《EU: Novum Orbis Terrarum》Not a chapter but...
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Hello guys, It's been maybe a week or several days since I started writing this and yes I have something to say about this.
Ok so, The concept of an EU in another world is new of course given that I have searched far and wide for this fanfic to appear to no avail. So, I wrote myself one in response to that matter. The major problems I encountered when writing this is grammar which is pointed out by DoritosMD and Roan who just rewrote an excerpt of the first chapter. This led me to believe that my grammar, dialogue, and sentence structure may be FUBAR that I ended up overusing the same words in some chapters.
You see, I wanted to avoid overusing the same words as that made some sentences wordy or unclear to average readers that the drop on views became so clear when I checked the dashboard. I may theorize that some readers weren't aware a new chapter has come out as I uploaded new chapters everyday which leads me to the fact that I can quickly run out of steam and at the same time sloppily writing new chapters which would cause reader views to decline. I also tried extensions like Grammarly and other alternatives to improve but overelying on these extensions would make me as an Author unable to improve my grammar.
Thus I want to discontinue this and all until I improve sentence structuring, grammar and dialogue as those are the major issued that plagued much of the chapters.
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Essence of the Dragon
Saelina has had no say in her life, thus far. She's spent the last decade barely eking out a living, on the outskirts of Mahlein, courtesy of her former fiancée and his father, who've pushed her further and further towards starvation. She has done things most people would find beneath them and still she stands. Things change when she finds a wounded sorceress in the woods and decides to help the woman in the hopes of a hefty reward. Ezeas is a Nyxan scout, sent out to retrieve an important weapon, believed to be in the possession of a crafty sorceress. His country is on the brink of war and needs the help of the dragons, only given to those who posses a bit of the mystical beasts' essence .~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "If you did not have to limit yourself to...anything. What would you wish for? What is your truest desire, Saelina?" "Power." The answer came without deliberation or pause. "The power to never starve, to stand on my own, without someone holding me up. To reject whomever I want, whenever I want." Tahlisa's gaze became more intent and she moved close to her rescuer. "Say you had that power, right here, right now. What would you do?" Saelina smiled cruelly. It was a wholly new expression, yet it somehow made her features terrifyingly beautiful, Tahlisa realized. "I'd burn down the Tower and force the Harrows to watch as their home, their legacy turns to ash."
8 142The Forgotten Lands
The lands close to the edge of the world, which is marked by an ever-present fog, are known as the barrens. A blighted land in which crops struggle to grow , with only the very poor and desperate to occupy the scarce villages. Naturally making it a haven for outlaws.It is in one of these barrens that a raider called Raegan was born and raised, feared and respected by the cut-throats he grew up around.The world has been told that magic is responsible for cursed regions known as the Forgotten Lands. For this reason anyone with the gift of magic are labelled abominations, a crime punishable by death and enforced by the Malleus Maleficarum, the worlds leading religion. Raegan is one such abomination, untrained in whatever magic he may have.Even in the lawless barrens those with magic aren't looked upon favourably, and so Raegan has kept his 'gift' hidden from all but his closest friend. But now he wants to leave behind the dangerous wasteland that is his home and everything he has ever known, in the effort to seek new experiences.No matter where this new path will take him, good or bad.
8 86Shatter
Inke is a Shatter: a high-tier adventurer focused on hunting down and destroying rogue dungeon cores. When she's given her oddest assignment yet, to secretly supervise the growth of a unique young dungeon, she doesn't know what to expect. Especially since her task is to prevent people from destroying it. Except that quite literally everything about this dungeon is abnormal, from its monsters to their loot, and Harin, the unusual adventurer in her party. ...Not that she's starting to form a bond with Harin or anything like that. And then Inke runs into the dungeon fairy. A dungeon core novel, but one told from the perspective of a dungeon slayer. Currently participating in NaNoWriMo, so updates are either daily 1.5k chapters or longer 3k/4.5k chapters with gaps in between. Also participating in the Royalroad Writathon.
8 84The worth of his ambitions (ASOIAF)
Roman emperor Lucius Domitius Aurelianus finds himself betrayed and murdered on his way to invade the Persian Empire. But after a series of events that challenge reality as he knows it, he finds himself sitting at the bank of the Blue Fork watching the stars with nothing but a sword to his name. How will the man who earned the monicker "Restorer of the world" fare on this new land?
8 127For February's Rain
Once hailed as a worthy sole successor to the famously righteous Immortal Master Ning Shan, the disgraced Immortal Chen Xi, Wan Yu, finds his end in the hands of justice, after the demonic sect betrayed him and handed him to the disappointed masses. Supreme Leader of the Frozen Dragon Sect Ye Xiyang opened his eyes 17 years in the past and smiled. "Aren't you going to help me?" Wan Yu raised an eyebrow and continued to chop wood. "Aren't you asking for a bit too much? You're a man older and stronger than me, if you really want my help then help me with these logs first." "Ah, but you're the sole disciple of the just Immortal Master, why do you pick and choose who to help?" Clear eyes twinkled with amusement and exasperation. "Because people like you exist, what do you think? So, are you helping or not?" This work contains LGBT characters and gay main leads.
8 313Halloweenish Project Time Lapse
Karatsu left his old school and start his new life at St. Lucario AcademyAs he wants to forget about his past he tries to join the Music Club and to make friends.What will happen to him after joining that Club?
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