《WHIRLED》Chapter 55 : The beginning of an end part 2
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Dorotheus and Hereise was surprised...
They have the feeling that the two had concealed themselves,..
Like Yahweh's action...
Irenian and Armadeus replicate Yahweh's dimension...
Which allow them to have a peaceful yet boredom feelings...
They created a dimension which shut the outside spaced completely...
They didn't intended this way perhaps they find a way to communicate with each other...
So they began to recreate the same but this time they wanted to have at the very least..
That the inhabitants will have the same image as them though... Same height..
The three exchanging knowledge of what they discovered everytime...
Though time doesn't exist yet...
Armadeus got an idea...
He entered into the world he created...
From his observing position, outside this world... A circle with one-sided light rotated endlessly revolving the sun....
But from the view inside...
It was more brighter he said...
But where is the inhabitants???...
Lava flare hits him but it was no effect to him...
The world was still reshaping itself...
Sucking every debris caught by his gravitational force...
Meteorite burst from the atmosphere...
It was a neverending rain of meteorite slaming it's surface...
What a pleasant view...
Sounds of the multiple vocanic eruption he heard simultaneously...
Though he created a world billions of Times from the first...
The world was at the state of molten rock formations....
He has questioned himself...
He also decided to asked Yahweh...
But he has a shameful feeling towards how to ask him from the start...
" Hi ahh... Are you busy??"
" Hmmnn... Ohh is that you Armadeus...!!!"
" Yeah..."
" Ohh.. whats with that voice seems your not what you are i guessed..."
" Ohh.. ahh.. it's me.. hehehe... Im just.. you know... Im confused a little bit out of here... But if you're busy... Just continue what you are doing... Sigh..."
" Confused for What???.. your right I'm busy with my new world now... I'm really excited about the evolution.. i don't wanna miss a single changes...
Ohhh... The fish began to crawl from the land... Ho ho... You can do it fishy fishy... "
Sounds like he was amused by that scenery... But for me... Nothing changes...
"Sigh"
He said... What i desires... Imagine what i desires...
He closed his eyes...
He imagine the world fast forward in time... He was picking the right moment to stop the image inside his mind...
The world has now cooled... The water sprouts...
Moss began to show in the water side...
Ocean water began to evolve dramatically...
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Algae converts the sunlight to food...
Photosynthesis has immerged..
Bacteria and fungi began to evolve...
And finally...
First species was a slim with fin swimming the ocean...
Eating algae and bacteria...
The fish poop eated by other bacteria and algae... That caused them to evolve to different species...
As he was back at the land...
The moss became forest...
So many tiny creatures...
Evolving to different kind of species...
A giant like dinosaur rushing to hunt the running injured small like dinosaur with wings...
Armadeus pitied it...
It was almost swallow...
He gave some of his energy to the little ones... To protect it...
But instead... The first dragonkin was born... With intelligent ratio of 300 it became furiously killing the giant dinosaur like creature...
A small part of energy means a lot to the dragonkin...
He will never forget the love he felt as the emotions of Armadeus directly felt by the Dragonkin...
Her name was Devoura..
The first dragonkin who has the intelligence of a God swirling inside her very veins...
What have i done.. Armadeus said...
" Hey Armadeus what are your question... Im sorry i forgot to reply..."
" Ahhh... it's okay I'm fine.... Sigh..."
" Oh common... Okay ill get to you now..."
" Nope it's just okay don't be bother my brother..."
" Hello im here..."
" Heigh... You scared me..."
" Hahaha... Little Armadeus was scared a while ago means he was hiding something... I get this feeling you know... B... Jeezzz what...
What did you do..."
" I ahh... I've helped that inhabitants..."
" Sigh .. you've mess around... As per their height... They will become hard to control you know... Like the world Hereise harvested... I also made some mistakes... All i could do was crying in pain... Sigh..."
" Sorry..."
" Don't feel sorry... It's just.. you know even i did the same mistakes... The problem is i didn't warn you in advanced... So it's also my fault..."
" No it's not your fault... I got carried away with it's situation..."
" What's done is done already... But learning from mistakes makes you feel more responsible.. avoiding the same mistakes would occur..."
" Heyahhh..." Irenian surprised word's
" Heiggh.. "
" Eigghhh..."
" Hahaha you should see your faces... Hahaha"
" Hahahaha..."
" Hahahaaa..."
" So how did you two got in here...??? You know it's my created dimension so how exactly you enter here??"
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" Hmmnn.. as for my situation... I just think to move myself to where you are and instantly i got in here..." Yahweh replied..
" Same as i... " Irenian said
" How's that possible... So if dorotheus and Hereise can also do the same...!!"
" Omg... We better be careful... I just got the feeling... Don't communicate with them okay..."
Yahweh's became cautious instantly...
" But why..!!!"
Armadeus warned but too late for that... He was concentrating earlier to find where they are...
" You know little Armadeus.. i can teleport where you are if i can pinpoint where your location... Means some sort of light communication... we can bypassed any dimension with ease as long as we know where is everybody... You got it..."
" But..."
" Is there a problem..."
Yahweh's examining Armadeus expressions... And form a conclusion...
" No way... Did you contact them!!??"
" Yes but... They didn't caught the wave signal i released outside my dimension... So i guessed they're not picking my locations"
Armadeus was panicking...
" As for that... You must act cautiously all the time..."
" I ahh.. i got a suggestion..." Irenian can't help but enter the conversation...
They lookat him so...
" Sigh... Maybe i can create a dimensional pipe hole connecting Armadeus dimension through mine... Just in case Heriese and dorotheus will emerge here..."
" No wait... Endangering your creations... I won't allow that to happen...."
" It's just the world standby right in the pipe dimension... Whenever things goes wrong you can close the dimension without problem... So he can't harvest that you know..."
" Hmmnn... Okay..."
" That settles now then i must leave for now you know stuff ongoing... I don't wanna miss a thing... See yah..."
Yahweh has left...
" My brother be careful... "
" Thank you my brother..."
Irenian left....
He decided to visit the dragonkin...
" The God has come to us... "
Devoura said cheerfully...
Her race was very exultant after they saw by their own eyes...
They kneeled...
Armadeus was pleased... And saddened at the same time knowing that anytime dorotheus and Hereise may come in here... Destroying everything...
Devoura asked Armadeus...
How they will praised his kindness...
Soon Armadeus put the half of his energy... Into the ring... And created a view point from his dimension so that it will monitor the happenings outside even if it will be alone inside.. it...
He forge a very powerful sealing stone out of his energy...
That separates this world and protect the dragonkin sanctuary by this stone of protection... His soul also devided in two... They know what might happen so...
" This stone from my image... I have a feeling i will be reincarnated so... Wait with me my dear creation.. please take good care everyone..."
As the ring inside it properly place... He put the red gem stone...
The red gem became lifeless stone... That's the proof that the sealed was done...
So he said his farewells and goodbyes...
" What took you so long buddy..."
" I know you will come...."
" Hahaha you invited me so im welcoming myself..."
" May i ask where is dorotheus...!!"
" Ohhh... It's right here..."
" Where??!!..."
Armadeus look around but didn't even feel dorotheus presence...
" How come you didn't know...!!!
Alow me to introduce to you...
Dorotheus in my belly... Hahahah... I already digest his energy... So hes part of my belly now i guessed... Isn't that amazing..."
" Huh...."
He felt the severely ache in his body... Something was gone..
His emotions... He can't control...
His energy burst.... Inside him...
An energy wave explosion wavelength... Destroying everything it touch... Even his precious world... Caught in it...
His energy faded...
Becoming a dust particle...
Heriese somewhat aching in pain...
He suffered severe energy dispersal... He cant regenerate the lost energy consisting his...
But he was still alive... He noticed the dimension was whirled... If he caught in it... Hes existence will be erased ...
" Damn you Armadeus... I won't forget this day... I'll make you pay..."
Still he Sense Armadeus was still alive... But his situation was clearer than the transparent liquid... He must get out quickly...
At last he was out of the dimension...
He saw how it whirled to nothing...
Irenian pipe dimension... Connecting Armadeus dimension...
" This was the leftover... Im so sorry my brother... I'll Promise to protect what's left..."
It was the dragonkin sanctuary covered in circle like barrier...
The world caught by the destruction...
But the dragonkin sanctuary left unscathed...
Irenian was waiting for right time... Still Hereise was here... He couldn't make a move...
At last Hereise gone completely..
He took the dragonkin sanctuary and immediately teleport to the pipe dimension...
You know just precautions...
If Hereise will find me then i have no worries... As long as my creation will be safe...
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