《SATURN.》𝟶𝟶𝟾.
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𝐊𝐞𝐞𝐧𝐨𝐬𝐰𝐨 𝐏𝐢𝐞𝐫𝐫𝐞 𝐊𝐚𝐩𝐩𝐚𝐬
𝗔𝘁𝗹𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗮 𝗚𝗮 — 𝟻:𝟹𝟾 𝙿.𝙼
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-Please stay and navigate to me, to me
"Nigga toss that shit. "
Mookie observed the head weirdly and shrugged tossing it on the ground .
"You finna cry?" Nyne asked him.
"Nahh man I just wanted to keep it"
"Well if you clean it than you can keep it" I told him "Drain the blood somehow and we can burn these bodies. "
"Mmcht , nigga get over it. " Nyne said .
"If I want to keep the fucking skull im gone keep the fuckin skull. " Mookie told him gripping onto the head as the eye fell out and rolled onto the leaves .
"Niggas gone learn to stop fucking round wit money"
"Our money at that" Mookie added .
"Y'all ready?" I asked making them stand back . Pouring the alcohol on the bodies which were piled up . I set them on fire hearing the bodies shake frantically.
I grinned .
"Good day of business I—" My phone started ringing cutting me off .
𝐌𝐚
𝗜𝗣𝗵𝗼𝗻𝗲
"Hello?"
"Kisa wap fe keeno?" My mother spoke making me sigh.
"Mwen ap vini tounen ak manje a nan yon minit yon bagay déja" I told her .
She smacked her teeth "Ehh ehhh , Souke tèt mwen, toujou ap fè yon bagay"
I chuckled "Love you too ma"
"Sa a se sa ou di lè ou jwenn nan pwoblèm? Wow."
"Ma i'm coming" I laughed at her getting ready to hang up " i love you"
"Mmhm" She hung up
Haitian moms don't show no love .
"Yo mama funny as fuck" Mookie luaghed dumping the head in the bag making me cringe.
"You gone put that in my car?"
"Yeah why?"
"You better hope ion get stopped , imma run off on yo ass"
"You aint running off on shit because i'm right behind yo ass"
"And i'm right infront of yall asses." Nyne said .
𝐒𝐚𝐭𝐮𝐫𝐧
𝗪𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱 𝗹𝗶𝗸𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗙𝗮𝗰𝗲𝗧𝗶𝗺𝗲..
"Yeah?" I answered hopping in the front seat .
"Listen" She put the phone up to skme doo and I heard loud ass clapping and moaning making me bsut out laughing .
"Let me see yo face baby"
She turned the camera to her and she was crying causing me to laugh harder .
"It's not funny Sleezy come get me. "
"I'm on my way. "
"Where you at?" She started smiling hearing those words leave my mouth . I could see her walking into a lighter space letting me know she was in the front .
"Leaving the woods"
"You on that?"
She was referring to me running train on some bitch in the woods . That's known in our school , it be the weird ass niggas though.
"Ion even get down like that, i'm finna leave yo ass where you at—"
"Noooo" She whined making me look in the phone .
"Don't whine in my ear. "
"Sorry , come get me".
"I'm coming Saturn damn. "
"You wanna have an attitude don't worry about it stay where the fuck you at . And tell Nyne and Mookie I said fuck them since they don't wanna answer the phone. " She ranted hanging up the phone before I could say sum .
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"Oh so you Keeno?" Nyne looked over at me .
We was no where near close , to be honest it was always work . He wasn't somebody I would chill wit on a regular day. I barley know dude.
"You know my name nigga. "
"Oop" Mookie instigated "But what Saturn talmbout I didn't even see her calls. "
"You know that girl crazy." Nyne told him ignoring what I asked him.
"I'm finna call her" Mookie said pulling his phone out
"Give her 30 minutes to calm down, you know how she get" I told him making him nod on a sly.
"Fasho cus she be yelling at a nigga and Ian tryna hear allat"
"iM nOt CraZy" I mocked her making them laugh. "Where am I dropping yall at?"
"Take me to the mall please , I have some things to do tonight. " Mookie rubbed his hands together making me curl my face up.
"I look like the uber man to you?"
"No nigga you look like the man in the drivers seat" He said in a duh tone.
"Drop me off here" Nyne said as we stopped behind some other car . In the middle of the street .
I really aint give a fuck so I unlocked the door letting him out . He aint say shit else . He just left.
"Mhm" Mookie nodded .
30 minutes later .
"Imma call her" He told me as we pulled up to the mall. I shrugged .
The phone rung and she picked up not saying anything.
"Hel—"
"Yes daddy !" She started moaning making me frown my face up .
"Saturn" I called out and she kept moaning "Saturn i'll fuck you up. "
"Yes daddy right thereeee"
I nodded to myself meanwhile Mookie was dying laughing.
"Fuck you laughing for nigga?"
"I-see—hahahhahaaaaaa" He slapped his knee . I hung up the phone and pushed his ass out the car zooming off .
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"Mama stop"
"Leave me alone" She snatched away from me sniffing looking out the window.
"Fuck wrong witchu bruh?"
"N-nothing , I just want you to stop doing me like that." She ranted "I was just playing now my pussy hurt"
"How I do you Saturn?" I smirked
"You take everything as a fucking joke , stop tryna act like you care when you don't" She got out the car slamming the door .
I cleared my throat pulling out my phone getting comfortable in my seat , she realized she didn't have the key to the house and came back.
"Ca-can I get the key?"
"Come hea"
"Boy i'll make you a daddy don't tell me to come here like that" She said making me laugh. I got out the car pulling my pants up and we walked to the door. I stopped her infront of the car .
"Come here"
"Sleezy stoppp"
"Just come here girl. " I pulled her by her jacket making her stumble into my chest . She wrapped her arms around me .
"You making me soft and ion like dat. "
"You do the same shit to me and I aint complaining. "
"You don't have time to complain. " She said
"Oh really?"
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"Yeah"
"Oh really?" I asked again .
"Yeah" She repeated making me suck my teeth .
"Let me take you on a date?"
"Who me?" She pointed to herself . I laughed and nodded making her blush "Yeahh"
"Where you wanna go?"
"Isn't that up to you?"
"I guess it is huh?"
Guide damn
I started scratching my head looking around making her giggle and I seen my momma angry ass in the window with a belt .
"Cmon , let me take this lady her milk"
I unlocked the door and we walked in seeing her in the same spot , same pose , and same facial expression.
"You good ma?"
"Hiiii Ms.Pierre how are you today?" Saturn greeted her and her face immediately changed .
"I'm doing good booboo how are you?" My mom kissed her cheek and Saturn did the same .
Y'all know that cheek kiss that not really a kiss but its kind of like a kiss? That's how Haitians like to be greeted . (A/N -I hate it honestly. )
"Ma—"
"Woy!" She cut me off making me sigh and Saturn laughed "Fèmen Keeno im pale ak pitit fi mwen an. "
"Keeno i'm talking to my daughter"
"Period ma" Saturn laughed .
"Why you on her side?" I asked Saturn confused and she waved me off . They walked to the kitchen and I walked after them going to my room.
"Yoooo" I joined the game . They was talking on some irrelevant shit I just tuned them out and continued playing...
"Yall let me tell yall niggas how Taquan ass was dancing in the rain right?" He started laugh , whoever was tlaking "His girlfriend seen the video I posted and started cussing his ass tf DOWN!"
Everybody started laughing and I shook my head . I woulda been embarrassed.
"What she cursing you out fa Quan?"
"Cus man, she bought me the fazos i—"
"Awww nawww" We all cut him off and I scrunched my face up "Hell wrong witchu nigga?"
"I was caught in the moment bra , aint gone lie either them hoes was fresh out the box. "
"This hurting my heart just hearing bout it" Mookie said
"I wanna see the video" I said running my player up and down try he court .
I wish I could trip these niggas .
Finna go do this in real life fuck a game .
Damn my girl bought me this game
She needa buy me the PS5
No more dick till I get the PS5 settled?
I think so...
Bet!
"Imma send you the video bruh. "
"Who talking to me?"
"Montana bitch. "
"Aint no bitch in me nigga watch out. "
"Babyyyyy!"
I turned my head looking at Saturn loud ass and she stared at me back , until I turned my head .
"So you gone ignore me?"
"..."
"Yo dumbass dog scratched me hard as hell , just cause me and ya mom was acting like we was fighting... look. " I could see her lift her leg laying on her back.
I looked over and seen her knee scratched up a lil.
"You gone be good, you tough right?"
"Bae you kno—"
"Why you calling me that?"
"Huh?" She slightly frowned.
"Damn nigga you gotta talk to her like that?" Somebody said.
"Mmcht man" I sucked my teeth snatching the headphones off and turning off the game .
"Why you calling me that?" I asked her again seeing her getting off the bed looking down .
She getting a lil too soft ,
gotta rough her up again.
"I-I'm sorry I thought we were—"
"Don't call me that shit. "
Her face started changing and she had that look in her eye which made me smile inside .
"Alright" She shrugged . "Youn even got to worry bout me nomore , I'm not coming over here for you nor calling yo phone. "
"Ight" I shrugged acting like I didn't care.
"You don't gotta care cause my other nigga does. "
Alright game over
"What you just say?"
"I said my other nigga does" She huffed trying to leave the room making me launch at her and block the door pushing her back.
"Don't play with me Saturn. "
"I'm not playing... anyways I gotta go . He was planning on taking me out tonight. "
"So you was gone come over here and chill wit me during the day and hang with another nigga at night?"
"I mean , yeah. " She smiled "But I got to get ready , can I leave?"
"No"
"What you mean no?"
"I mean no" I told her "Get back in the bed , take them slides off and go to sleep. If you leave this room imma shoot you"
"Keeno that's a threat. "
"I'm aware , and I promise I don't make empty ones and you know that. " I glared at her before turning the system back on .
"DONT turn it on" She yelled throwing her slide my head and I mugged her .
"Keep on"
"And I will , turn the game off and put it on the dresser"
"Its already on the dresser fuck-tard. . You better get on Instagram or sum. Leave me alone. "
"Youn want these problems Keeno I swear you don't. "
I threw my controller at the wall and got up seeing her jump at it shattering .
"Get up"
"What?"
"Lets go" I threw my set up and she got up slowly , she definitely knows how to fight . Just not me though.
"Come on than bitch. "
She swung on me and I punched her in her chest making her gasp for air "Come on you hard?"
She hit my in my jaw and I swung back missing her since she ducked , she tackled me onto the bed and started sending blows to my face , I threw some back at her stomach .
"No-no stop!"
"Nah nigga you wanna fight lets fig—"
"No Keeno!" she cried and I stopped seeing blood on the bed .
"Sa—"
"Move!" She pushed me and grabbed her phone leaving . I sat on the bed out of breath thinking about why she would leave so fast.
"KEENO!" I heard loud footsetps coming towards the room making me stand up.
"Yeah?"
"You stupid boy!" She slapped me and left out slamming the door leaving me stuck .
What did I do?
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