《LEGEND OF UNFATHOMABLE ONE》Changes
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"What the hell is this? How is that possible? (John is in a dilemma) am I dreaming or something?"
(John sees his fist and the aura, he only has one question what the heck is demon sense?)
Man, I don't believe this. (surprised John)
(When John checks the rock by tapping it, the rock suddenly starts to crumble into more than 50 pieces)
Man, the demon Emperor didn't say anything about the use of demon sense. I thought it was only used to scare people or something but this is completely different from what I expected. (John)
But the backlashes of using the demon sense are no joke I thought my arm would have ripped off. (frightened John)
It is a good trick to have up our sleeves. Now that I have gained strength its time to head back home. If I go any further I would die for sure. Once I am more powerful I will come here again and reach the top whatever it takes and defeat the one at the top of the mountain. (sees up the mountain)
John packs his stuff and picks up some scales and fangs of the snake. (John preparing to leave)
(after 2 hours John reaches his home after picking over 20 scales of the snake which were at least 7 inches long each)
Sister, I am back home. (removes his shoes and looks for his sister)
Brother, Brother is it really you? (surprised Selena)
Yes, my little sister, this is me and I am John. (explains John)
I don't believe that my brother was skinny and weak but you look so strong with a perfect body. (trying to argue)
Hey, what was that? I was not that week even when I didn't have these muscles. (annoyed John)
Is that really you? And what is with your body? How did you transform this much in just a month? (confused Selena)
Some things happened to me when I was on the mountain. I was lucky to meet a professional gym master who had a body that I couldn't even compare to my body. (I cannot say to my sister that I have inherited the demon Emperor's legacy. She may think that I hit my head or something) (John)
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That explains it, you are so lucky to meet a gym trainer who can transform someone in just a month. (Selena)
I am tired so I will return to my room and relax for a while. By the way, how is mom doing? (John asks
She is fine but unconscious, the doctors said when she wakes up she will be completely cured but they can't say when she will wake up. (Sadly Selena)
I will visit mom first then. (John going to his mom)
(John catches his mom's hand)
Mom wait for me when I become a great raider and I will treat you with the best doctors in the world. (John confidently)
(John leaves to his room)
I am too tired. It feels nice to be on the bed after so long. It would be nice if I had lived a normal life but life is too cruel. I have no other way to live a normal life when I have so many responsibilities. (John)
Anyway, let's get some rest first. (John)
(The next day)
Hannah! (yawning) I had a nice sleep. What is the time? (Sees the clock)
Oh shit! It's already noon I need to go to the adventurers guild soon they close at 2 pm. (gets up immediately and changes his clothes and rushes towards the adventurers guild.)
(After half an hour)
Wooh! I arrived here so soon. Normally it would have taken 2-3 hours to reach the adventurers guild from my house and I reached the guild in just half an hour. This is the result of my training and I was just walking. (Surprised John)
I have reached the guild but if I go in directly and sell these scales. They will suspect me for sure because these items are unregistered and not from the portal. Let me disguise myself wearing a mask.
(John wears a mask and goes inside the guild.)
Welcome respected sir, how may I help you? (Attendant)
Ohh! I needed to sell some things. (John)
Ok! May I see the items you want to sell. (Attendant)
(John takes out the scales he got from the snake monster. The attendant checks the durability and resilience of the scales using a machine)
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Sir, these scales are from a junior class boss know as Seraphin it's durability is one of the top among the materials present in Sivery town. I would need to ask the refiners to give you a suitable price. Would you mind waiting for a while? (Surprised Attendant)
Sure no problem. (John)
(After 10 minutes)
Where is he? Where is the young man who bought these scales? (Refiner searching for John)
(John gets up)
I am here. Is there any problem? (John hesitatingly)
Problem! (Shouts) the problem, no there is none I just wanted to see the young man who bought this. (Respectfully refiner)
Young man, how many of these scales do you have on you I would like to buy them all. (Kindly refiner)
I have about twenty of them with me. (John searches)
What 20! Twenty of them. Name your price for each one. (Impatiently refiner)
I would like to first hear your thoughts on the price refiner. (John asks)
Me I would pay 1300 Ritz per piece are you ok with that. (Smiling refiner)
No of course not! (Old fox he is trying to trick me by looking at his face I am sure that the price of the scales is much greater than 1300 Ritz) These are very valuable scales it values more or less equal to a high-rank material. Why would I sell it to 1300 Ritz? The price for this is 2500 Ritz. (Acting knowledgeable John)
What! Hey, kid, that's a high price. Would you like to lower it? How about 1500 Ritz per piece. (Negotiating refiner)
(After negotiating for 10 minutes the final decided price was 2000 Ritz.)
(John sells 20 of the scales. The guild transfers 40000 Ritz to John's account)
And I have something other than these scales. (John takes the fangs of the Seraphin snake) What are your opinions on this?
(The refiner is amazed to see the fangs)
Woh! These are the Seraphin fangs. The length of these fangs is big nearly 9 inches each. Are these the fangs of the Seraphin whose scales you sold? The Seraphin you hunted was a young one, if it was not then the size and resilience would have faded away. (refiner)
Yes, but why? (John)
The length of these fangs is perfect for a high-grade dagger if the refiner is great. I would buy these from you for 5000 Ritz per piece are you selling them? (Refiner)
Of course, I am not selling it I need a refiner who can refine my daggers from these. (John)
You have come to the right person I am the most highest-ranking refiner you can find in this town but my fees are quite high how about 5000 Ritz per dagger. (Refiner)
I am leaving. (Pretending like he never heard John)
Hey, wait how about 8000 Ritz for both? (Refiner)
Hey, are you trying to rob me or something now only I earned this money and now you are to trying to take this money from me? My final price is 7000 Ritz how is it? (John)
Damn brat! Ok but this will be only a one-time offer, deal? (Refiner)
Ok, deal when should I pick the dagger up? (John)
You can pick them in one month. (Refiner)
Ok, then I will meet with you in one month. (John)
Hey, wait what is your name? My name is
Alferd Alhiem. (Alferd)
Me you can call me Mr J for now. (Waving hand John)
Damn stinky brat! (Alferd)
Sir, what was that? You are the top refiner of the guild in the whole town and people need to wait for days to get something refined from you? But why we're you willing to refine those daggers and at a cheap price too? What is going on I don't understand? (Attendant)
I don't know but I have a feeling that I should never mess with him. He was emitting something from his body which had me pressured even when I am a veteran rank raider? There are more things to him that don't meet the eye, if I fight him now I will win for sure but after a year or so I doubt it. (Alferd)
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