders" said a squad member.
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"We'll think of something but for now let's not piss off the high priest, he's much more dangerous than Sur and I rather have Sur at my throat than him" said leader told his group as they went back into the town.
Inside the church castle
"Your Holiness, why would you want to bring those foreign bastards here?"
"If he finds out that they're others like him her again he'll sure show up. This time I'll make sure he tells me everything about the Nine and EN" said the high priest as he walk off into the hallways of the keep.
"He surely couldn't mean the him, he's been in hiding for years now" the Bishop muttered.
Back on the Battlefield
Rain started to pour heavily upon the ongoing slaughter, both Butcher and Tye had been engaged against the Red Suits division while Primous dealt with November. The sun was setting on their squalor and the engaging forces began to tire. With the added rain and already soaked blood field, the soil beneath became lose making it difficult for the Knights, causing their movements to slow.
*Heavy breaths*
*I dont understand, it's only two of them and they've already depleted most of our forces. We had the advantage with numbers but it's clear that we're out skilled." The red suits division leader continued forward, charging in at any opportunity with hopes of severely wounded either butcher or tye.
"Where at a disadvantage here, soon it'll be night and they'll have the upper hand once again. We cant fight through the night not in our current situation, not to mention those tribal men aren't going to just sit and watch use sleep either" Butcher stated to tye.
"Least your thinking things through, defending the forte is our main priority now. We could make a dash for it and pick up any stragglers on the way" Tye responded.
"Also if this down pour continues, Primous will exhaust himself to keep his flame ablaze. Soooo we'll head for Primous and return to the forte in one rush." * grabs Tye's shoulder *
"You ready."
"Butcher, dont!" Tye sternly said.
Town's Gate moments before butcher's plan
Whooosssh! Wham! Crash! "Arrgggghhhh!!!, you're faster than I expected,Primous" November called out as he emerged from the distant rubble, walking alone the trail that Primous sent him plowing through, crashing into the side of town's wall.
*Quickens his pace* "Third Breath: explosive fist, to think I'll be using this so early" November express as he launched himself towards Primous.
* rain continues to fall* "This down pour is becoming a hindrance to me l, weakening my flame. Why is he rushing in with his body so low, his fist....he's hiding them.......but i can still sense he's gathering flow in them. Doesn't matter, Engulfing Flame: Twin Saber," Primous said as his cloak like jacket took the shape of sabers. Whoosh! Whash! Bam!! Barely scathing off Primous assault, November countered him with a monstrous exploding left jolting his body through the ground causing massive destruction. The magnitude of the blow caused Primous's unphasable flames to scatter from the area upon impact, making his body visible and more vulnerable.
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"Argghh" * spits blood*, "he focused his flow outward at such an high intensity it ended up exploding on impact against me, it even had enough power to move my cloak flame armor. This rain is really a bother" Primous stated with irritation.
"Those flames of yours aren't so hot now....buddy" *wink* November wittily expressed will mocking him by dancing in the rain, "ok now let's try that again" he said before darting off.
zigzagging towards Primous, November exploded a barrage upon Primous, with each strike carrying the same force as before. Rattatatatataaa!!!! As November repeatedly offload his fury, with Primous doing his upmost to defend. Bam! Wham! Bam! A savage combination, leaving Primous somewhat daze November doved in leading with a crackling shot to Primous's ribs. Argghh, IGNITE!!WHAM!!!, mashing November face first to the ground with a sudden chopping right counter.
*Breathing increases * "you got cocky" smartly said as he held down November by his face and restricting most of his movements.
"Cocky?....coming from someone whose spent, you're burning through your resources keep those flames ablaze. They weren't even hot enough to damage my Perfect Body form",
*starts to struggling* "you're losing" stated November as he began to wrestle his way out from Primous, tussling around about the ground until he managed to escape.
*Heavy breaths* "Mannn! Look that how muddy you got me, this suit was expensive. Damn it but...you're quite the grappler, almost couldn't break that hold of yours. No worries though it won't happen again. First tempo," whoosh.
"What!!.." *quickly looks around* "he vanished, with this move I'll be completely drained. Worth it if imma gunna scorch this bloody pagan."
*Tap tap tap* ( approaching footsteps)
Suddenly appearing before him was November, his presence was overflowing as if a great strom was brewing. His eye glowed as you could see his flow coating his entire body in a screaming grey, clinching his fist tightly you could feel the enormous pressure building up as prepared to launch his attack.
"Gaint Impact!!", "Nova!!!" They both roared out as he collision of both attacks completely shattered the ground beneath and hurling them in separate direction. Large craters were from outside off the gate while several onlookers where blasted through the wooden town walls, Primous was flung into a nearby crater. His flames though weaker were still blazing, he was dazed and didn't have much grace left to fight with.
"WOW!! Seem I took the W on this one, I really didn't expect you to have that much power left. Almost caught me if not for me using my Ultimate Body I surely would've lost" November ramble on mocking Primous as the rains had still continued too pour, "Night is upon us and you guy are truly are in
complicated spot" November said with a smug expression.
Stand over Primous he ready himself for a finishing blow, "SPEARRR!!!!"
WHAMMMM!!!! "MOVEEEEE!!!!!!" ROARED Tye as he smashed his mace into November, rattling every fiber with him causing November's spear to miss its mark while slinging his body across form Primous.
"Argghhhhhhh!!!! Shit! Why was it so heavy? To have felt that even in this stage of the Body Arts." November thought to himself as he quickly regained his footing.
Zooop!THOOM!!! "NO!" Shouted Butcher as he swiftly followed up behind Tye's initial attack, rocketing November through the gates causing massive havoc. "YOU FLAMING IDIOT!! Why exhaust yourself cloaking our men while taking on someone off that level, its pouring you should have retreated the moment it started" butcher raged as savagely shook Primous.
Inside The Town
"Agrrrrhhhh, that second guy....he's a threat" November mention as he try's to gather himself up. "Ultimate body would be useless against him. Argghhh...I think he broke something."
"My my, November in pain? One of the Suit's Suit's Sentries being out matched....laughable" mocked fall.
"Shut it.... he got lucky, where the remaining ravens and devils?" November ask as he approached fall.
"I had tribal member take them to the close Suit territory, also sense Crow hasn't shown he's forsaken his rights to this area. Which means the tribe will be claiming it."
"lord fall, I'm tried of waiting. Night is here and the blood bear tribe wants to partake" Kane told Fall as he start to head toward the now destroyed gate.
"Mmmmm... my people grow restless, I'll be back" fall told November as he simply vanished.
Back At The Gate
Fall approach, allowing he flow to leak out freely emitted a monstrous presence. His presence was enormous clearly levels above all. As he got closer he gave kane the signal to advance, in a dreaded tone he spoke "commences the night cleansing."
* felt the monstrous presence* "I know no fear", *faces bout Tye and Primous* "alright now....GRAB YOUR SHIT! PICK THAT SHIT UP! AND GET YOUR ASS MOVING!!!!" Butcher shouted as he raced toward the forte, "we ain't got a chance in hell against that now", as butcher ran over the fallen red Suits he felt fall's presence grew greater. "Tye!! Hold Primous." With that simple phrase Tye already prepared himself, * halting* "go ready the forte I'll buy us time" he said as he threw both Tye and Primous towards the forte. Butcher then sharply turned toward Los the approaching tribe.
"SACRED ART: DIVINE GUARDIAN!!!!" butcher cried.
"That's going to be a real problem, a being of pure energy." fall stated as he sat at the gate entrance watching the events play out.
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