《Controlling time in NARUTO》2. Shu To The Right World
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"-__-" : Raoul
"Well anyway you were supposed to be revived in the world of Chakra. Hmmm it seems you also have the blessing of Chronos, you can freely manipulate time " : God
" First tell me whose fault was it that I was born in the wrong world and also how does it affect me?" : Raoul
" To be honest it was my fault for you being born on that planet and as for how it affects you.... well if you are born in the wrong world you usually end up not being able to fit in the world and have fights with the residents of the world and even maybe kill them though it does not happen commonly." : God
" So due to your fault I was living in hell"? : Raoul
" I will compensate you for it, I will give you two things while sending you to Naruto world. First, your fate was supposed to become strong at Kaguya level but die before you get 40 years old so I changed it and gave it to you, it completely belongs to you it will be how hard you work, nothing is fixed. Second I put seals on your time controlling power so that it does not overwhelm your body. Every year a seal will be lifted and your powers will increase. For example when you finally fully unlock half your time acceleration power, you can start unlocking another seal, but I would say that it would not be good to unlock 2 seals at the same since it will take a huge toll on you body. Oh! and you can also stop unlocking a seal. Do you want any other thing?" : God
" Well I would like to ask how many levels does each power have?" : Raoul
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" Each power has 12 levels" : God
" Also can you give me a system so that I can easily dominate the world" : Raoul
" That will be difficult but can be done " : God said while he thought " This kid seems to be getting a little over in his head looks like I need to increase the power scales of the ninjas".
After 4 days Raoul was finally able to get the system
" Now I will send you to the Naruto world, there your name will be Raoul Hatake and you will be Kakashi's big brother by 2 years. You are currently 6 years old, a little while after the White Fang's death" : God
" Understood, please send me there" : Raoul
" Alright now Shu To The Right World" : God
After that Raoul started to feel like he was falling from a very high place and quickly approaching the ground, he was really scared due to the fall but also excited about going to the Naruto world. After falling for 30 seconds when nothing seemed to happen, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his head and felt like his muscles were being torn in the rest of his body.
At that moment suddenly Raoul woke up in a Japanese style room while his whole body was filled with sweat and he was panting like crazy. He suddenly noticed that he had different hands. they were much smaller and softer than a 30 year-olds. The first thing he did was jump up to the mirror and started to check how he looked.
He seemed to be around 6 years old, 115 cm in height and had silver hair which were lying on his forehead in a style, not like a certain someone's physics defying hair. He remembered about the system and decided to check it out.
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"System" Raoul said in his mind
[System online]
[Request the host to first name the system to proceed]
"Well are you male or female or..." Raoul said thinkingly
[The system is female but can change according to host desires]
This somewhat did not sound right to Raoul
" Alright then I will name you ale- no your name is Lucy" Raoul decided after he was about to name her on someone of almost same species as her.
[The system has been named "Lucy"]
"Now show me what you got" Raoul said thinking about cool powers he may obtain
[The system has status, quests and inventory tabs]
"Whoa hey what about the shop where I take my points to buy rare things for" Raoul said while being almost in a state of panic
[There is no such tab as shop as shop in the system but the host may get rewards every time you kill a ninja for the first time]
Raoul thought for a while and finally said " alright show me my status"
[Name : Raoul Hatake
Bloodline : Hatake
Talent : ninjutsu - 70 (out of 100. Someone like Kakashi has talent of 80)
Kenjutsu - 80
Species : Human
Strength : 12
Speed : 15
Intelligence : 12
Stamina : 13
Chakra : 20
Special ability : Time acceleration (time is the same for you but slows down for the rest. currently at 2x)
4 abilities locked
Jutsus : S-RANK
A-RANK
B-RANK
C-RANK
D-RANK - Clone technique, Transformation technique, substitution technique, Basic Hatake kenjutsu]
"Hmm So system currently my power will be around what level?" Raoul asked the system curiously
[Currently the host is at the level of a student who just got out of the academy, extremely weak]
" Shit, I need to work hard" Raoul thought
"System what would be the attributes of a genin ?" Raoul asked the system in his mind this time without speaking from his mouth
[Strength : 30
Speed : 25
Stamina : 30
Intelligence : 30
Chakra : 50-70
these are the minimum requirements for being a Genin]
Just as Raoul was about to say something he heard a cute voice call him in a worried tone " Raoul-nii-san you should not get up from the bed right now, I don't your fever is down completely"
Raoul instantly recognized this voice.... This was... His little brother's voice, or at least this body's previous owner's
Raoul suddenly thought in his head for a second " Due to taking your body I at least promise to treat your brother as my brother and care for him"
Then he gave Kakashi a reply " Oh I am fine now"
Raoul got down and let Kakashi touch his forehead with his cute little hands.
After confirming that Raoul was fine now, Kakashi went back to his room saying he was going to rest now that Raoul was fine
This also got Raoul thinking" Now that I am in this world I also have to decide....."
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