《Forsaken》Important Announcement!!!
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Hello to all my readers, I'm very sad to bring you this news, I'm going to stop writing anymore chapters for this fiction. In the beginning, I enjoyed to write my story, but recently I no longer have that feeling. It feels like writing chapters has begun to become a chore for me, I've gotten bored of it. I'd like to thank all of you who read and enjoyed my story so far. I'm going to take a short break and I'll be back, very soon with a new story, that I hopefully will enjoy writing for a long time! Once again, I'd like to thank all you readers!
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Dungeon Core Chat Room.
This is a slower-paced "experiment and dungeon building" web novel that tries to use the idea of peer-to-peer communication with Dungeon Cores instead of Dungeon to slave monster communication to break up the detailed dungeon building. Rank 1 description: (minimum met for system initialization...detailed description as follows) Each race was given a system by the gods to make up for their shortcomings and balance their place in this world. Humans: Abysmally bad at understanding and using magic unable to use more than the lowest of magic were given the "Skill System" magic in the form of premade skills with use, study, and mastery tied to experience. Elves: Intuitively understand magic and have long lives leading to vast knowledge and skill in their chosen fields. However, as a species, they have nearly zero sex drive and less than low fertility, so they were gifted the "World Tree System" with experience gained through the care of natural areas – gifting the chance of children to increase their numbers without dirty copulation. All “natural” or “wild” monsters are given an "Evolution system" designed around killing and consuming as many creatures as possible, slowly increasing strength and, at thresholds, allowing mutations to alter them multiple times. Dungeon cores are different. Unlike humans, they can see, manipulate and live off mana. Unlike Elves, they naturally crystallize after extended periods of time in high mana level areas. However, they cannot easily move or communicate and typically go insane without companionship. As a species other than the odd eccentric they are unimaginative. Brute forcing solutions without the drive to truly innovate. Thus they have been gifted with the "Dungeon Connection System" a magical version of the internet accessible by their peers that allows them to barter and sell: bait, traps, monsters, and knowledge, as well as entertain each other with “adventure streams” using exciting recorded battles and humorous reels of arrogant chumps biting off more than they can chew to often fatal effects. This is the casual story of a dungeon unluckily spawned far from potential adventurers forced to innovate beyond its peers to find its place in this world. Rank 2 Description: Justification. I've been on a dungeon core kick for months and while I love the genre – it's sparse with entries. Often the forced conflict gets repetitive and frantic solving of threats "power levels" the protagonist to god levels to progress the plot – taking away the nice steady progression fantasy I'm looking for. (Progression in this story is linked to how strong of monsters/traps/whatever he can create not his "level"...this is demonstrated by some of his newer monsters beating his older monsters not with discrete "this monster has 10 attack this one has 40") Additionally, the focus on 3rd parties with their drama takes away from the reason I’m reading dungeon core novels in the first place – I'm looking for magical crafting, experimentation and kingdom building – not defence from higher and higher levelled enemies looking to steal/destroy/control the MC. This novel is kind of just me writing the story I wish I could read. I like thinking about the experimentation that can be done in fantasy settings using 'mana' as an excuse to make up rules and try to keep them internally consistent. IE once I define how a rule works, I'm going to commit to keeping it – no breaking hard truths I've given when it's convenient, even if it backs me into a corner. Hopefully, that should make the story interesting to read even if it's SOL and less action-oriented. There will be problems to solve and a clear progression in strength (of created monsters and knowledge) however due to not wanting to force conflict for the sake of conflict the general theme will be closer to slice of life with few action sequences and no overarching goal so please keep that in mind when picking this up as the genre is not for everyone. Finally, I have a clear goal of what I want from this story (not an endless romp but a series of arcs and then a conclusion that's a couple of dozen medium-sized chapters long) I want to commit to finishing it or at least bringing it to a point of rest. I hate all the engaging stories that stop with a “hiatus” indefinitely so in the event I lose motivation I'll work to end this even if the ending becomes rushed/unsatisfying just to give a sense of closure. I’m planning on including several polls in terms of direction and taking feedback heavily into account if I get enough readers (but may choose to ignore it if it deviates too far from the direction I want to take this as in feedback like: “The MC needs a cartoonishly evil arch-enemy that wants to enslave him and force the mc to pump out magic items” or “the MC needs to make a body and learn teleportation then live with humans” will get shot down without consideration.)
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Rise Of The Greatest Magician
At the end of the world, where only a few Gods, Devils, and humans were left to run away from the inevitable, impending darkness, one man managed to make a difference. Using some of the greatest items in the history of the universe, he managed to create a magic array that would send his soul back in time. He intended to take over the body of his younger self but failed, leaving only his instincts behind. Watch on as the troubled Aurus begins his rise to power in what seems to be just a game. ---------------------------- Consumables? I never got why nobody ever uses them, give them all to me! Player killing? Hell yeah I will! I'd love to get their stuff! Creating new types of magic? I mean... it's what I do!
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Brightstar: The Rising Superhero
Kenn has powers, it's not a weird ability to have in this world, rare, yes, but not impossible. Superheroes exist in this world. So how about he gave it a go? Helping people doesn't sound so bad. However, the thing that may hold him back is his power because at best, it's mediocre, but in truth is nothing more than a party trick. What is his power? Well... If I told you everything now, it wouldn't be a story, is it? I'll try to post weekly.
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Attack On Titan: The Peace I Desire
Vincent, an Assassin from Earth reincarnated to a world filled with mystery. From Walls that covered the entire kingdom to Vincent surprised, since the people of this world are not that advanced for this kind of thing. To Giant-Devil eating monsters. A Titan as the people in this world called them. Vincent, a person tired from killing and just want PEACE, didn't bother about them since they were protected by the Walls, but a tragedy happened as the Wall had been breached and his loved ones died. Anger, Sadness, and 'Emptiness?'. Vincent will continue his dream and achieve, The Peace He Desires. ***** "Let's get ready to rumble?" --------------------------------------------------- Patreon link: https://www.patreon.com/CanYouMakeItClear -------------------------
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[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] Home was all his, until his mother brought THAT MAN into the picture. Munch doesn't like change and there is about to be a butt load of it. He has been an only child, the center of his mother's world, but he feels like her marriage has hurled him into orbit. Why can't things stay the same? Why can't people stay the same? And then, there is the new girl at school. He doesn't even have a chance...does he? This story is set in Texas in 1976.
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