《WHIRLED》Chapter 44 : The creator and the sinner...
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A beautiful sunny day... Looks like Angela was walking down the streets... she was on the way visiting the place where Railee went missing a couple of months ago.. She was a little bit anxious.. suddenly while walking she notice 2 person... what was they saw over that mobile phone... was really shocking she guess by analyzing their expressions... really!! but she just ignore it somehow... After arriving at the cliff railing she cried over and over... That was really a heartache for she knew she wasn't so sure what to do about why Railee's body disappeared without any trace... After she grief... Angela decided to go to internet cafe... To research for her studies... While at the internet cafe counter asking a pc available.. she notice a video where the clerk was surprisedly shocked... the video leak through the internet and went viral she guess due to its 80million views and counting.. same as the two people was watching through their mobile phone a while ago... Just a little blurry... The video was the sat 5 recording... Supreme God palace council... They were about to start the topic regarding the images presented by God sereise through spectral link... By this moment , Gragen conceded himself upon his guilt towards the fate of supreme God King Marka... While also viewed one more time how De Miesta Raqiuola has toyed by the God of destruction.. The council was murmuring any possible clue's to God Kaela's whereabouts.. And the possibility of Godverse extermination.... Till a sudden images out of a thin air appeared before God Gragen.. The council has stunned... " T..t..t..the kingdom has come..." Said by one member of the council... Gragen took a glimpse nearby his side... He felt a tremendous unfamiliar aura nearby... A sudden gazed... Irinian Godverse time stop.... Gragen fell deep into his conciousness.. Within his mind.. " I am your creator...!!! I am one of the eternal God!!!... I am seeking to the chosen one...!!! I no longer sense where he was...!!! Could you spare a little bit knowledge of his whereabouts my child...!!??" Gragen was shocked but still calm... 'How many generation of us God, for i thought Eternal God's are all gone...' Gragen said to himself... " You may not understand now my child... I should not interfere with you around... But this was an urgent of this situation..." Gragen although calm but his body was trembling in its presence... " Do not be afraid my child for i am your creator... " By this moment Gragen remember he was about to throw to the Altar of retribution... " I have forgiven everyone sins.. no one is perfect.. i am just asking his whereabouts... " Gragen was confused... " Yes i can read your thoughts how you feel and what you need... I can't find him anywhere i searched could you spare me a little knowledge of his whereabouts my dear child..." Gragen gulp his saliva... He couldn't understand whats going on... He ask... "W..who is that your seeking my...??" " I am Irenian..." " Irenian?!!!.." He remembered their Godverse Irenian they called... " I..is it...!! Impossible..." " Yes i am.. we musn't waste a single time... For it may be too late for me to find him...." " Who is the one your looking for my Lord..." Gragen asked with confusion.. Of all God he was the one chosen to ask... He was grateful... He became emotional until... " The one you thought the God of destruction..." Gragen eyes became bigger as he held his eyes to meet his creator... The creator Irenian was like an spectral energy without vulnerable flesh... Irenian eyes burned Gragen's self reliance and became a formidable supreme God... Gragen's old self became younger again... his appearance was glowing... " Is that all you needed my child??" " Im.. I can't believe this... Thus why given this to me for i am not worthy of your forgiveness my lord..." "I know all your doubts and despair... Your daughter Kaela joined forces with the other Godverse... i believed she will get revenge sooner.. my eyewards saw a glimpse of her as she step outside my Godverse..." "Wait what.. my daughter??" " im afraid one of the Eternal God Demion was originally plotted something so i set a permanent eyewards within boundaries.." " Another Eternal God!!! Demion??? Why Kaela!!!why go forward through all this" This moment Gragen became determined.. " I accept the task you are given to me my Lord..." " Well then my child help me find him as soon as possible... my All SeeingEyes been blinded by his presence, just like other eternal God's for what reasons i don't know... We must find him... Even if we must comb the entire Godverse my child for i fear the consequences..." 'The God has the all seeing eye... Wherever you are within it's reach you can run but you can never hide... ' Gragen speak to himself... 'But why he was blinded by his presence... I musn't delay to fulfil the task given to me by our creator for what may cost even if my life's at stake, i must correct the mistakes I've done... forgive me my dear Kaela...' he said to himself emotionally.. " Gragen... Your original sins are forgiven... Raise yourself..." The eternal click his thumb and... Supreme palace council... They were shockingly amazed for just 1 seconds but the reality... The eternal God had them glimpse... They knew it... It was on the scriptures hidden under the councils library... They we're cheering and shouting in happiness except Gragen... His appearance change... Brushed up hair younger and Brusko appearance with mythical leather armor with gold lining, very fashionable... Even the supreme elite guards that was holding Gragen's arm was cheering... " Did you see that conduit haha_..ha..." The guard was turning around his head to Gragen and shockingly surprised.. " What the..!!!" The guard shouted to his surprised... Suddenly the loud voices became silence... their eyes pointed where Gragen was standing... " Meredith.. please pardon me.. you must delay... The eternal God seek my aid..." Gragen said and kneeled like a knight.. "Whooaaa..." Everyone said with delay.... Merideth: the head council appointed by Godking Marka... " As you where... You have no right to speak... " " i need to fullfil my task given to me by eternal God Irenian.." he reason... " Insolent fool...." Meredith shouted angrily.. " Eternal God Irenian don't take sides... So why a traitor like you ever wanted... Huh.. besides the execution on it's way... No God ever slip the eternal flames of death..." Gragen was just calm.. And just close his eyes.... The guards lift his arm and start walking towards the execution altar of Gods... while walking he said this to himself... 'I Believed in you my lord... I have faith in you... My life is given to me by you... Only you can take it away from me... I have no other God's beside you.. you have enlighten me my lord...' He was talking in his mind alone while climbing the stairs towards the altar of eternal flames... While meredith and council commoners was gossiping... Finally two steps ahead on... They stopped... Merideth move to the centerpoint, viewing the entire council... " This God Gragen.. does a countless rebellions...., fearless.... and deathless campaigns... Menacing everything in it's path... hiding in the name of conduit.. everyone here doesn't know who conduit was.." The council commoners murmuring, gossiping... " This day hereon.... His multiple countless sins has gone to far... yet he was here now facing his judgement.... I hereby authorized by our Godking to acknowledge this threat as an equal amongst us.. and yet another sin he has committed again.... He said our eternal God need his aid... And we knew that the eternal God won't spare evil deeds... He was the first one who annihilated evil since our existence.. so why someone evil like him needed by our eternal God... This isn't the first time we executed a high ranking God... As my authorization hereby... Supreme God Gragen will face death through the flamesss..." Council members shouted overjoyed by her decisions... The last sentence meredith said was full of hatred... And she shouted the last word... " Suit your self.. " the guard guided him to move forward with his hand.. God Gragen didn't hesitate.. he step forward to the eternal flames... Eternal Flames of Fire Altar of Retribution : The history wasn't sure but eternal God Irenian create this altar by Marka's request... Marka prays for this to create judgement equally " this is the flames of purity... if a sinner walk this flames will die instantly.. so be careful whosoever pass this transparent circle..." Written in the book of revelation... Super transparent light of fire without source and has a blue color randomly shown like a lightning... The flames itself can burn anything without traces.... Encircled by three gravity stone statue of death reaper represent... The encirclement of create a status of antigravity.. which means you will float directly to the center, sucking any matter ones passed the luminous encirclement.... Gragen closed his eyes... Prayed countless... 'Gragen will instantly burn even his ash will not appear...what a pathetic view....' Meredith said to herself before turning around... and walking away... The fact that deep in her heart she really adore Gragen... But as a jury, justice must be equal by God's law... whatever feeling she has, justice must prevail... " Lygorn send a message throughout the Godverse that conclude the feared conduit has been executed... Tell them no need to fear anymore... And... Are you paying attention did you hear what i said??".... " I..i heard it all your highness but..." " But what?" " W..why he didn't disappeared nor burned...??!!" " He?!!" Merideth stopped from walking and pointed her eyes at the altar.... " This can't be..." She was surprised Gragen was floating inside the Eternal flames center..
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