《Undiminished》Review
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If you don't even know my system for how I want the stats to go don't make shit up on your own plus its 0.01% of current stats it's never going to be huge and the character is never going to be op. I haven't even listed current stats of anything for all anyone knows the current char has one stat point in everything meaning he gains nothing also again don't "review" things if you don't understand everything. Also, it would take a stat being over one hundred just to get to one extra stat point. So I ask you very rude person how in the fuck did you get to your math answer? I ask because a base stat of 100 increased by 0.01%=1 that isn't very much and as people level up they become harder to kill thus die less. I would also like to point out his stats are going to be around five which he hasn't found out yet and those increases do not count.
So my point is don't just say things when you have zero idea how things will work. I don't care you gave me a bad review that's fine what I don't like is putting your ideas in my story. Welp, it's clear this dude is just a troll who is taking his anger out on other people but whatever if they want to make up a story based on my writing all in their head good for them. I honestly don't care about a nobody that makes shit up so this is gonna be the last time I even talk about this and will be moving on. For the last time it's my story I make the rules not some ass clown that likes to troll people soooooo Good day readers and Goodluck because life is hard and you're going to need it
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