Looking for criticism of my Passion Project / an origin Story to the Project / and my writing Project.

Hi, I created a Story which then developed into the origin Story of my passion Project.

After some time, the concepts developed and I thought of a rly cool writing Project, with a bunch of features, while still being held in one overarching Lore of my Passion Project.

Need criticism for almost anything.

Origin Story: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/37025/arechnocadia

Writing Project: https://www.arechnocadia.com/project-book

My passion Project: https://www.arechnocadia.com/

Many of these things are already reaching the range of Books, so do expect a bunch of reading, all emotional and deeply thought over.

If anything to it interests you feel free to join, it’s still young so there is right now only me :3

https://www.reddit.com/r/writers/