《The Journey of The Three Immortals》Chapter 3- Saving The Host
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"U-Unstable?" (Huo Jin)
Huo Jin finally managed to stutter a word after recovering from Master Feng's words.
"I am sorry, but with the soul fluctuating like this, it is too dangerous to try and stabilize it." (Master Feng)
Master Feng gave an apologetic look, Huo Jin had just lost his wife who died from giving birth, and now he was going lose his son. Truly tragic!
"Is there any chance of him getting better?" (Huo Jin)
Huo Jin was desperate, he did not want to lose his son, he had made a promise with his wife to take care of him.He definitely wants to uplive that promise, but now.....
His heart was breaking from the news of his son dying.
"I will check his condition tomorrow morning to see if there is any improvement." (Master Feng)
".....Many thanks, Master Feng." (Huo Jin)
Master Feng then proceeded to leave the room, alongside his servants, leaving only Huo Jin to solemnly weep for his son in the room.
"The maggot is dying? Must be because of us." (Eva)
"Do we save it or let it go?" (Celio)
The two were contemplating whether or not they should save the child, while Eli held her chin, putting together her thoughts.
"...No, if we save it, we won't be able to complete the task." (Eli)
"Yeah, but what if this is another trial from the old fart?" (Eva)
"Considering Master Sliver's attitude and what he would do in this situation.... He wouldn't really care." (Celio)
"Great! We let the maggot die and it flies off to Nirvana or Heaven to live a better life while we take over the body, something like that." (Eva)
"You'd think Heaven would want it? It's hideous." (Eli)
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"But then again, Master Sliver always does the opposite of what he says." (Celio)
"......" (Eva & Eli)
'So what the fuck should we do?'
The trio discussed until their scalps became numb, while suddenly noticing Huo Jin praying for his son.
"Heavens,Huo Yi, my son, please save him! I will give anything for his life." (Huo Jin)
The trio listened silently while Huo Jin wept and coaxed his child.
"Wait, now that I look closer,this man... is not bad-looking!" (Eva)
"....I actually agree once." (Eli)
"......" (Celio)
Celio was left speechless, here they were looking at a sad scene of a father crying for his son's life, and his sisters hormones were acting?
Shaking his head, Celio did not know whether to laugh or cry!
"For the sake of this 'handsome' man, shall we save the child?" (Celio)
Celio suggested, saving the child might give them a 50% chance of getting the first material for the soul weapon. So it was either win or lose.
"Let's do it." (Eli)
Eli grinned,Bashing her fists together.
'Hold on, let's wait until he leaves the room." (Eva)
The man got up,giving his son a sad smile and called to his guards.
"Lin xiao, Tang Yu, report to me if anything happens to my son." (Huo Jin)
"Yes sir." (Lin xiao & Tang yu)
"Son, I have to go to work, okay? Heavens, please take care of my child." (Huo Jin)
Huo Jin walked briskly out of the door, leaving silent footsteps so as to not awake Huo Yi.
The two guards stood next to the door, looking vigilant.
"Shit, they're not leaving." (Eva)
"Plan B, someone has to substitute the baby's body, while we restore his soul." (Celio)
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"My soul rank is at the peak, there will be more success if I do it. So one of you fucks have to do it instead." (Eva)
Eva immediately shot down the role, who the hell wanted to lie down on the bed for months?
Celio and Eli stared at each other, suprisingly coming to a conclusion.
"I will do it, I have more patience than the two of you." (Eli)
"Then it's settled." (Celio)
Celio and Eva took action and grabbed the soul of the child,returning to the soul dimension disappearing with a flash, whilst Eli immediately dove in to take control of the body.
'Ugh!' Eli's muscles felt as if they were about to tear, along with the cramped and numb feeling in the body, was this how being a baby felt like?
'Haah...haah..' taking deep breathes, she forced herself to adjust to the pain.
'3 months...only 3 months..'
She chanted inside her head, hoping to distract herself from the cramping sensation. However, sooner or later, she would have to realize that it was not 3 months, but 7 months.
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Poor Eli XD
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