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First of all asalamulaikum.
Hope you all are doing fine in your respective lives.
So i will not beat around the bush and will come straight to the point here.
From the very start i was clear about this story that it is based on a true story but i added some fiction to it. and i made it clear to not judge me or my story.
Some of my readers had commented about this story and gave me some examples of some dramas which i had not seen before. Making points about why i chose a different ending where i could make it better like that dramas showed.
But let me be very clear and i am not mean to any body as i had said from the start of this book or my any book that i appreciate to hear your thoughts but this time, I needed to come forward and reply.
There are two messages in every story.
Visible message and hidden message.
Visible message is something that you read in a story. Something that you get from it but hidden message is something the writer says but you don't get it.
My visible message about this story was;
A weak traumatized orphan girl, engaged to someone arrogant. Finally had a abusive married life and then she stayed despite all and made him guilty of his own acts by not raising her voice or her hand unlike him. And after some chaos, they end up to live together happily.
Now the hidden message;
If i say that Arzoo was weak or Amaan was a haughty and hubris-tic person, THAT DOES NOT MEAN THAT I WANT YOU ALL TO BE LIKE THEM OR PRAISE THEM FOR WHAT THEY ARE.
NO!
I am showing them what they really are but telling you to not be like them.
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Its not like i want to portray them in a graph of weak then strong, arrogant, then sweet and promote to you to be like them.
if there is a antagonist in a story, then that antagonist change to protagonist, its the writer to who made it possible but its you who has the right to like of dislike them.
But simply if you like the antagonist, that does not make you a saddest.
You simply can not blame a writer for writing something which he or she had been working for months. something that they search for it then pen it down.
It takes effort and time to write a story
There are stories out there in wattpad or any platform that it contains abusive language, explicit scenes, rape and what not but at the end the end up together. Why you accept it?
Its because you want it. But some who does raise a point that it shows women weak or that i am being insensitive, then let me tell you that there is difference between a real story and a fiction story. But if there is a real story and the writer had added fiction to it, then its the writer's choice to tell you in what part she added the fiction or how much of it was real?
Lets talk about those women who face hell in their marital life, much worse than i have written but they stay strong. why?
cause we women are strong.
Of course i do not appreciate to life your life with some one who gave you trash feeling but you stay. But THERE ARE SUCH WOMEN WHO DOES THAT.
These kind of marriages does exist but they are empty of love, why?
Cause its filled with guilt and self guilt.
Guilt of the man and self guilt of the women of her lost feelings toward her partner and her life.
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Maybe love blossom between them, but that love is covered with flashes of bitter memories.
Arzoo and Amaan are real characters.
They are real people that i have seen them, sat with them and talked with them.
Every culture and every society has a different in comes with this story.
But not all can stand what you are suggesting.
She stayed simply cause if he was a dog, still she felt protected because there were wolves to eat her up.
And mocking?
I will not name my reader but i am sure you guys have read the comment so far.
iIwould have mocked someone, if there was something.
But there is nothing.
I write a story with all my hard work and time that i give them. all the ideas and every thing are from my mind not from some other source. So i don't know which drama did what that i should have done that too to give a good message. My message was clear that;
THIS STORY SHOWS TRAUMA, AWARENESS, AND CHILD ALLIANCES.
AND AS A WRITER I AM NOT RESPONSIBLE OF WHAT YOU SEE OF IT AS I WRITE IT. ITS YOU WHO CAN SAY, OK SHE DID IT, I SHOULDN'T.
EVERY WRITER HAS A HIDDEN MESSAGE IN A DARK STORY.
WE ARE NOT SAYING TO DO THAT WHAT WE WRITE.
NO!
ITS A STORY. SOME ARE REAL SOME OR FICTION. BUT THERE ISN'T SOMETHING TO TELL YOU, OK DO LIKE HER OR LIKE HIM AS THE WRITER AS WRITTEN IT.
I hope everything is clear now.
If not let me know.
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