《Controlling time in NARUTO》First mission [4]
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"Who said it was a shadow clone? You idiot." Raoul said with a smirk on his face
Kumo leader was angry seeing a smirk on 10-year old's at his situation
-4 hours ago-
"Village chief please you also leave, you may come in our way during the fight" : Minato
"OK I will leave but who will talk to the shinobi?" : Village chief asked
"I will make a shadow clone and transform the shadow clone into you" : Minato
"OK" : The village chief left after saying this
"Captain may I make the clone?" : Raoul asked
"Will you be OK? You have to fight after that too." : Minto asked with a concerned look
"Hell with one, I will be fine after making 50" : Raoul thought while saying " Yes it will be fine, moreover I use mainly my blade"
The Hatake kenjutsu was very good after all and it would be even better after the 2x strength granted by the auth-... system
Raoul said as he walked to a tree and touched the tree. Raoul formed a wooden clone.
"You can use the wood element???" : Minato was surprised as he asked
"I can use it but never revealed it since it would be headache explaining everyone how I can use it and ask you to keep it a secret too" : Raoul said
"OK I won't tell anyone. Not even Takashi" : MInato
"Thank you" : Raoul
-Back to present-
"If it wasn't a shadow clone, was it a water clone?" : Kumo leader
"No you fucking idiot, it was a wooden clone" : Raoul
"You can use the wood element? Same as the first Hokage?" : Kumo leader
Raoul looked towards Minato and said " This reaction was the reason I did not reveal it."
"I understand. I also get asked like that about my Flying thunder god jutsu" : Minato
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Raoul and Minato were talking to each other peacefully, ignoring the Kumo shinobi. In this moment, Raoul got overconfident and ignored the Kumo leader completely. The leader threw a kunai towards Raoul but it was too late to react now.
Just as the kunai was a centimeter away from Raoul's eyes, he found himself behind the leader, standing beside Minato as he stabbed the Kumo shinobi
"Remember to never ignore your opponent no matter how weak he is and never get distracted, it will put your teammates' lives in danger" : Minato
"Yes captain" : Raoul said in an embarrassed look
"Captain if you had marked the Kumo shinobi before, why did you not kill him before?" : Raoul asked
"I forgot" : Minato
"-_-... Do we now leave for Konoha ?" : Raoul
"Yes, we will after Takashi brings everyone back to the village we will" : Minato
3 days later Takashi came back with the villagers and the three left for Konoha
They did not wait at the gate to register their entry and went straight to the Hokage
"Hokage-Sama the mission has been completed" : Minato
"Good. Give me the report within 2 days " : Hiruzen
"Yes Hokage-Same" : Minato
"Leave now, Raoul you stay" : Hiruzen
Minato and Takashi left as Hiruzen started to speak " Kakashi is not fitting in any team currently and is in the ANBU too so I want you two to complete a B-rank mission for me"
"What is the mission about?" : Raoul asked
"Escort a caravan to the Land of spring, you leave in a week again so rest during the week. I hope you will tell Kakashi about the mission" : Hiruzen
"Yes, I will tell that brat" : Raoul
"Now go and rest, there is a girl waiting for you" : Hiruzen said while puffing up smoke
Raoul left while having a light blush
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At the Hatake house
"OI where is my otouto?" : Raoul said with a smile on his face
"Not at home" : Kakashi said while walking in front of him with a glass of water
"Pack your bags, we are going on a mission one week later" : Raoul said with an excited expression
"I know. The Hokage already told me when you were gone" : Kakashi
"That old man , he fooled me" : Raoul
"I guess so. Leave him and go first meet Kurenai, she came here everyday for the past week, it was so annoying" : Kakashi
"Watch your tone, boy" : Raoul said as he went to wash up
Raoul went to his room after washing up
"Lucy, show me only my current attributes not that long panel"
[Strength : 714
Speed : 393
Intelligence : 250
Stamina : 428
Chakra : 1057]
"Hmm I am slowly getting stronger, by the time of 3rd ninja war I should be at the low-kage level at least and make a name for myself" : Raoul
At this moment Raoul had forgotten that Minato had invited Raoul and Kakashi for a dinner that night
-At Minato's home- (Yes he is already married here)
"You invited them tonight right?" : Kushina
"Yes. Although he is a shinobi and a good one at that. There was a bit of loneliness in his eyes. He has no one except his brother so I thought to invite him for a dinner tonight and also asked him to call me nii-san. They will come around 7 p.m." : Minato
"Then I will make tasty food for them" : Kushina
At the Hatake house
It was already 6:30 p.m.
Raoul woke and was leisurely walking when he remembered Minato's invitation and remembered Kushina's temper
At that moment he knew, he fucked up
"OI KAKASHI QUICKLY GET READY WE ARE GOING OUT FOR A DINNER" : Raoul shouted in fear while running to get his formal wear.
"Where are we going? and why are you running like this?" : Kakashi
"My captain, Minato invited " : Raoul
"I don't think he will kill you if you are late." : Kakashi said while not understanding the severity of the situation
"He is a chill person, he is not the problem. The problem is his wife's temper I heard from the rumors. You better get ready soon or you will incur her wrath" : Raoul said while wearing his shirt
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