《Building A village in Naruto Universe》Chapter 2
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what's should I look like uhm...I could. after pandering for while I started creating my body
"let's see..for my body shape I get my self-high-density muscle and perfect abs and chest and back muscle."
"My new body look like a model oh yea. As for my face that's a hard one.
I have always been a fan of Yahiko and his story I even cry when he died.he look badass when he fought with Naruto as well
"it's settle than Yahiko face than. after adding his face you could say it look odd on the body so let fix it. I make the nose a bit pointy as well and for his eye shape Minato eye will do and I'd made the face look for cool-ish."
"I look badass."
I continue and made my eye colour golden amber and as for my hair colour I made it black I can even make it any colour if I want to but I sticking with black for the hairstyle I choose Sasuke but I made it longer and more straight for it to not resembles Sasuke that much
I remove the body hair and I kept pubic one just the public as for the other they never growing back!!
As for my skin color, I kept it the same as my original body after adjusting some more perks
"now my body is done a 6 foot black hair gold eye male with a model body was on the screen Oof this must have god fell when he created us
"yo glowing ball think am done what now,"I said to the ball that was flying around me
"You're done well press the create button on the top left."
"okay :) ."
I did what he said and the screen dispersed and turn into a white light that surrounds me enter my body "wtf.." and soon a male body was formed
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"ok..('-')that was creepy."
"he ball think we're is my cloth..."
"It was in the screen option..dumbass what cloth do you want.?"
shit I was too excited and forgot about that...what cloth should I choose let should a normal one
"give me the clothes Sasuke wearers when fighting Itachi but make it fabric stronger and give me a ninja headband like naruto as for the village make it the land of wave.."
"...okay;" after that the cloth appeared on me magically even the headband I took it of and scratch the mark with a kunai from the space bag,"
"now am a rogue ninja if someone asks me where am from I say the land wave that my new identity."
"What now ball, "I ask in a low tone even tho he could probably read my mine
"Now you choose 1 ability from the list." the ball said
A list appeared in front of me with all kind of ability to choose all of they are related to Naruto world
"high-level chakra"
Description: Gain the amount if chakra a kage level ninja your chakra pool will contain the level of chakra of a kage
"high-level chakra control"
Description: Able to control your chakra with advanced control if you have genin chakra pool you able to exceed chunin in or even jonin in using/controlling chakra
"super strength
Description: can break bolder with your bear hands
After 1 hour of reading the list, I found what looks like the best chose for me there were even bloodline and you could even get a tail beast if you want
"kid you choose yet." the ball said
"ya, I found one that I want it called the " God bloodline' ."
" now close your eye.'
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I close my eye and fell my blood boiled and I felt a unimaginable pain in my body as each second pass the pain increase I couldn't even talk
"that fucker is trying to kill me I know you can hear me ball."
after trying to talk to the ball for countless time I gave up and try to endure the pain every secoud was long as a minute for me
After unknown amount of time I open my eyes slowly the pain was gone but my body eck in front of me was the obs floating
"Two year's four mouths and 9 day's,"the ball said
"this fucker," I trow a punch that was so fast it almost break the speak of sound I was shock but then i felt a pain in my arms
"fuck you broke my hand,"my hand was wiggeling around...
"you punch me first it just self defense."
"you didn't tell me there would be pain and you didn't tell me it would take so long,"I said with murderers tones
"its wouldn't have take so long if you haven't choose the most powerfull gift you think such power will come easy how stupid of you."
"just take me to naruto world,"
"with period of time,"the ball ask casually
what time should i go to...before naruto was born ..I be to old after that.after thinking for a while a decided on the day naruto return to the leaf
"1 year before Naruto return to konaha, and bring me to a nearby village somewherever in the land of fire ,"
"okay boy have a good life and do what you want and remeber they are real human so don't think it's a game,"
the ball said his warning and farewells a white light appeared around me once again I was teleported
"1 months 4 day I've been in this white place that seem to be moving that bastard like to make a man wait....
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