《Correcting My Martial Path》Chapter 5: Demon God's reincarnation
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It was unknown how much time had already passed since Yon Min was sucked in by the symbol.
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In a forest, north of Li Mountain Range, a young man was squatting on a ground inside a tent, which was only a few meters wide and it was made of hides from wild beasts knitted together and around him were a group of young women that served him food and drinks.
The curtains of the tent suddenly opened and an old woman entered, after her were another group of women holding books and some bones. The young man quickly looked at them.
“Young lord! Here are the heritage of our tribe!” The old woman said. The books were the cultivation techniques they got since the founding of the tribe.
Hearing what the old woman said, the young man looked at the group of women who were behind her and glanced at what they were holding.
“Tribal chief! As I said, I'm not what you thought I am.” The young man said.
Hearing what the young man said, the old woman did not frown but instead laughed. She was the tribal chief of the tribe.
“I'm glad that our small tribe was blessed by the reincarnated demon god before maturing.” The tribal chief, as well as the group of women behind her and beside the young man also knelt down and started worshiping and admiring the young man.
The young man that the tribal chief kept addressing was believed to be the reincarnation of their god, who was found inside one of their temples, lying unconscious on a table. On the table was supposed to be the statue of their God, the Demon God, but the group of young women who took care of the temple were shocked to discover that the statue vanished and what replaced it was an unconscious young man. So the leader of the group of young women quickly reported this strange phenomenon to the tribal chief.
Hearing this, the young man frowned, he stood up and bowed “My name is Yong Min, tribal chief, please don't address me that way.” Yong Min said.
After he was sucked on the strange symbol and was sent to this world, he had only woken up yesterday. When he woke up, he was surprised to find a group of young women kneeling down on the ground worshipping him.
He was amazed by what he saw, he was in a temple that looked like an ancient ruin. He knew that he was not on earth anymore and any how he had seen and read about similar places like this on earth, though they were merely preserved and shown to the public as a tourist spot.
He couldn't help but asked at the group of young women who were kneeling down before him “Uhmm, may I ask where am I? And why you guys are kneeling down.”
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Although he had a rough idea that he had done something ridiculous when he was asleep because of the strange symbol that caused the group of young women to worship him, he still asked.
“We are currently in the temple of the demon god, which our small earthly fire tribe built.” a young woman said.
'Tribe?' Yong Min was inwardly shocked, hearing what the young woman said, it seems that this world was like a thousand years away from modernization. On earth, although there were still tribes, it only belonged to the indigenous people, who chose not to associate with modern people.
“As for why we are kneeling down, you should already know that young demon god!” the young woman continued.
'Young demon god?' although he already had a rough idea, here he was,still surprised by the words of the young woman.
After that the young woman explained why they called him young demon god.
“Quickly get up, I'm not your demon god.” Yong Min said, he was feeling disturbed by having people kneeling before him.
Hearing what Yong Min said, the group of young women quickly got up and at the same time, they bowed their heads and blushed.
Seeing them turning red from blushing, Yong Min frowned. It was just like in the movies, when someone of superior status saying something like this, they would blush and feel that they didn't have the right to do it as they would seem to luck manners.
“As I said, I'm not the demon god!” Yong Min repeated himself.
“It's not that...” a young woman said looking at him, as she said that, her original red faced flushed even redder.
Noticing the young woman looked at him, blushing, he probe himself.
This time he came to realize that he was naked, yes! Buck naked!
And that was how he ended up meeting the tribal chief who gave him clothes to wear and how he got his helpers, the young group of women who tends to his needs.
'I really need to know the origins of the symbol and how I would be able to go back to earth. But first I need to familiarize myself to this place.' Yong Min said to himself.
“Okay then, I will gladly accept these things.” Yong Min told the tribal chief.
He quickly took the books and flipped through them.
“Hmmm...Shit...” Yong Min who was trying to read the books frown, he could not understand any of the writings.
Seeing him frowning from reading the books, the tribal chief quickly ordered everyone to leave the tent and give him some time.
Seeing everyone leave, Yong Min did not know whether he should be laughing or crying, first, he was safe and sound, helped by women at this tribe. Second and lastly, he was glad that he could understand what everyone was saying but he couldn't read any of the writings on the books, the characters were unfamiliar to him.
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As he was still focused, he didn't notice that his eyes started to glimmer, flashing different symbols and lines. If he only had a mirror, he woud have found out that the symbols that appeared in his eyes resembled the strange symbol that appeared on his room and suck him here. When the symbols started flashing in his eyes, as he looked at the book, he was amazed that the more he blinked, the more the unfamiliar letters started to change one by one into a language that he could read.
He immediately got this chance and read them.
“Heavenly Demon Planet…” Yong Min read the books introduction, it was about this word.
“The strongest is king, the loser is the thief!” He read a quote in the book and was amazed; strength was the only rule of this world. If you are weak then you can go and fuck off.
"The demon god had reached levels beyond the first five realms and ascended to the heavens." Yong Min was shocked and happy reading this. Ascended the heavens? Does that mean when I surpassed the legendary realm, I could go home? this thoughts raced through his mind and made his heart palpitate.
After calming down, he continued to read the book.
“Demon god technique’s first five parts, the first five parts are the first five realms of cultivation. Which are the Bronze realm, Silver realm, Gold realm, Black-Gold realm and the Legendary realm, which, each realm is divided into 9 levels....” Yong Min said as he read the first few pages of the book.
“The Bronze realm is about body strengthening.Silver realm is about using the body as storage for heavenly energy. Then if one could learn a skill, they could use the energy stored to manifest the skill. Furthermore one could absorb a wild beast’s ability or bloodline. The gold realm Is about…” Yong Min stopped reading to this point, because the writings started to turn blurry. Somewhat blocking him from reading beyond this point.
He then flipped the book to see if some of the pages were readable. Luckily some of the pages were indeed readable.
“Talent is the measure of a person’s cultivation speed, but not everyone had the talent to cultivate, yet those without talent could still beat those with talent if only their determination is great. Furthermore if they have both the talent and determination then they could then defy the heavens once they reach the martial arts peak.” Yong Min sighed, he still does not know if he was talented or not nor was his determination in cultivating great.
He knew that reading was different then doing it in personal, it sounded so easy, but when he is really doing it, it should be very difficult.
He closed the book and started focusing himself, following the instructions in the book. He wanted to see if he could reach bronze realm level 1.
He relaxed himself and closed his eyes.
“Feel the energy around you and guide it to your body.” He murmured, trying to feel the energy…
Closing his eyes he could see tiny wisps of green colored energy around him and then a few minutes had passed and like this Yong Min was starting to frown, the instruction was to relax the body and mind and feel the energy, and then guide it to the body slowly. But when he was feeling something, it would vanish and he would feel uncomfortable and had to open his eyes.
Like this, half a day had passed and he was feeling hungry.
He realized that he really didn’t know anything about cultivating. Talk about going home, it seemed that he won’t be reaching the bronze realm level 1 in a short time.
Realizing this, he exited the tent and decided to go for a walk. It was already noon, the sun was high up in the sky.
Looking around Yong Min could see the tribe’s walls and gate. The walls were made of tree trunks turned into wall of stakes. The tribes members were busy doing their own chores, some are getting water from a nearby river, while some are plowing a field, some were cleaning and some were assigned to cook the vegetables from the farm and wild beasts that were hunted down.
Seeing Yon Min walking through the streets, the tribe members quickly bowed their heads towards him in respect and worship.
He could only sigh, the demon god was supposed to have surpassed the legendary realm, but here he was having a hard time even reaching the bronze realm level 1.
He quickly glanced at everyone and shockingly he could feel their aura and asses their cultivation level…looking at the ones plowing the field, they were bronze realm level 1 warriors. Even the ones cooking was as such. He was shocked. But of course not everyone had cultivated, some were normal people. But what was even amazing was that there were no men here. Only women, even the ones hunting for wild beast were women and they had a cultivation of bronze realm level 4.
“Young lord it seemed you have exited your seclusion, is everything going well?” a voice sounded behind him, looking back, he saw that it was the tribal chief.
“Tribal chief! Yes, I exited early because…” Yong Min greeted the tribal chief, but before he could finish what he was going to say, he felt shocked, he could feel the tribal elder’s cultivation level, it was at bronze realm level 6 but what was even more amazing was that he could tell why she got stuck on that level based on the information he just read.
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