《Avatar of Time》Rewrite
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I'm not happy with a lot of elements so far.
The early pacing is not what I want it to be. The litrpg elements overall doesn't really suit me. So far I have been posting chapter, only to edit them pretty heavily afterwards, not just fixing small mistakes i overlooked.
I will aim to try and improve my writing and only post chapters im happy with, as well as create a backlog of chapters that will allow me more room to change things before they go public.
Thank you for your time!
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