《I'm just a mortal》SURPRISE
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After Xuan Jian made his body as hard as a weapon, he went back to his home to train his body until he used it, it took from him two weeks to adapt to use his body and one and half month to train his techniques to defense and offense battle, finally, he ended his training in the day before the competition's day
- { finally .. I barely ended my training before the competition ... maybe it's time to know how to use [ MIND CONVERSATION TECHNIQUE ] ... it will be easy to know that you call to talk to other people in the shadows when the situation when it's dangerous ... I even know that the immortal world doesn't exist }
[ hahahahaha ... you just a mean human, you think that you could easily take that technique ]
- how is there ? .. show yourself
[ I'm not a person .. I'm the system that attached to your real body .. I will show you some of my powers ]
The atmosphere changed, the thin air changed to white vapor turned to a solidified body, the same body, and the same clothes as Xuan Jian, as he looking in the mirror or to the other twin of him
[ is it enough ? ]
- what ..? you can solidify your body ? .. even you can know what I'm thinking about and understand me?
[ huh ? .. are you really dumb ? .. anyway for your first question .. yes I can but you are the only one who can see me and you can take to me with your mind not necessary with your lowly mouth, for the second question, of course, I can because I contacted to your real body and for the last of course I can understand you I'm A. I after all ]
- { and about the reward for the side quest? }
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[ okay I will let you learn it .. if you want anything else you can call ( SYSTEM ) and I will show up ]
The system put two fingers on the front of Xuan Jian's head and it started to glow, Xuan Jian felt much pain he barely endure it, after the process finished the system disappeared in the air, Xuan Jian faint from exhausting.
the next day Xuan Jian headed to the Qui clan for the competition, after he entered someone pumped in him
- hey you loser .. how dare you pumped in me? .. you don't know who I'm ? .. I, Qui Chen, the second person after Qui Fau in the power .. you are just a loser that I can't sense any of your qi ... are you crippled? .. and you dare to hassle...
- enough talking ... you talk a lot even more than a woman .. you should know how you talk less.
Xuan Jian left him and leave to sign up desk for the competition
- hi. I want to take place in the competition.
- ... okay but I can't sense any qi on your body, are you crippled ? .. we can't make sure that you will still alive after you sign up, are you sure?
Xuan Jian shaking his head agreed on this terms about his safety after that Xuan Jian went to the battleground square waiting for the competition to begin, after some time the third elder appeared in the middle of the air
- Welcome to our Qui clan competition, I, Qui fang, will annoying that we have a special guest attend this competition, the special guest is the princess of our Tian Bai country the princess Ling Xi
All of the eyes turned to VIP stage that contented the head of the Qui clan, first and second elders, with them a girl on her 16 or 17 years old, her eyes were only looking in one way, looking at the one who wears the shabby black robe that his gray eyes glowing, making him like a ghost standing among the people, they have eyes contacted and until now Xuan Jian doesn't believe what he saw
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- { what the ? .. the girl that I saved was the princess of the Tian Bai? ... or you kidding me? }
- now let me explain the rules of the competition, 1. the people who signed up, we can't make sure about your safety that means you may die in the fight, 2. the first round it will be killed for all, we will divide you into four areas the fight will end when 8 fighters will remaining, 3. at the second round it will be 1vs1match that not ended until death or surround 4. the prize to no.1 will be that he or she will enroll under the royal sect as an external disciple, he or she will have enough resources and recognized as one of the best-talented disciples in Tian Bai country .. everyone will have a card which contains the number of the ring that will fight in it .. prepare for the match .. we will start in 15 minutes
Everyone took a card and headed to the ring that they will fight in the first round, Xuan Jian had number 2 on his card, so naturally, he went to the ring, when he entered the ring, he saw people gathering around someone, it's was the most beautiful girl in Qui clan, Qui Li Yuin, Xuan Jian without feeling smiled to Qui Yuin Yuin, as they separated for so long years, but it's faded when someone was getting near to her
- hey, Yuin Yuin come to my group, if we united we will be a power that knows one will not dare to attack us
- no, you know that I don't want to fight with you because I want to fight you, isn't that right, Qui Fau ? .. I will not forget what you have done to Xuan Jian .. you destroyed his dantian even you know that his father is our savior without him there no way that the Qui clan exist anymore
- 😠😠😠 hmph .. so be it you will be crippled like him, and we will see if dare to disobey me again
After the time ended, a barrier of the qi is inactive, it will not disappear until it will be just 8 fighters standing up
- let's begin the first round, kill for all... no surrounding allowed .. it will just be a pool of blood .. let it begin
The match just started, 12 fighters killed in the first second in rings 1,3,4, in ring 2 it was silence, no one dares to move or attack, the move in this ring was from Xuan Jian take steps toward Qui Li Yuin, she stays alert because his shabby robe that even his face can not be recognized because of the dark that blockade the features of his face the only that can be recognized is his glowing grey eyes that make him like a ghost, Xuan Jian he stopped when the distance between them is about 2 meter, and he reveals his presence to her
- long time no see ... Yuin Yuin
- Xuan... Xuan Jian .... thank god that you are okay ... but what brings you here
- hahahahaha ... the servant finally show up ... you here for your death .... what a surprise ... it's good to surprise
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