《LEUR: The Unsung Tales》Author's Note
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Hi guys! As I prepare to write more of the second book (not very far in, only 20 or so chapters at the moment), I'm curious for feedback on the first. To that end, I have a series of questions I'd like to ask my readers to get an idea of where I could take the story.
What was your favorite part and why?
Your favorite character, main and side...and why?
What do you think might happen in the future?
What do you hope will happen in the future?
Now a few critiquing questions.
What did you like the least and why?
Was there a point the story seemed to drag on?
Was there a character I didn't give enough attention to?
Least favorite character and why?
Feel free to bring up anything else you'd like. :)
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