《Hells Pit》Chapter 3: Dark and light
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im sorry for short chaps, did not have time mate, but long chap incoming! !!beware of 4wall breaking rude sassy short narrator!!
(???) hmm indeed Fat Ass
(author) no Just no NOOOOO [th_107_.gif]
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as Eclipse was watching his creations advanced he grew more and more curious about the otherworld. (aka = the Earth like planet)
so he got to work trying to find a way to go to Erstil (name of the otherworld) and almost a decade later, he got a anwser.
a portal like the one he came here with so he started to expiremant. "result a result Finaly!" and so he got to work some more
and this happend. he got the power to show himself to his race, you know what happend? *sounds of screams frantic movement*
so yeah anyhow our hero... villian also got the power of space to some degree like portals and float like a godlike being...
dont say it!
anyhow about 1000 years pass and the demon race got pretty advanced. now comes the fun part. they went and done it.
now there were 2 yes 2 demon lords and 2 groups of hero,s. as you can hopefully tell human fairy Things? dwarfs that i love!
and beast poeple? Author AUTHOR WHAT THE??! WHERE ARE YOU!!!! YOU GAINT PERV!!
(sorry everyone cant spell for banana, we are trying to contain te narrator and give her a chill pill, thanks for the wait)
So these races dont really like the demons bla bla Cliche plot is cliche. anyhow Eclipse is not that happy so yeaa i am gone go on trip
for te rest of this chap see ya loves.
(is is she gone?)
*SOUND OF TABLES CRASHIN OT TE WINDOW*
(???) "GODDAMIT I HATE THEM AHHH"
(???) "calm down lord Eclipse!" says random scubbi or is she random?
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(eclipse) "BUT T-THEY HAVE GONE AND DONE IT AGAIN LISA AGAIN!"
( Cliche name is Cliche)
(lisa) "i know my lord, we just need to find a new demon lord."
(eclipse) "DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG THAT CAN LAST! THEY DONT GROW ON TREES THE TREES!"
(lisa) "what about a dark lord?"
(eclipse) "cant why they like to keep to themself and i respect that. anyway i decided that once in 200 years a demon lord shows,
why? well me and lisa the demon lord needs train for 100 years and well yea so new system check, also before you ask.
dark lords are beings that are unfit for demon lord they hate light they are strong but not on Erstil they are weak just as weak as a normal high demon."
(lisa) "o ok"
suddenly BOOM!
(eclipse) "WHAT NOW!!"
short? o well now whe got a weird narrator Check! bad writing Check! a plot Check! Z()@#@!JSEfh64#84 CHECK!
See ya in the next one o_0
(???) bad author is bad
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