《Fate's Grasp》Chapter Five -- [De]Void of Souls
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And now, one soul floats within the void; waiting for its partner to die.
--Aeryn--
My eyes quickly adjusted to the darkness that swallowed my surroundings, feeding off the minuscule amount of the moon’s light that managed to creep in through cracks in the wall.
It was an excellent place to hide, unnoticeable and tucked away deep within Werven’s forest. I maneuvered around the storeroom with wind-infused boots towards the door, avoiding the mix of glass shards, wood pieces, and metallic objects that littered the floor in landmine-like piles. It led outside, I thought, but upon further inspection, it seemed to be a courtyard. From my scouting; high above in that tree; there were two courtyards within the fortress. In front of me, the old inner walls towered high above, consumed by age and nature.
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The old fortress walls were covered in vegetation, allowing for my iron claws to grip and climb. There was the occasional guard, surprisingly, although I should’ve suspected something was hiding on the overgrown battlements. Move faster. Faster. My mind chanted to myself as if it was a separate entity.
Clink.
I blasted a soundless gust of wind, pushing myself to an almost instant stop, just before a tower entrance, and a lurking soldier. I projected my power into his mind and my vision blinked darkness, deeper and deeper.
Once.
Twice.
Then complete black which lingered for a moment.
Once.
Twice.
My vision faded from the darkness, first dark grey to ash and then normality.
Around the corner, the soldier was on the floor, arms protecting his chest as tentacles slowly dragged him into the floor, mentally. I walked through the entrance and observed the path ahead. The wall stretched out and curved to meet the base of the main building, the spire of the fort. From up high in the tree, I saw movement, however, it was brief… That was where my target was, I hoped. I glanced back to the guard, who was still on the floor. He would recover, physically. Although… his soul would never recover completely. Would I be feeling remorse here if I was a ‘normal’ person? I guess ‘normal’ is subjective…
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‘Faster’ my mind echos to myself. I’ve got a king to kill.
--Richard--
A burst of fire erupted from my hand, streaking towards the foe in front. No thoughts dared to enter my mind apart from the rhythm of battle, the thrill of the fight. The ground beneath me compressed on itself under the weight of my starheilem battle armor, and the vegetation of the old, overgrown courtyard was either burned to cinders or completely crushed. Beads of sweat lined my brow like a low-hanging crown; my muscles either shut down or dying, knives protruding from them like thorns. My assailant seemed to be unwavering; a black cloak with the hood pulled back revealing sharp green eyes and black hair that flowed like a rough sea as she dodged any manner of attacks I threw at her. She wore chained armor under that cloak, imbued with wind to silence any clinks. I saw her withdraw another eight knives from within the dark folds, and steel herself for another assault. I activated the air around me, readying an obstacle course of burning mana. She launched herself forward, and I released the mana in that instant.
I watched as she flung herself around the streams of flame.
I watched as she pulled her wrists back and threw her hands forward.
I watched as the knives flew through the air like falcons in flight.
I watched as the darkness flowed through my sight.
And then I watched no more.
Better to die to a worthy opponent than to a ravaging sickness.
--Aeryn--
I collected my knives from the dead king’s body and slid them back into the hidden straps within the folds of my cloak. He was a good fighter, not as good as the stories told, but he fought with the pride of a king. I set his sword on the ground next to him and left two knives crossed over his chest. He deserved at least this much respect.
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“Well done, assassin. I didn’t think you’d be able to kill him that easily” A voice said, behind me
“I did think that battle was too easy, King Richard,” I replied, turning to face him.
“Figured it out already, you really are quite quick on your feet. We had that Richard change his name and spend ages covering my true identity.”
Silence. It hovered in the air for a moment. Then two.
“Still want to claim my head? I’m sure that whoever you’re working for won’t know the difference between myself and him.”
He was mainly hidden by the shadow of the ruins across the courtyard, but the gleam of his silver eyes was sincere.
“I’ll… still fight you. My mission is to kill King Richard. Not a body double.” I replied, my weapons already drawn.
“And here I thought I could have a new assistant.” He said, punctuated with a sigh.
He turned his side to me.
I imbued my legs with wind and launched myself at him… I thought.
My back felt warm, and my erratic heart seemed to be pumping within my ears.
I hadn’t moved from the spot at all, my legs were crumpled beneath me.
I fell backward.
My chest shot outwards, my flesh surrounding… a blade.
The nerve drug I had been taking stopped all the pain, but my mind screamed with it, filled my body with it.
I felt my lungs; pierced and struggling to keep the oxygen within them.
My eyes felt like they were made of lead, but I managed to strain them upwards.
Then, I felt the blade sever my spine, and my vision went out.
My final sight was of the one who stabbed me.
The image of his shiny, light green eyes, and the soft-gold, blonde hair.
‘I wonder what happens to me, a person devoid of a soul….’ I said to myself as my final thought.
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. 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