《Ouroborus》My Change
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That night after i slept i felt some one calling me as i tried to find the source of it as i was getting up from the bed the world around me seems to change , i looked around it is all blackness as far as i can see it is all black and slowly slowly light seems to form in the darkness.
The light was of all colours imaginable and was taking a shape of a human being as the light finally took shape of a human ,i was astonished to see it was me standing in front of me there was just one difference ,that being or whatever had golden hair instead of my black and as the colours vanished the golden haired me opened his eyes and his eyes were blue instead of my black eyes , i am feeling a enormous pressure from him , he is not emitting his killing intent or bloodlust just him being here is giving this godly pressure which is causing me difficulty breathing .
He smiles a little upon seeing me all tensed up and nervous , he finally speaks "Summon Sun Guardian "
and my sword is in his hand he tooks a look at it and smirks then looks towards me and says
"It is a little weak but perfect for the current you"
then he grabs the sword with both hands and he suddenly has two swords on his hands both are Sun Guardian , i am more than bewildered now and i have so many questions in my mind , i want to ask him , who is he ? what is he ? why does we look alike ? where am i ? what is happening ? why are there suddenly two Sun guardians ? but i do not dare to ask him any question against his godly pressure as i build up my courage to finally speak something he tosses me one of the Sun Guardian i catch the sword and again try to speak but i stop as i hear a feminine voice from the Sun Guardian in his hands
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"Master My name is Sal and i will server and help you as long as you live "
He however does not answer and i am getting more confused by the second that Sal is she the ego of the sword as i heard ? why is she calling him master as i perfomed the contract ? are the both swords same or is one real and one fake , or if both are real how can he create a same sword with a ego in a sec ? as much as i would like to ponder upon all these questions he does not give me time .
he chants " Mirror Body Reflection "
The pressure drops drastically from a godly presence i can say now he has a strong presence he kicks the ground with his left leg and sprints towards me and slashes at me his words is emitting a orange fire like energy i block his attack with my sword but i am thrown back i perform a back jump and try to stop my body he however does not give me time to balance my self and performs a cut at my abdomen area i try to deflect his attack rather than block learning my lesson the first time but the force of his blow makes my hands stunned for a seceond and he does a horizontal cut on me i immediately use the technique Earth's Aura which makes my aura take the shape of body armor and provides defence nearly as strong as the dragon scales , his slash however sent me flying again and i fly through air and fall on ground like a stone skips on water .
My head is bleeding and my body has a deep cut from my shoulder to my abdomen area and that after the aura body armor , if i had not done the it he would have split me in half literally i become scared for the first time in my life , i try to stand with the help of my sword i look towards him , he is just standing there waiting for me get up with a look of disapointment on his face i get angry on his look , i remember a technique Josh taught me which is like a suicide attack
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i make up mind to at least cut him once and start to perform the technique he however still wait but now his expression tells me he is looking forward to taking my attack
"Let The Limits Be Removed And Unshackle The Soul"
it is not a spell more like a key phrase to activate the technique my aura , ki ,and mana three different energies mix and form ying and yang symbol and my body has a boost like 100X more powerful than before i leap in the sky and perform a slash downward towards his head as he raises his sword to block the slash i kick the air and go behind him and try to cut his head from behind but just a sec before my sword meets his neck , in a flash he blocks the attack with his sword that too without turning his head , at that moment i lose my all hope because the attack i just performed had all my power of the boost behind it and he took it without breaking a sweat and i cannot keep up this state of body for long because mixing or using ki , aura and mana at the same time is very taxing as it uses up my life force for it. i stand and sheath the sword and close my eyes to wait for the finishing strike but it does not comes i open my eyes to see that his hands are now empty and he has a big smile on his face he comes towards me and remarks
" That last attack was ok but otherwise you are still very weak grow strong so we may meet again and head towards Erun"
Why would i ever want to meet you again ? and what is Erun it sounds familiar, he holds out his hand and a round ball like blue light appears he places that hand on my chest and the light goes inside me and he vanishes ,i suddenly feel extreme pain in my entire body , my muscles are constantly breaking and repairing themselves and my bones are getting more strong , after what seems like a long hour my body stops breaking and repairing itself and i open my eyes to find myself on the bed in the castle room i look outside it is still dark .
Was it a dream , a illusion or was it real i get up and sit on ground in a meditative posture and feel my entire body ,every muscle in body seems to been enchanced and i have gotten 50 percent more powerful than before, my body already had unnatural strength before now i can say i am monstrously strong i clench my fist , i can feel how strong i got just by that i am curious as to who or what my golden haired look alike is but no point in dwelling on things i cannot solve besides he did say we will meet again when i get stronger it will be fun !
UNKNOWN P.O.V
In darkness on a throne made from a bones is sitting a black skeleton sitting wearing a white robe , his skull sockets have a black red fire in them and a skeleton wearing a armour is kneeling in front of him a voice comes from the left side of the throne a orb is floating there the orb commands the skeleton wearing the armour in a dark deep voice
" THOSE HUMANS HAVE GOTTEN THEMSELVES ANOTHER HERO DESPITE THE ONE YOU HAVE KILLED AND TOMORROW THEY ARE HAVING A MEETING WITH THE HEROES OF OTHER RACES , I WANT YOU TO GO AND TAKE VRITRA WITH YOU GO JOIN THAT MEETING AS OUR REPRESENTATIVE AND GIVE THEM A NICE SUPRISE AS THERE IS NO ONE WHO KNOWS THAT PLACE BETTER THAN YOU HUHUHAHAHAAA"
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