《Raging Plateau》Pre face & Chapter I: A Hunt
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Preface
The city below bustles with activity, like a swarm of ants wavering in weakness. Yet I lay here, forced to nestle and restless from a good harvest… Before me stands some weakling with no name, soon to fall to my despair as they give me everything!
“You there, little spirit! You sense my aura, yet you arrive with delay… Unacceptable!”
Rage builds within my spherical body. I inflict my will upon the area around me and push the vermin to its knees, “I sense your despair! Your existence feeds my vitality, yet it does nothing to stave off this boredom!”
“….”
“You lost the will to speak?! Intolerable”, and I force my mind into theirs, taking hold of the fragile thoughts before me. Instead of tearing the mind apart, I look more closely at them physically, now that I’ve intruded in their space. They look green like the rest of the pests, but they appear to be different I suppose, like that matters!
“You will do! Now, state your desire in exchange for everything that you have!”
“I…, I seek to….”
“Out with it now!”
He grovels beneath me, mustering the strength to speak, “I seeksss the powersss…, and revenge…”
“Ah, I see it all now, how interesting, Contract accepted! You shall have your revenge in exchange for everything that you have.” I levitate my body from the altar and begin to speed up, slamming my shell into their chest, merging gloriously.
“Hmm, this acclimation may take some time, much longer than I originally anticipated… In the meantime, I must tell you of a tale that will allow us to revel in your despair to come. A spirit will be allowed to join us, to fill in the more present details…, as I need to rejuvenate.
*Woooosshhhhh*
Our three minds and visions alike fuse and zoom through an endless tunnel of darkness, only to stop, and peer into a scene containing a humble home near a plateau.
Chapter I: A Hunt
The forest meets with a sun as it encroaches upon the horizon and a pair of boots smash against the forest floor. Below, a hunter embeds himself well within his surroundings and makes moves amongst the foliage before daylight. A lean-looking man dressed in brown bear crawls up to a tiny clearing, or at least that’s what someone would see. His camouflage suits the surrounding forest well, as the brush is thick with woody vegetation and greenery.
*Snap* *Crack*
Leaves rustle, and a rabbit flings out of a nearby tree line. The critter soars through the air, launching from the ground up by a small tree snare. It bounces and bobs in the air for help, eventually sagging from the sling shot-like effect of the trap. It begins to twitch and spasm around uncontrollably, likely from smacking the nearby tree trunk.
A dark face and a smile soon met the rabbit.
The hunter approaches slowly, he seeks out the distressed animal and a means to end the rabbit's suffering. He thinks about his family as he steps forward and their needs. He grabs the string of the snare and the wild game hanging from it, quickly snapping its neck.
This was another simple day in the life of a hunter near the remote edges of civilization. Alakar would start his days early in the mornings, avoiding the wife as he would get dressed and grab his pack containing all his needed gear. The forest was a treacherous place with all sorts of foul creatures, monsters, and even the stuff of legends.
However, none of these things would bother Alakar today, and he makes it back to his little cottage and pregnant wife.
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He yells, “Helloooo, hun, you in there?!”
Something flies and slams into the wall in front of him; Alakar is unfazed until a voice shouts, "It's too early to be that loud! Why are you back so soon? You wake me up when you leave and then…."
The woman had opened the front door at this point and noticed, shockingly so, that a strong man was carrying food before her.
“Ha, you were saying something?” Alakar makes his way inside the log cabin, now that the mother of his child-to-be is much happier to see him. He takes a right to the third and smallest room within the house and rests three rabbits from this morning's catch on a butcher’s table.
Margrett lunges in from behind in what appears to be a hug, and then it turns almost into a grapple, and she says, "You know I only act that way because I missed you."
Alakar responds, "Oh yes, of course, I believe you,” he's then struck in the shoulder with a soft jab.
"Ouch, just kidding, ha.”
He knew that this type of sarcasm would not pass her unpunished and wished, just once, he’d go unpunished for it.
Margrett says, "I know you think you’re being funny right now, but what are you gonna do the rest of today? I'm assuming these were from the snares, and you didn't shoot anything? You know we need some more food in the coming months?"
He thrusts his finger in the air and shouts, “Fear not, my dear, for I will slay a mighty beast for you!”
He is immediately slapped repeatedly over the head with significant repetitions and strong hands.
She exclaims, "You fool, just get us some horned deer or something... I know you're only kidding, but it's just us out here. I can't lose you."
Silence momentarily ensues under the morning bird chirps. Alakar, who has been stoking the flames, perhaps figuratively, of the cabin's clay fireplace, turns to Margrett with some degree of stupor.
He states, "I have no death wish at this point in my life. Maybe there would have been some questionable times when I was younger, but no more."
Her eyes lit up, and they give each other a real hug this time.
Margrett then says, "I'm glad to hear you say that, like the words of the goddess of air and tranquility to my ears."
He says, "I'm not a god, much less a goddess, ha, and you know I don't believe in that sort of thing."
Margrett says, "Oh, so now you want to be serious all of a sudden. I'll make a stew with these by the time you get back."
He begins to walk outside, and she then huffs and folds her arms up, "And don’t forget… It'd be nice to smoke a good size catch before the season turns. Not even magic will change the season for you."
Alakar says, "I know, I know."
He then walked out of his home, surrounded by rows of crops, patches of grass, and stray flowers. The smell of last night's campfire and sunshine lingered in the air. And leaned up against the side of the cabin was a boar spear, which he quickly picked up along with some extra necessities.
The spear was sharp and priceless out here in the sticks, especially since big game was common, which he relished in. This move out into the woods was justified for one of many reasons, all of which were logical in his head, but the main one was hunting. It was so that he could be closer to more epic hunts. He was a simple man in that regard, and he needed to make a living in this reality.
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He straightens up with his gear on his back and looks at her within the doorway, and says, "I'll make sure to be back well before sunset, and when I get back, you can tell me all of those funny arrest stories from your guardsman days again."
As he marches down a dirt path and passes through one of the openings in the fence, she yells out at him, "That's guardswoman to you!"
He glances over his shoulder at her, only to look back to the forest and chuckle at his benign blunder. While tossing his hand up in a waving gesture he seeps back into the woods. Once deep enough into the forest, away from the vast clearing of the homestead, he climbs a tree. He reaches for one branch at a time, allowing his leather boots to place firmly with each step as he ascends.
He smiles and murmurs to himself, "The wife would freak knowing I did this on a regular..."
The leaves had fallen off most of the trees by this time of the year, making it easy to see the surrounding area. There were few trails left that he could use as a sustainable food source, and with winter soon approaching, even the snare traps would cease to feed him and his growing family. The direction leading south would lead to a great plains, while the east and west contained sparse trees or feeble hunting grounds. Only one direction was left, and that was to head north, deeper into the forest.
He scaled down the tree just as carefully and methodically as he came up it. Upon reaching the ground, he checked his surroundings for danger and covered up his traces. He immediately picked up his spear that he left at the tree’s base and carried on with his hunt. The spear would be the best weapon of choice for what he was searching for; a horned deer, a killing machine able to puncture down its foes in a single strike. Such a large animal would make the average human timid if they came too close.
However, fears are swallowed, and Alakar grins at the thought of eventually finding his catch. His thoughts push him onwards as he makes his way through the ever-thickening trees and plant life. The forest feels as if it’s always attempting to grab at him with all its might. Debris and bushes push in from all directions, but he casts them aside without breaking them. The mind soon wanders, and he finds himself moving at a faster and faster pace whilst stewing in his own head.
He eventually hones his focus, realizing that he leads his mind astray more often than he’d like to admit. He stays alert and ready for action as he tunes into the air and other senses that flow in and around him. The forest is lively, and it creates occasionally deafening noises around him inside a maze of green.
The ground remained damp as he traveled. It was wet and covered in leaf litter, yet he was determined to weave through the medium quickly. Alakar looked up at the sky and realized midday had already passed. There was a feeling of impatience within, and it began to swell up inside his chest. He suppressed those feelings, as he was sure an animal trail would come up soon.
It wasn't long until he found a well-used trail and some small unknown tracks. He mulled over the possibilities for what made the tracks only to be distracted by the best sign he'd seen all day… Dung. A lump of heavy, cylindrical proportions. This was no ole pile of crap to a hunter. This was gold, scat from a horned deer. He finished scouring around and carried along with his usual routine for trail huntings: find tracks or signs of easy prey, avoid danger, and post up until the game presents itself - simple.
And simple comes early. The trail is open and wide enough for a man to walk down it unimpeded, and several meters away, a juvenile horned deer comes into view. His adrenaline surges at the sight of the animal.
A little longer, a little more patience, and he would be fat and happy on deer meat. In a bit, the horned deer would measly stroll its way down the trail. Once realizing the danger too late, it would charge with its single antler in self-defense. He had it all planned out in his head. Before the horned deer charged, he'd ready his spear in an effort to cause the deer to impale itself. The deer would become easy pickings to any hungry creature once a spear had been ran through it.
Only moments passed by, and Alakar's eyes beamed out of a bush as the brown deer covered in dots of white came into view. He began to grip the soles of his boots with his toes and shuffle his feet ever so slightly. Then, out of nowhere, a new sound stole his attention.
*Bizzzzzzz* *Bizzzzzz* *Bzzzzzzz*
Confusion stirs, and he starts looking at his flanks, only for the buzzing to get louder. He looks up in shock, no words are said, and he bolts forward. Unfortunately, he flees right into the direction of his prey, gritting his teeth in the moment of a poor decision. The horned deer is startled by the buzzing and sounds of running, and charges with its horn aimed at the perpetrator.
Out of panic and limited area to move, he dives under the deer's legs. The animal fails to aim low enough, and he shoots through the legs of the deer yet not unharmed. He gets to one knee on the other side, acknowledging a couple damaged fingers, and sprints further into the forest. He runs as fast as he can, not bothering to cover his tracks or minimize his noise.
After a full length of sprinting, he stops and tries to catch his breath. He breathes heavily, pushing his hands down atop his thighs to lighten himself while trying to listen for more buzzing. Finally breaking his code of 'forest silence,' he openly complains to himself, "Damn, those insects, bugs are nasty, and they should never be that big!"
A woodsman was accustomed to many dangers of the forest, few men like himself were going to be dissuaded from a few bug encounters, but stirges were no house fly. He could recall for a brief moment what he saw. The pest had the wings of a bat and the body of a mosquito. This one, in particular, was red and sported a gnarly-looking needle. A swarm of those bloodsuckers could be deadly for any hunter, and there was little option but to run. When he finally caught his breath and focus, a sound crept back into his vicinity.
*Bizzzzzzzz* *Bzzzzzzzz*
They are too fast, and a shooting sound strikes through the air, following Alakar’s yelp, “Ah! You damn buggers, you won’t have me today!”
He violently flings his spear in the air at what now appears to be tens of stirges swarming at once. The trees are thick, yet he wails his spear around anyway. With great precision and luck, he skewers one out of the air, leaving green insect goo splattering towards him. Paying no heed to the mess, he continues to fling the spear around, hoping to nick the many stirges surrounding him. They buzz, encircle, and jab relentlessly.
The spear worked briefly, yet in this situation, his weapon was proving to be not ideal, as it was meant for a larger target like the horned deer.
*Poink* *Poink*
“Ahhh,” and he cries out in shock!
This time a couple of the stirges punctured his leather vest, taking deep sips of blood and nutrients with each successful puncture.
One of the little bat-winged monsters hovers in the air, and amongst the chaos, he seizes the opportunity to down another stirge. He swings his spear at it, and to his surprise, the hovering bug moves at the last second, and the spear strikes a tree instead. The abrupt stoppage of the swing causes him to stumble over his feet, and he goes down onto his side with a thud. The swarm, as a collective, senses weakness, and it dives onto him. In a fleeting moment, he throws himself out of the way from several stabs.
From a crawl to a slow pace, he leans forward into another exhausting sprint and curses, “Damn it all, and damn these bugs!”
He wasn’t sure how long he’d been running, but it was getting to the point where the night sky would soon set. His lungs were on the verge of bursting, and he didn’t have much stamina leftover to give. The legs beneath him were giving out too, and to make matters worse, the terrain had become soggy. Yet he saw hope, something he’d used before while traversing his backyard - a large burrow that the endless swarm shouldn’t follow him into.
These types of burrows could act as temporary shelter, assuming you checked it beforehand for inhabitants. He briefly considered the pissed-off herbivore that likely lived in that burrow, but those were problems for the later him, and this was the now.
Exhausted yet willing, he plunges into the damp darkness of a random burrow while a swarm is hot on his tail.
Alakar falls through the air, screaming, “Woooo Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!”
He soon understood that this hole went much deeper than he anticipated.
*Bam* *Crunch*
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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