《Unknown Dimension》Chapter 17 Mictland chapter 1
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Mary and Peter were taken by the Deity to another world, where this was in the middle of a desert, red as clay and in the middle of this you could see a huge fissure, like Gran Canon, is wounded in the earth possibly reaches to the horizon, if it were not for some black clouds that could be seen hindering the sunset.
"Welcome to Mictland, this is my kingdom where you will have to overcome 9 hellish levels, until you reach my home my personal level Churchill, where you can choose or be reborn or rest forever! “ Said the Deity
"Something important to know is that in general to get to Churchill, it takes four years to get there, however, you are a special case and where you may last less or longer depending on your abilities. They must also know that they are not alone, for this is the place where after death the souls of sinners are eternally tortured." He said the deity to Peter and Mary.
"This level is Pancuca this is the first level of Mictland, here I leave you, you will have to find a way to get to my house!" He said the Deity dropping Peter and Mary in this place. Turning into a Morpho butterfly once again, leaving them to their fate.
Down here you could barely see the black cloud in the sky, as it belonged to a thunderstorm with a cyclone in the middle. That made the dust fly everywhere hindering the vision a little when seeing over their heads.
They were in a clearing of the ancient city, which had tinges of being an ancient indigenous civilization.
They began to exploit the city to find some clues as to where they should go. With what they discovered doors carved at chisel point on theswalls of the large crack where they had been thrown, the interesting thing is that you could see more than 30 levels carved on them as if they were apartment complexes.
When they turned their faces, they could see that there was a path that would have been towards the desert and towards the other side a temple. But they preferred to explore this place, before walking into nothingness.
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This place seemed like an oasis, because, although it was hot, they could observe from time to time, green trees, however, when running to them had no fruits.
The road where they were, seemed planned for the future as it could pass two trucks side by side without problems, plus a space such as a sidewalk in the corners of the road, where possibly travelers who walked could hide from the sun.
Arrive in front of a temple 30 meters high sculpted in rock.
"Love was not supposed to be left near a body of water or a river Called: Chiconahuapan, where we had to cross to the other side with the help of Xoloitzcuintle or a brownish dog?" I ask Maria her husband.
"It's supposed to be done as the Megicana oral tradition says!" Peter said, wrinkling his face amazed by the rock temple, crouching down and taking some sand in his hand. Closing his fist tightly, so he felt the sand was dry, without any trace of moisture. He did this to judge whether what he was seeing was truth or lie.
"What do we do?" Maria said.
"I think we should, look for water and food and clothes!" Peter said.
"Aren't we supposed to be dead, so we need those things?" Maria said.
"If I know, but right now, we have completely human bodies!" Peter said as he looked at Maria completely naked.
She was a beautiful woman, 1.65 meters tall, a little stuffed, with curves in the right places, redhead with brown eyes and brunette skin.
Her husband always told her that Stan Lee took her as muse to draw Titania from the 1992 X-Men: The Animated Series.
Hearing what her husband said, she looked at herself and realized she was naked.
"Oh God!" Cry Maria. Trying to cover his intimate parts with his hands, all this time he had been looking everywhere, but at no point did it occur to him to examine himself. She saw him furious again and when she saw him, she was mute.
He was also naked; however, he was like when he met him almost as muscular as Arnold Schwarzenegger when he made his first film, but his height was 1.70 meters. However, he had more of a resemblance to Kevin James, the brunette and Latin version of the actor. That it was something that drove her crazy. But I never count because once I told him whose favorite singer was Chayanne, and the very brute, he got into a dance and singing academy to be able to sing and dance like the singer. What she liked because she got in shape like when she met him. But she suspected that if she tells her he looks like Kevin James this man was able to get to eat to get closer to the actor's physique.
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Peter was there, quietly watching her and from time to time, he would look at the door frames, all around him as if the heat and dust of the desert did not bother him.
"Hahaha, there is no one here who can see your nudity, besides me, or is it a shame, to see you as you came into this world?" Peter said, seeing Maria's reaction.
She looked everywhere and saw that there was no one sighing and pulling out her chest and standing upright; said:
"Of course not!" She felt her husband was very sexy. More than when I first looked at him and he said changing the subject:
"Remember that Bunny left us 10% of our powers, before crossing into this world?"
"Yes!" Peter said.
"What is the key word, which our son said to see his status? “Maria said.
"I think it was status menu!" In front of Peter opened a black floating window with white letters that read:
"
Name: Pedro Gutierrez Olse.
Level: 0
Title: Not dead.
Job: Lawyer.
Raza: Guardian.
Innate Skill: Level 2 intangibility, Level 20 flight, Level 2 invisibility.
Hp: 9
Mp: 5
Energy:5 pts.
Espiritu: 5 pts.
Strength: 5 pts.
Fire Spirit: 5 pts.
Agility: 6 pts.
Sense: 5 pts. 5
Vitality: 1 pt.
Intelligence: 12 pts.
Invisibility 20 pts (5) seconds
Intangibility 20 pts (5) seconds
Flight 200 pts (5). hours
Exp: 0 pts. 0
Next Level: 11 pts
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Attorney Skills:
-Ease of oral expression and language proficiency. Intelligence (Int): +5
-Habit or aptitude for reading comprehension. Int + 2
-Sociability. Int + 2
-Discipline and order. Wisdom (Wis): +5
-Flexibility and spontaneity. Wis +2
-Have good psychology. Wis + 2
-Have a conciliatory and diplomatic character. + 3 Wis.
-Be able to act in a self-sufficient way. + 3 Wis.
Guardian skill:
-Be able to increase skills attributes gradually.
-To be or to invoke oneself to the human world temporarily, for a time.
"
"Interesting, open your love status!" Peter said.
"Status menu!" She said:
“
Name: Maria Ferrer Whall
Level: 0
Title: Not dead.
Job: Forensic.
Raza: Guardian.
Innate Skill: Level 2 intangibility, Level 20 flight, Level 2 invisibility.
Hp: 9
Mp: 5
Power: 5 pts.
Espiritu: 5 pts.
Strength: 5 pts.
Fire Spirit: 5 pts.
Agility: 6 pts.
Sense: 5 pts. 5
Vitality: 1 pt.
Intelligence: 12 pts.
Invisibility 20 pts (5) seconds
Intangibility 20 pts (5) seconds
Flight 200 pts (5). hours
Exp: 0 pts. 0
Next Level: 11 pts
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Forensic abilities:
-Ability to analyze, and connect elements. Wis + 5 and Int + 5.
-Communication skills. Int + 2
-Ability to work under pressure. Dexterity + 5
-Organization and practicality. Wis + 2.
-Ability to follow established rules and procedures. dexterity(dex): + 5.
Guardian skill:
-Be able to increase attributes or skills gradually. -To be or to invoke oneself to the human world temporarily, for a time.
“
"It's almost exactly the same as Peter's!" She thought.
"It's just that the difference is made by the work!" He thought.
"As our attributes are almost the same, when posing my mind on Intangibility, I discovered 'we can go to that state for 5 seconds, and Invisibility for that same period of time. In addition, the flight attribute allows us to fly 5 hours." Peter said.
"What are we waiting for to fly out of here?" Mary said.
"It wouldn't be wise!" Peter said pointing to the Cyclone.
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