Hi to all

First i want to thank you guys for having the patience to read my very first fanfic, actually not the very first but the very first posted. this is actually my second work, the first work will be the continuation of this fanfic, if i ever finish this. i hope so. i posted this topic because i want to hear what you guys think, and maybe you will have some suggestion for me. i cannot promise that i will use it, but at least it would be a consideration.