《DISSOULVER》Foreword
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G'day everyone,
This is the first work I have ever released to a writing platform. I have dabbled in writing loosely but all these ideas in my head need someplace to go and this is where I've landed.
I'll keep this brief. I am fairly new to writing so any feedback would be appreciated. Don't hesitate to critique my work and let me know where I'm falling short. Although this is my first piece and something I will continue to work on, it is an original idea that I have tried to put to paper. I would appreciate it if my work is not distributed without my permission. I will solely be releasing my work on this platform in English. If you find my work anywhere else in English or any other language please let me know. Most importantly, if you notice any spelling or grammatical errors, please let me know. I check over my work multiple times but I am not omnipotent. I can and will miss things.
Next up is that I have only written a few chapters ahead. Meaning that this story is progressing as I write it. Things can and most likely will change as I write each chapter. So I may have to go back and edit/change earlier chapters as this story progresses. I have an ending in mind and a vague sense of what will occur throughout but no super solid stuff.
Lastly my schedule. I currently work two jobs and study full-time so my schedule is pretty jam-packed at the moment. I will try my best to release one chapter every 1-2 weeks.
I've said my piece, I hope you enjoy Dissoulver.
Regards,
Jack.
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