《Perfect Wish》Chapter 30
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After a while of chatting I heard a knock on the door. Emerald and I headed their while everyone else were waiting expectantly. I opened the door and saw a short man. In his hand was some odd looking bag with an envelop. I took them. Man nodded and left. Then I gave the envelop to Emerald for her to open it. I on the other hand opened the bag. Inside was a white suit. I turned to Emerald who was reading a paper. "Emerald." She looked at me. "Did you give them my measurements?" She nodded and gave me the paper. I took it and started reading.
Dear Ash
I Leia, Queen of Chia Kingdom ask you to marry me. If you will then I am waiting you at..
Emerald come closer. "So. What do you think?"
I shrugged. "I don't know. This letter doesn't make me want to marry her. I was waiting something more romantic," I looked at the ceiling here. "something more.. you know." sigh "Alas. I will marry her just because she is breathing. Thus is my fate."
She slapped my shoulder and took the paper from me and headed towards the girls who was watching intently all the while. I shrugged again and took of my clothes to wear the suit. While I was dressing girls came closer, seemingly doesn't care about the mail for some reason. When I was done wearing the jacket I turned to them. They were looking at me intently and drooling. Seeing their face I couldn't help but pump my fist. "Yes!" That woke them up though. Well, you can't get everything.
After looking at my suit inside-out they went to wear their own clothes they bought for today. I was waiting excitedly, wondering how beautiful they will look. After a few minutes of waiting finally first of them got in.
It was Emerald. She was wearing a dark grean one piece. It was, no matter how you look a generic dress. Dress even managed to hide Emerald's curves somehow. She looked at my face and smiled oddly. There was something wrong with her but I didn't know what. Then other girls started to come. They were all wearing one piece dresses much like Emerald's. Dejectedly I headed to the door. They chuckled and followed me.
Marriage was in a big building with a different look from other buildings in the Kingdom. There was a long stairs leading to the entrance. We got in and tried to find someone to give us directions but we couldn't since there was no one. Thinking it would be the center room we got in. There wasn't as many people as I thought there would. Only about thirty or forty. They should be nobles. At the center sat my future wife. I made my way to her while Emerald took girls to a side.
I stopped right before my future wife. She raised her hand towards me. Since I didn't know what to do, I shrugged and kissed her hand. Which made few people chuckled. Then understanding the meaning I took her hand and helped her to stand. She then took my other hand and walked in a way that would leave us standing sideways to our izleyiciler. There was a wooden stand in front of me so I climbed it to make our heights even. Then she started talking. "Here I am joining my life to yours to make them stand together. Forever." She then nodded to me and I did the first thing that came to mind. I repeated her. She then nodded again and pulled me towards herself. She leaned forward a bit and we kissed for the first time. Our izleyiciler applauded and cheered us.
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I looked at Leia and whispered. “Is it over?” She shook her head. I sighed and started waiting. After a while our izleyiciler came to us one by one and congratulate us. After that, a man came and gestured me to follow. After getting a nod from my new wife I followed him. He lead me to a different room. There was a big bed that made my blood boil. I sat on it and started waiting. After a while I got too bored so I took of my clothes and started exploring the room. There I found a big bed with an envelop. I held the bag and saw the screen that said I now have 75.750.000 Beli in my possession. I opened the envelop and it only said Gift from your rich wife.
I smiled and sacrificed the money to gain experience. After I used the money, I took a look at my statues screen.
STATUS SCREEN
Name
Ash
Age
13
Total Exp
1,010,000
Level
0/100
Exp
0/100
Strength
50
Agility
12
Dexterity
35
Intelligence
27
Charisma
10
SKILLS
ACTING 5/100
BASIC CHESS MASTERY 8/100
BASIC DRAWING 9/50
BASIC MASSAGING 22/100
BASIC SWORD MASTERY2/100
BASIC WRITING 9/25
BLACKSMITHING 40/100
MISC SMITHING 25/100
NAIL SMITHING 22/100
SMITHING SPEED 8/30
WEAPON SMITHING 28/100
GUN SMITHING 5/100
KATANA SMITHING 33/100
SABER SMITHING 1/100
SWORD REFORGING 31/100
BRAWLER 15/50
FOCUS 33/100
FORGE HAMMERING 18/50
MEDITATE 1/1
METALLURGY 21/100
OBSERVATION 27/100
READING 32/50
SENSE HAKI 22/100
SEX 25/100
FOREPLAY 12/100
ORAL SEX 13/100
WOOD CARVING 13/100
WOODEN KATANA HANDLE CARVING 15/25
TALENTS
CLARITY 1/1
MIND EXPANSION 1/10
WORLD TALENTS
GOLDEN MIND 1/1
BLACKSMITHING QUALITY 1/100
CREATE FOLLOWER 1/1
GENITAL SENSITIVITY 1/100
SYSTEM UPGRADES
STATUS SCREEN
ADDITIONAL
NONE
When I focused on my Total Experience a screen popped to notify me I can use them to level up but I didn't. I started to think what happens if I level up now and later get another Talent that would boost my stats. Should I gamble or.. 'I can just get the Talent I want and get back. I am such a genius.' Then I willed my self to go back to Soul Space. Another screen popped up.
15..
Then door opened and Leia showed herself. She was wearing the same costume. She stopped momentarily when she saw my clothes' none existence but she with a stunning show of willpower, managed to look away. Then Emerald came. Then one by one other girls, even Cassie for some reason. They were wearing same stupid one piece. Then I saw another screen.
2..
After they took a wide formation around me they, at once, dropped their dresses. What remains were a type of dress that's covering the only right parts, meaning too little. But before I can do anything my world went black.
When I was at the soul space a thought invaded my mind. It was something like “Hahahaha” Of course I ignored it and tried to will myself to go back to the world, but for some reason it didn't work. “I won't get a Talent. Come on dammit, work!”
“It won't work.”
“What, you! You are not stopping me from going back do you?”
“Why would I do that? I wanted to watch it happen you know? This was all your fault.”
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“Why.. can't I go back?”
“Because you can't go back to the same world right away. You need to either complete a quest or a challenge.”
“So I have to get those [System Upgrades]. Where is my judgment?”
LIFE OVER
JUDGEMENT LOADING PLEASE WAIT...
“So helpful. But I can't go back! Well I know how many points I will get, so show me those [System Upgrades] will you?”
[SYSTEM UPGRADE] QUEST TAB 0/5
Activates Quest Tab
At level 1 enables World Quests and Quest Tracking
At level 2 unlocks inside quests
After level 2 every level increases quest information and rewards
Cost:(2.000.000+(Current Level)*2.000.000) POINTS
[SYSTEM UPGRADE] CHALLENGES TAB
Activates Challenges Tab
Cost: 200.000.000 POINTS
“Well, challenges are off. World quests looks good. I would pick that anyway. Though challenges should be more rewarding. I wonder how hard they are. ”
“Challenges have more then one difficulty and its best way to gain Judgment Points.”
“Okay. I will be buying quests at level 1 when my points comes. What else do you have for me? I don't feel good enough to browse [Talents] right now.”
“I don't think that has anything to do with how you feel. But whatever.”
[SYSTEM UPGRADE] LIMITED SHOP TAB 1/10
Activates Shop Tab
Shop is limited to the things user touched before
At level 1 only consumables can be bought
At level 1 any kind of item can be sold to shop in exchange of material cost.
At level 2 weapons are can be bought
At level 3 armors and clothes are can be bought
At level 4 accessories are can be bought
Every level after level 4 will increase the quality of sold items
At level 10 shop becomes unlimited and has all the items from all the worlds user knows about
Cost:1.000.000 + (1.000.000 * 2e Level) POINTS
“Wow! This is great! Will the shop have the things I touched in my first life?”
“Yes.”
“This is another 2 million. I can't wait to abuse the shit of it. Only if I can gain money by selling things to system.. Nothing?”
“Nothing. Sorry, that's the way to become asocial and that's not fun.”
“Well, true. When will this thing will load. I don't get why it takes time for it to load. We are talking about reality warping things here.”
JUDGEMENT LOADED
“Give me the shortened version please. I don't care about small things.”
TOTAL JUDGEMENT SCORE = 5.000.000 POINTS
SEE YOU NEXT TIME
“It seems those small things worth a million. Interesting. Well, whatever. That gives me another million to play with. There was a Talent called Physical Potential for my followers. Do we have the same here?”
“You have that already. You can technically increase your stats by working out forever.”
“Okay. Can I use the follower, golden mind combo again?”
“No. All your followers has to die before you can use that again.”
“Okay. Then is there a talent that makes weapons stronger? What about perks, will I get a perk tree when I got there?”
[TALENT] WEAPON SOUL 0/10
User can pick a weapon to give a soul for every Level of this [Talent]
Weapon Soul can gain experience by being used to kill things
Weapon Soul increases attack of weapons. Increase scales with Level of Soul
Weapon soul can be transfered between weapons
User can transfer experience between themselves and Soul
COST: 100.000 * ((Talent Level) +1) POINTS
"Well, this is a great way to gain experience. Does it have a Level limit?"
"Its equal to your max level."
"So it will get stronger with me? Can its level carry over?"
"No."
[WORLD TALENT] SYSTEM SKILL ADAPTATION 0/1
User will acess the Skill System of the World instead. User will retain their stats and Talents
COST: 500.000 POINTS
“I recommend you take this. It will be much easier to craft things.”
“Okay. I thought the same too.”
[WORLD TALENT] PERK POINT SYSTEM 0/999999
User can activate perk point system for themselves and up to (Talent Level) other people
Users will gain one perk point per level
COST: 250.000 + (1.000.000 * (Talent Level)) POINTS
“This is no brainer. Wait. Can I use this [WORLD TALENT] for other worlds too?”
“Yes. But you must unlock perk system first. Its quite a bit expensive but you might actually be able to buy it depending on your quests this time.”
“This all leaves me with 50.000 Points. Is there something good for this much?”
[TALENT] WISE 0/999999
User can carry one Skill from past worlds for every Level of the [Talent]
COST: 50.000 + 250.000 *(Talent Level) POINTS
“Well this is great. I already know what Skill I will take with me anyway. I will be getting all these.” After saying this, I started waiting to test something.
“So, what are you waiting for?”
“I am waiting to find out about what happened to your tsundere personality.”
“Its gone! Forever!”
“Aww. I loved her. Why did she had to leave? What a fate I have. Not loved by anyone.”
“Hmph! I love you but you are a baka, baka! Ahgh.. Baka! Baka! You did it again I hate you, hate!”
“Come on, you love me. Don't you want to pass some time with me?”
“Ahh! I am always with you. Don't talk like you don't know it.”
“Well. Don't you have anything to say. Didn't I do anything wrong?”
“You did nothing you could do wrong. You always played it safe except for the start. So there is nothing noteworthy.”
“Well, okay. Thank you for your help. You are the best.”
“Hmph! I don't need your thanks. So go away, now!”
“Okay. Then send me away.”
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