《Forsaken》Chapter 6: A Name?
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Warning: Indecent language
Hi people, just to let you known the main character is called (?Me?) right now because he himself doesn’t know his name, and I don’t want to use (???) because that would mean the person is unknown. Hope you guys like the story!
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So this is the so called bottleneck… I think this is why most people are still Normal. This bottleneck separates the strong from the weak. I’ve been trying to break through, but I’ve had no luck at all.
I think this is due to me cultivating Emperor’s Way. It did say that will be hundreds of times more difficult to cultivate, so I guess this is what it means.
{Some nearby Alleyway, Kashin, Aidea}
Ahhhhhhh (?Woman?)
Stop it you creeps! Get away from me! (?Woman?)
Hehehe… I think we got to teach this bitch a lesson! (Creep 1)
Yahh hoe!! You treated us like dirt, but now you can’t do shit without your guards! (Creep 2)
*Cries* Pl-Please s-stop it… If you want money I can give it to you… just don’t hurt me. (?Woman?)
We won’t hurt you, we’re just going to have a little bit of fun! (Creep 1)
{?Me?’s Alleyway, Kashin, Aidea}
Huh? What was that? It sounded like someone was screaming… I better check it out!
{Nearby Alleyway, Kashin, Aidea}
What are those guys doing to that poor girl?
No… It can’t be what I think it is…
I have to help her…
These guys look like Normal ranked humans, Emperor’s Way says that I would be many times stronger than others of the same class, so wouldn’t Normal Rank count as well?
I hope it does or I’m the one who will be hurt…
Hey! Get off her you creeps! (?Me?)
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Huh… Those two guys slowly turn around… They aren’t scared at all… probably because I’m a child.
Scram kid! (Creep 1)
This is none of your business you lil’ shit! (Creep 2)
Hahahaha… Come at me weaklings! (?Me?)
The two grown men charge at me with two fists…
Hah… Even their fighting skills are second rate.
I easily dodge both of their fists and I sweep my leg throwing Creep 1 to the ground.
Seeing that his buddy is no longer capable of fighting, Creep 2 lunges at me and tries to grab a hold of me.
Creep 2 throws his arms around my neck, trying to knock me out. It seems that Creep 2 is a somewhat better fighter than I thought. But he is SOOOO weak, because I easily break out of his head lock and I throw a punch at his face.
Hahha… It seems he’s blacked out… He also lost a couple teeth from that!
Uhm… T-Thank you for helping me out.... (?Woman?)
Yeah it’s fine, you’re welc… AREN’T YOU THAT BITCH WHO TREATED ME LIKE SHIT!?!?!?!? (?Me?)
Ahhh… It’s you… I’m very sorry for that… Here I can give you this Spirit Pill, it raises the chances of someone breaking through to Low Spirit Apprentice from Normal by 50%. I don’t need it since I have an extra, so YOU CAN HAVE IT IF YOU WANT!!! I-I’ts not like I want to give it to you or anything! (?Bitch?)
has received a "Spirit Pill"
Oh and my name is Alena, what’s your name? (Alena)
Uhmmm… I don’t know my name… (?Me?)
Oh I’m sorry… then how about Mevirs!! (Alena)
What??? (?Me?)
I’m going to call you Mevirs!! (Alena)
It means m-my h-hero in my home language! (Alena)
has received the title "My Hero!"
Oh… I guess that’s fine… (Mevirs)
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