《Zjjan Master》sp05 02 10, Opposing the faith, The saviors
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Opposing the fate,
The Saviors
Abrupt yet Severed Start, Flashback: Astonished, he feels something soft. He props his arms, and under him, he finds a naked lady; she smiles back. Jaino’s face flushes and averts. Amazing, too beautiful. He stares back. —his nose bleeds.
She's so placid. Her face is so calm. She points her finger to his face. “Please go away,” has tasked by Jesifer.
“No! I’m digging in!” He means it. Fortunately he can’t move. Something is restraining his body.
“Now, would you help me rise; please?” And she smiles mischievously. He helps her stand, and then they climb at the rocks...
They Finally Meet, Flashback: Jesifer smiles. She raises the mug. "He didn't do anything." Pouring the brew again on her head, the cold becomes an ecstasy on her body.
Jaino gazes at the fat woman in the counter. "Do you have a vacant room?"
"This is not a motel!" has replied by the fat woman. "Go around the kingdom and find one."
"Madam, I'll pay double, give him a room," has ordered by Renze as Jaino frees his hair.
The loud voice calls, "Tissa, lead them to your room."
Smiling, angry, the lady wearing an apron nods her head.
Jaino holds Jesifer's wrist. He feels her burning skin. "Something is protruding in your lower arm under your coat, what has happened?"
Jesifer gazes down. "Non of your business. Hey! This is—hmmp." Her resistance she surrenders as Jaino carries her behind. She smiles. She feels the warmth of her feelings that her body recalls, she likes it. She embraces Jaino while the lady wearing an apron leads the way.
Let it out, Flashback: "What's your name?"
"Jaino; just a commoner."
"Call me Jes." Jesifer clings on his shoulders and her tears river on her cheeks.
"What the?"
"Hug me tightly. Break my everything if you want. Help me escape to this reality. Tear me apart." She hugs as she sobs. "Please don't leave me." As inside her vision, her mother, who smiles, is slowly fading away.
Trying to resist the heat of her body while he can feel her emotions. "Cry; pour it everything." As tears slide from his eyes also.
The female escort gazes away, yet she can't help but in tears instead.
Intro—
Remembering Criselia's words—
“Well, I just discovered two stupid facts. But, well, it's better for you to discover things. I don't mind sharing him with anyone of you, so long as you contribute highly. Ha ha ha ha.”
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—She thinks, Good grace. Please, cleanse my mind. Yet her hand tightly holds Jaino's hand, doing the same back at her hand. Her eyes look at Jaino's face as she listens at him who speaks,
“The moment I speak the third number in my counting, burn everything in our surroundings.”
“I don't wanna. What kind of plan is that? It's a suicide.”
“Please, trust me. And what is important to you, the people or letting that monster alive?”
“But—” She thinks, Raume, my brother... The roar of the black creature steals their attention. Both of them watch at the sky. The darkness in the clouds (in-shadowing the wide island's—Dandia's sky) turns to a wide black space in the sky. On its darkness, a gargantuan sharp solid earth slowly surfaces. And its figure signifies the wide island, Dandia's demise.
Jaino asks, “Jes, let's make haste before everything is too late.”
“For everyone,” has replied by (the queen) Jesifer, holding tightly Jaino's hand. “I agree and cooperate with you. Let's go.”
Jaino smiles. And they both disappear in the place.
—End of Intro
Outside the kingdom, in the north and south, some cheerful people become doubtful by their curiosity. Watching at the Gargantuan earth, going to move down from the very wide black hole in the sky, some ignorant person mumbles, “What is going to happen to all of us?” And so, allover Dandia, the curious inhabitants watch at the unfamiliar phenomenon.
In a cemetery, standing nearby the two gravestones, the boy Ferdie watches at the sky. On his thoughts, an adult comments, A foreign object may fall. Could the bloodline of the land survive? Or their existence will be doom.
Surrounded by the forest, a ruin; its area (where unarmed captive members of the underworld are restrained by armed persons), among the people in the area, Cally, mother of Jaino gazes at the gargantuan earth. A person, owner of Jelfyr Academy, named Maakin Banal, approaches at her. She listens at him who speaks,
“We have embargoed all of their equipment. Still, there are no trace of Eladin in the place. They might be telling the truth about their leader already in Jelfyr. I'll turn over everything at your hand. I need to report myself at the main exceptional general.”
“Before that, I shall inquire at you. You know about that thing in the sky?”
“Sorry. I too is confused. Still if that would landfall in Dandia, I fear not a person could survive. I hope my thoughts won't actualize.”
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“Thank you for sharing your thoughts.”
“I excuse myself then.”
A comment from a professional and respected person causes panic in a certain group of people. The news, “That thing might collide at the whole island, Dandia, and could kill us all,” it spreads quickly allover the evacuees. The loud noises, from the weary and frighten people, request aid to the soldiers and the kingdom's council to think fast for their salvation.
In a uncertain place, the first prince listens to a person, a formation of light particles, “We are having a hard time to control them all. The kingdom's council is trying to do everything to settle the people. First prince, anything that you can suggest? We can't let them go out of control. If this continues, we might lose their trust.”
The prince replies, “Every person incharge on protecting the place, I believe: the leader of the shadow army, Zahamara, the craze guild, Marshal Dogel, and so on; tell them to encourage the people.”
“Bright idea.”
And so, the informed authorities accommodate the panic people to minimize the chaos.
(1) In the ruined top floor of the tower, holding hands, Jaino and Jesifer have stood. At them, the dragon breathes darkness, thawing everything in the area to ashes. (2) In the air above the black dragon, Jaino swings his swords (in one hand), collapsing his force at the black sphere's attack. He points downwards his swords. Firstly his upper body, he falls himself as she speaks to Jesifer, “Three!” Quickly, he pierces across the creature's body. Jesifer looks back at the holed monster, recovering slowly. She points her free hand at the winged creature. She thinks, This is your end! A bulk of searing hot flame bursts from her hand. Yet her attack cleaves in two and fails to land at their opponent. Jesifer speaks, “A shield?” Witnessing their failure attempt, Jaino and Jesifer disappear and land in the ground. “Have I failed?” has mumbled by Jesifer. Feeling guilty, her eyes produce tears. “I'm so incompetent... I'm sorry...” ...my people.
“Hey, don't blame yourself,” has encouraged by Jaino.
“But, you see, I failed your expectation. I've shown you my failure instead. And now, we are all going to die.”
“No one is at fault here. I just didn't realize I can bypass at the monster shield. That made me failure to notice its shield.”
“You can?”
“Yeah, so let's try again. And this would be our last chance.”
Hearing his words, Jesifer's feelings lighten. She listens at him.
“Just this time, after I speak the last digit again, burn everything in our surroundings. You don't need to look back. Can you still fight and do it?”
Jesifer smiles. “I follow the instruction. Let's go.”
(1) At them the dragon breathes darkness, hollowing the ground. (2) In the mid air behind the black dragon, they appear. At the black sphere, Jaino swings his swords. His force collides to the wave responded by the black sphere. (3) Jesifer thinks, I must not fail now! At the unnoticed dragon; quickly, Jaino pierces his attack. Inside the monster's body, they remain. The searing flame from Jesifer's body surrounds the three of them. The flame devours everything in their surroundings. The quick formation of dangerous flame turns to a huge ball of fire. Its surface cracks everywhere, emitting rays of golden light.
Outside the kingdom, every person sees while the others try to see, the huge ball of fire in the sky of Jelfyr explodes, burning everything inside the kingdom — except to where Criselia is guarding her mansion.
The frightening event despairs to every witness. Silent as the people watch the destruction of Jelfyr. Many cry from the lost of their home. Many feel melancholic. Many are waiting for their doom.
The black sphere in the sky shatters to many tiny pieces until those fragments disappear. It emits a wave, expanding outwards, giving back light in the sky. The sun shines into the sky, replacing the darkness and the slowly-disappearing gargantuan earth. The scenery gives hope to every inhabitant of Dandia.
And so, Taila announces to everyone their victory. The news scatters to every person rejoicing their new acquired hope. Some of them are in tears. Some of them salute to their unidentified saviors, currently not around in the place. Nobles, officials, commoners, mercenaries, prisoners, everyone (not actually everyone) sings the kingdom's anthem.
Above the rooftop of a mansion, now owned by Criselia: still holding hands, Jaino and Jesifer are lying unconscious. Criselia comments, “They're so sweet. If only I have my old gadgets, I would probably take some photos of them. Oh, I get it. I shall paint them instead. I have good memory.”
Some evidence might be needed
Yet some people do the action
To help may hard or costs greatly
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