《The Legend of The Demon Prince》chapter 1 : innate talent
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The world is a vast entity! It is too vast for a single person to traverse in a single lifetime. The world contains uncountable number of galaxies and each galaxies contains millions of stars and hundreds of planets. Most people die without even being able to roam their own planets, but the same can't be said to be true for cultivators!
Cultivators cultivate and store heavenly energy of nature in their dantians and hence break through boundaries of mortal realm to step on the path of immortality. The path of cultivation is very difficult to proceed and there are many obstacles but the person who can cultivate can obtain power beyond limits of natural body.
The story begins at the capital of the Kong demon dynasty of the Kong demon planet. The dynasty has been established a few billion years ago. Ever since then it has been flourishing and at present controls 1000s of planets in the GU demon galaxy. The most powerful person of the Kong demon dynasty lives in the capital of the planet black tiger city. It is indeed the emperor of Kong demon dynasty Kong Meng.
The emperor has 72 wives and 1 or 2 children from each of them but his most beloved is only the demon empress Kong ling. emperor had a son with her named Kong Yue 6 years ago.
Today it is the time when a child is checked for his innate talent in the dynasty. Currently all the children of the emperor were being brought to the royal palace for purpose of checking their talents in path of cultivation.
The talents of young generation were being checked at the palace courtyard. As Kong Yue was brought in courtyard he is too happy to contain his happiness. Many a times he had wished to go to royal palace and play with his father but his mother always restricted him and promised if he had gained the approval of elders after his talent was checked he will be able to spend time with his father.
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After all emperor had 96 children, how could he devote time to each child? Most children will only be able to see their royal father only once or twice in their lifetime. As Kong Yue approached the courtyard he was greeted by many servants and maids. He saw a queue of children standing in front of a large tent. The tent was finely made and was large enough to fit 50 men. Time passed as finely it was Kong Yue's turn to finally enter the tent. After entering he saw 2 elders of Kong dynasty sitting on chairs.
One of the elders had a long black beard and a long black face. He looked to be around 30 or 40 yrs. old while the other appeared to be somewhat younger with a small goatee. As Kong Yue entered he saluted the elders, "Good evening elders" and elders replied with a nod. One of the elder with a goatee asked
Kong Yue to place his hand on a black pearl place on a table. Kong Yue as instructed went and picked up the pearl.
The elder then came near him and also placed his hands on the pearl. Soon a bright light came from the pearl shocking everyone in the room. Kong Yue asked with curiosity, “esteemed elders what is this light?".
The elder only had a shock on his face. He hurriedly went out and asked another elder to come while the elder with black beard wrote down some details on a paper.
The 3 elders looked at Kong Yue and the newcomer elder said “young master you have a high affinity with natural energy and hence will be able to cultivate to a very high realm with your talents, congratulations!".
Hearing this Kong Yue couldn't express his joy and after bowing to the elders went to his mother’s courtyard.
His mother courtyard was placed in the water haven lane where usually all the nobles lived.
Inside a courtyard, Kong Yue happily jumped at a woman and cried out, "Mother see here I have a high talent, I have the elder’s approval. Now when will we go see royal father?”
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His mother smiled with brimming joy at his son's result and said "3 days later we will go to the royal palace and meet your father. Are you happy now?”
Listening to his mother’s consent Kong Yue could only laugh as he went running to the dining room of the house. Behind him a voice could be heard, " be careful don't run!”
3 days passed quickly and the day arrived when finally Kong Yue would be able to meet his father for the first time. With his mother by his side Kong Yue went inside a horse cart to go to the royal palace. After a few hours they reached their destination, the royal palace. as Kong Yue stepped off the cart he saw a lavish palace with gardens so wide as if they had no ends.as he was surveying the surroundings suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulders and nodded to his mother as they went inside the gardens guided by a servant.
Inside the palace Kong Yue saw his father for first time standing in front of him. His father was a big man 1.9 m in height and with large muscles. When he saw the mother son duo emperor Kong Meng couldn't help but smile.
There were 20 children in the palace including him with their mothers. Some were older than him by a year and some were of his age. emperor addressed everyone and standing from center of the palace court room said "today I have gathered all of my children who have reached the age of cultivation and one of them has the highest talent recorded in past 1000 years , Kong Yue come up here."
Hearing his name Kong Yue’s cheek got red as embarrassed he went up to his father and faced everyone in the palace room. "Ha-ha finally I have a son who has made me proud before even starting cultivating. Kong Yue come here to your father's side".
Hearing his father’s words emotions went into a turmoil inside the little Kong Yue as he went and hugged his father for first time.
"Ha-ha, good good I will make sure you receive finest education and techniques in the future as well as oversee your progress myself".
"Thank you royal father"
Kong Yue was so happy that he wanted to dance in joy but couldn’t do something like this in here in front of everyone. He smiled with joy at his father's praise.
His father placed his hands on Kong Yue’s shoulders and then his face went blank.
Kong Yue couldn't help but ask "royal father what happened are you alright?"
His father only said "nothing" and sent him back to his mother.
After few hours Kong Yue was back at home and as soon as his mother entered the house she started crying.
Seeing his mother cry Kong Yue asked with worry on his face, "mother are you alright?”
His mother said hugged him and cried even loudly. At this he asked again "mother tell me what happened? Was it father did he bully you? What happened?”
his mother said with a trembling voice "your father didn't do anything , it's just he told me that he found that even though you have very high talent you will not be able to cultivate ever! Your dantian is not empty like normal people but filled. There have been a few people in our dynasty that had the same condition and couldn't cultivate their whole life.” then she started crying again while Kong Yue only started with a shocked expression.
He knew how important cultivations was and how powerful a cultivator was. He knew that now that he had a filled dantian he won't be able to cultivate, but he can't give up like this. But even he couldn't do anything but cry and started crying loudly.
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