《Every Planet We Reach Is Dead》First Planet
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The Great Duke Faust Marlekees, second in line for the throne and is considered the bastard prince. A brutish man they say, a man with no manners, someone who is crass and could never be worth anything in his life. Faust is called many things but he stands tall. My name? That is me. I try my best to resist the battering of the ears that is the other royalties banter about me being completely worthless but it is but prattle by those who no naught of who I am. I, the Great Duke Faust, former second prince, am tired.
When it was announced that my brother would take the thrown, my mother was furious. She went to my brother's quarters in abounding rage, smashing the door open to kill him then and there. Unsuccessful it was, but it had brought our status in the family to an all-time low. Leaving me the scraps to their theoretical dinners, but we know it true that they eat barely anything because they find it disrespectful, wasting instead of giving. I spit on them...
Commentaries from the Abyss, The Great Duke Faust Marlekees, Former Prince of Terra.
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It being a desert was a lie. The ground was made out of a tan crystal and the planet was as cold as Lots'miniar. Though the sky is bright, the feeling it gave was contradictory. Both Ren and the Gambler have their helmets on, breathing artificial oxygen as they totter back and forth on unsteady ground, the crystals crunching under their feet. The Gambler resists succumbing to his excitement, Ren was enthralled though, watching as the clouds pass across the sky, walking to a higher place, more and more until... clouds... more of them. All of them gather in a massive cyclone, a massive pillar of light beaming into the middle of it, the clouds shifting from a sky blue outline to a stupifying crimson that spreads through the sky like a phoenix.
The mic to their radio cackles, Ren begins to speak, "Is this your first time on a different planet than your own?" The radio clicks.
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The Gambler sighs, looking at the sight before him. "Yeah... this," He nods, "I'm so happy right now."
Ren looks to her Mexe, "This thing is amazing, the fact that it would help me adapt this quickly to this planet's environment is inane to me."
"I was as amazed as you were."
"I only heard rumors about how the Mexe works."
"I didn't hear anything at all - when I woke up, I just had it on me."
"Yeah, isn't it a commanders Mexe too?"
"It is?"
"Yeah, it has an autopilot function and can help you fire high-caliber weapons that only the Enjalsa could wield."
"What's the Enjalsa?"
"An experiment created by the Tuskare. They take weak races in the solar system and turn them into super soldiers."
"Any race?"
"Only humanoid."
"So that's why it..." The Gambler looks at the massive gun kept sewn into his scarf, "Is that why I don't feel any weight here?"
"I would assume so."
The Gambler smiles with glee under his helmet, "Let's keep moving."
They had walked onto a mountain previously, a small path leading to the bottom. From what they could see - They had landed on a high point on the planet, walking up a hill leading to the highest point in said mountain. As they looked down, they could see something called the Pratopic Forest. No specifics of what it is cannot be garnered by sight as it glistens brightly, at night, creating an Aurora Borealis sort of effect.
As they ventured farther down the mountain, the darker it had become. Stepping onto flat land and stepping off of the slope leading them below, a large forest sat in front of them. Massive trees made up of a variety of ores, leaves made up of thin pieces of glass. They walk into the forest, the Gambler calling two drones to his side, a large one with guns built into its sides and another, a smaller more compact drone with a sword wedged in the middle, of course, the small ship drone is with him as well. The ground, as they make their way through the forest, becomes smoother and smoother until finally, it is like marble. Their feet clacking against the hardened ground as if they were entering a building. Though it was dark, the light-emitting from their helmets lit the way, reflecting off of the trees and causing it to be even brighter, to the point that it practically wasn't even dark in the first place.
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The Gambler slides his hand across the trees as he passes, Ren, keeping her distance, watches in awe. Some of the glass-like leaves fall onto their person, occasionally brushing them off here and there, the light reflecting off of their helmet's visors.
"This place is amazing..." Ren comments, sticking close to the Gambler.
"It is... I hope we'll be able to find more planets like this in the future."
"Without a doubt. There have been many stories of planets even more beautiful than this."
"It's probably a combination of a lot of things. We're probably used to how our planets looked and the combination with the atmosphere and our suns probably collaborated in making it look dull, but on planets like this, it's a different situation entirely."
"It's just like our planet, the sky that is."
"Yeah... but the geography is like this." The Gambler taps one of the trees with his knuckles.
Ren takes a moment to think, "How long will we be walking?"
"Until our ship finds us our vehicle. I ordered one ahead of time but it'll take a while for our ship to get to it."
"You're saying 'our' now."
The Gambler resists a chuckle, shaking his head. They continue walking until finding a massive chasm in the middle of the forest, separating them from the other side, preventing them from continuing on through traditional means. The trees on the other side look similar to onyx, even when light is shined onto it, glass leaves still falling from it's thickly entwined branches.
"What could've made a planet evolve like this?" Ren questions, walking along the edge of the chasm.
The Gambler examines his surroundings, seeing which tree could tip over and what could not. Suddenly, a massive floating vehicle descends, breaking the branches of the trees and lowering itself to the edge where the Gambler and Ren are. A bulky vehicle, weapons locked into small compartments. "Finally." The Gambler sighs, opening the door to the vehicle and entering the driver's side, Ren following behind him. He closes the door, the drones floating atop it. He adjusts the car, going through the onyx forest. Darker...
The Gambler shakes his head, bringing the vehicle into the air until it finally broke out of the forest, using a mining laser placed onto the vehicle here and there. The Gambler leans into his chair, looking at the sight before him, Ren leaning towards the windows of the vehicle to see the outside.
"Let's visit the pillar of light." The Gambler says, accelerating the vehicle.
"Is this a Yulter?"
"Yeah, it is, how'd you know? I made sure it wouldn't look like the original since they looked like they came from a trash planet."
"The sound."
The Gambler taps the helmet, "You can take it off."
Ren nods, taking the helmet off at the same time the Gambler does.
"Air comes from the core and is crystallized on the surface wherein something called a Kyra buds, then when it does, it cracks and lets out carbon. The atmosphere is breathable outside of the forest apparently."
"When did you find that out?"
"Two minutes ago."
"Ah."
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At the culmination of a galactic conflict, an experienced sergeant is once again deployed on the battlefront. After a series of events, he perishes and awakens in a foreign body, far stronger than he could have imagined, where the laws of nature as he knew them have ceased to exist. But in this primitive world ruled by kings and monstrosities and magic, two forgotten terrors are emerging. The Elven King in the south has assembled an army and seeks to establish a new age, while in the north stirs the ancient corpse of the White King and his desires to plunge the realm into an eternal frost. But then these seemingly undefeatable powers make a grave mistake. They assail the reincarnated vampire lord. And they find themselves facing a greater terror than anyone could have imagined—Reith Lornhart.
8 201The Shards of Sylvia's Soul
In the little village of Nyberg, Sylvia is dreaming of a future with Rebecca at her side. Together, they could move overseas. But when bandits attack, all of her tender dreams turn to ashes. Forced out of her home, Sylvia forges new bonds with the Fri, the women who have taken it upon themselves to protect their little corner of the world. She also meets Afi, a strange bandit with a stern face and a soft heart. Saving each other from certain demise, they join in a bond which irreversibly ties their souls together. So bonded, they attempt to settle down. When a distant heir to the Crown asks for aid to reunite the country, Sylvia sees her chance to finally right all the wrongs committed against her family. In the pursuit of the throne, Afi and Sylvia come to risk their very lives. Sylvia uncovers the relationship between soul, magic, and divinity itself, but even in research, there is peril. It is not an easy task to balance the strain on her soul with the demands of the upcoming battle. In this world, the soul is not an incorporeal concept. To the contrary, the human soul is a physical object, an organ which resides in the chest of each individual. It is a great source of strength, but also of vulnerability. Hardship can leave scratches and blemishes, or even break the soul in two. The soul is each person's connection to divinity, to the magic which is ubiquitous to the world. It enables the cultivation of gods, but old legends warn of demons emerging in the presence of corrupt intention, and of hollow warriors, with no soul at all. There are two sides to every page. Update ScheduleNew chapters are in the works. ScopeThree to four books in total are planned.Book 1: "Fri Women" Chapters 1-64. Find the paperback and e-book here.
8 215After All
This is not my story. My story was of a world I forged by my raw will, and of you, my children, forged of my dreams. That story has long since ended. Our world was not alone. Another deity came from beyond my sight, and despite our resistance rent our world asunder. In the end, all was lost and you were gone. That I survived your passing is a testament to the cruelty of existence; I cannot forgive existence for the monstrous crime of making me go on without you. This is the story of a new world, forged by the hands of fools. That it is made from the bones of that which I most hated will bring this place no absolution. In the fullness of time, I will seize the reins of this new narrative, and I shall end it. You are lost to me, my children. I will make a funeral pyre of all reality for you, and be with you in oblivion after all. --- DocSumac here. This is a story that has been rattling around in my head for years. It's not complete, but I'm not going to let it haunt me anymore. I'm uploading what is ready, and I'll add more as I can. --- Addendum May 20, 2020: I've added the Sex tag. Not because of actual smut, but becuase of what will probably devolve into an ongoing parade of dick jokes. No point denying my nature.
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8 141Star Wars IX- The Rise of Skywalker
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