《The Torture System》New World
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" (thinks to himself)What I'm doing with Meili Fang is such a disgrace. But I have no choice, if I don't listen to her then Xia Fang will find out and be very disappointed in me. I'm not scared of getting in trouble for what I've done. But rather scared of hurting Xia Fang's feelings. He did so much for me and in the end, I fu*k his wife."
" Where am I? Oh, I'm still in your room huh. I should get going now before anyone realizes I'm missing. Also, what do you want to eat?", asked Meili Fang.
" Uh, anything will be fine."
" Alright, whatever. Take a shower soon. I'm going to be back after my son goes off to school. Also if you try to avoid me, I'll just call my husband and confess everything that happened.", said Meili Fang.
" Relax. You don't need to worry about anything. I'll do whatever you say as long as you don't tell him anything."
" Ok, I'll send my son down. Bye.", said Meili Fang.
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System," It is time for you to leave. Find a safe spot where no one will find you."
" What? Aren't you supposed to be ready by tomorrow? And also why do I feel so strong right now?"
System," Oh, I must've forgotten to explain to you. I need to power myself up for 2 days straight then I power up your body for 1 day. Then we can try to go to the next planet. And the reason you feel so strong is that I already started to power up your body. But I can only power up your body at max speed when you are in a place where no one will disturb you. If anyone is to disturb you will I'm at my max speed then your body might suffer fatal damage."
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" Oh... Alright, I'll start looking for a safe spot then. But how can I leave without saying goodbye to them? Alright, I'll just tell them that I'm going on a walk. And then leave."
" Good to see you Zheng He. With you around my son's English has improved by so much. I don't know how I can express to you how happy I am right now. And as for your pay, I increased it to 3000 yuan per week.", said Xia Fang.
" Ah, that's so kind of you. I came here to tell you guys that I'm going to out for a walk. I'll be back in 5 minutes so don't worry. Bye."
" Uh, sure. Go ahead. My wife will put away your food for now. Also, take this 1000 yuan for now. I'll pay you the other 2000 yuan at the end of the week when I get my paycheck.", said Xia Fang.
" Sure. Thanks a lot. I'll get going now then. (thinks to himself) At least I got to say goodbye to them. Though what am I supposed to do with this money. If I told him that I didn't need it then he might have suspected that something weird was going on. I guess I should stock up on food now. After all, I'm going to have to stay in one place for a whole day. What should I buy? Well since I have so much money I should stock up on as much as I can. Let me make a list for what I should buy. Well, I should buy some bread, water, cake, and etc...(buys everything) Alright, now I need to find a place that no one goes to... Found it! This house looks quite old. And it's so dirty too. No one must've been here for a long time. I guess I'll make this place my safe spot. Yo System, can I stay there?"
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System," Yes, you can stay there. It seems as if no one has been here for ages. Once you settle yourself in the house just tell me when you are ready."
" Alright... I should put the food right here... And I can just sit on top of the shopping bags. Yo System, I'm ready now."
System," Alright, now just relax and let me take control of your body. Also while I am in control of your body, you will be in a deep sleep and will be able to sense anything around you."
" Alright, here goes nothing. Just don't hurt my body k?"
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" This place, it's so beautiful. Earth is like a dump compared to this place. System, where am I?"
System," I do not know what the name of this planet is either. But I do have some good news. This planet does not seal your cultivation."
" Oh. So that means from now on I will be able to become very powerful, literally."
System," Yes, but I doubt you will be able to achieve anything with you trash talent."
" If I remember correctly, not too long ago you said that you would help me rise to the peak yet now you are once again bullying me. You're a fu*king liar."
System," Relax. Even though your talent is so trash, with the help of myself you will become the strongest existence in the universe."
" I doubt it. The only thing you are good at is being shameless."
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