《A new world a new Chance(DROPPED)》Chapter 5
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[John’s POV]
When the sub-commander heard my words, he looked towards me and said, “What do you mean by that? can you really revive Sir Gregory? I mean that’s impossible for even the Great Head Master of Magic or the 12 Great Wizards in that even they cannot fully revive a person once they died.”
[So that means I am the only one who can revive a dead person]
I replied to the sub-commander; “Yes I can indeed resurrect the dead, but that’s only because of an item I currently posses.”
The sub-commander once again spoke, “So you have an ancient artefact…?”
[what now?!, an ancient artefact?, well that’s new. I really need to gather more information as soon as possible; I’ll just follow the flow]
I replied to him, “Yes, my Master, gave me this; he’s been gathering ancient artefact’s throughout his travels, but since the sub-commander seems to more questions. I therefore interrupted him before he could ask more questions that I wanted to answer and so I continued and said; “Can I now start resurrecting him? He is running out of time.”
[I told him that as an excuse]
The sub-commander replied quickly; “Yes of course.”
I told the soldiers and also the princess, who seems to have calmed down from crying, to give the dead knight’s body and me some space.
[Third person POV]
As John opened his storage, he took out a wooden Staff, which was around 2 meters in height and radiated off a divine aura together giving shivers to all the people in the local vicinity. The staff is one of the many of God’s relics in the game, it is called the Full Resurrection. The relic can resurrect anyone that the holder desires, also in the game it can be used against other players to avoid getting penalties and to remove at the same time some various de-buffs, such as curses or poisons and the best part of this was that there was no mana consumption, but it can only be used one a day.
It seems John is trying it out for the first time in this world on a fallen old knight he does not know. If there are some changes in the law governing the item, as he held the staff in his right hand, a sudden surge of energy flowed through him and the next thing he said made the surrounding soldiers and the princess look at him in amazement.
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[John’s POV]
I am now holding the ‘Full Resurrection’ staff and as I held it my hand, a sudden glow covered my body and my eyes started to glow as well. If I remember correctly; this should not happen, as in the game this should not happen and a suddenly a blue screen popped up which I read, the words written on it said:
(!)Notice
Would you like to wish to Revive [Sir Gregory of Cera] ?
Yes | No ?
Of course I picked ‘Yes’ and as soon as I chose my answer, the dead knight’s body started to glow, but not that bright at first, then suddenly a beam of light came down in the skies and a loud bang resounded once the light hit the body and a single shockwave was produced. Some soldiers fell to the ground and their faces was filled with disbelieve and amazement.
The light stopped after a few moments while the surrounding people went silent. The bight glow on the knight's body finally subsided and as we went closer and looked at the Knight’s body, we were amazed to see that he had become younger, be it not that young, since his age seemed to had been around 70 years old when I last saw him, he now looked at least 30 years younger. His white beard was now short and was grey and also his wrinkles on his face was gone
Suddenly the princess ran towards the sleeping knight and cried once again, but this time it was cries of happiness.
[guess it was a success]
A blue screen popped up saying:
(!) Notice (!)
You have used one of God’s Relics [Full Resurrection] to ‘Revive’ a dead person, Multiple Blessings detected
The God of Death has blessed you!!, as you are the first person to fully revive a person within the grasp of death.
Bonus: [Ring of the Dead]
Description: This ring can reanimate the dead or any dead being becoming your minion (Zombies, Skeleton, Ghouls, Vampires]. This varies on the mana being offered, the more mana offered, the stronger the resurrected minion will be.
God of Life has blessed you!!, For giving another chance at life to a person who was killed in battle…you are granted a bonus!!
Bonus: New Skill: [Holy Heal]
Description:
It will heal anyone you touch, depending on the mana offered and your knowledge on the anatomy of that being, the stronger the effect of healing.
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After reading the blue screen, I made a grin on my face and then fixed it back to being serious. I looked around my surroundings and saw the soldiers starting to collect their dead and then burying them. While the body of the bandits were being burned, the princess and the sub-commander went off to where the soldiers had erected some tents and where the Knight, Gregory, was currently resting. So I went to where the dead axe user had died, in which once I arrived, I stored his body in my storage, as he was pretty powerful amongst these people, I will try using the [Ring of the Dead] on him to resurrect him has a minion later. When I was done, I was called by the sub-commander and the princess to their tent and once I arrived inside, two of them are waiting quietly talking
The sub-commander was the first to break the ice and said; “Hello Good Sir, Thanks once again for defeating the bandits and especially for reviving Sir Gregory, I am the substitute commander until sir Gregory is fit agian to do so my name is albert, and this is princess Elizabeth, may I inquire our saviour's name?”
To which I replied and replied; “ My name is john, and don’t worry about it. So what do you want to talk about?”
The sub-commander replied to my question and said “We wish to employ your services. If you accept, we will reward you with lands and or riches that you seek, that would be within our power. If our goals succeed, in that since the bandits which were hired by the prince to kill us, we can never really escape his grasp, so instead we will declare the princess’ candidacy and therefore the right to the crown as she is the next in line to the crown and as a true royal and not like that bastard prince.”
I followed up a question and asked; “What kind of person is this prince?”
Then instead of the commander answering my question, the little girl spoke up and said; “Hello Mister Saviour, I am Princess Elizabeth Victor Fedore, daughter of the late King Edward Fedore and the true Queen, Louise Caroline Fedore. The Prince’s name is Ivan Khan, he is 25 years old and a cruel person. He always bullied me and sometimes hurt me, but luckily, Uncle George, was always there to save me. He is even crueller to those who have lower statuses, such as; lower nobility, freemen and especially to slaves. He beat them to death and even…”
The sub-commander interrupted and said, “In Short the Prince is so evil that he became the cause of death of most nearly all heirs to the crown and if we let him rule the kingdom, the people may suffer, no, rather, will surely suffer.
When the sub-commander finished talking, I said; “Ok I will help you, but one condition is that no-one will know what I look like or what I can do. In this, you and your soldiers, must agree to my terms and the reward is not part of this condition.”
They looked at each other and then eventually smiled at each other. The little girl, the princess, spoke first and said to me; “Of course, we will agree to your conditions. We will immediately depart once Sir Gregory awakens, in which according to our healer, will be sometime tomorrow. Do you have anywhere to sleep?”
I replied to the Princess; “Don’t worry about it; I’ll help guard the perimeter, since you are now officially my employer.”
Before I left, I both read their Statuses;
Status of [sub commmander]
Name: Albert David
Race: Human
Level: 31
Class: Sub-Commander
Title: None
Stats:-
Strength: 53
Agility: 71
Endurance: 44
Defence: 39
Status of [Little Girl/Princess]:
Name: Elizabeth Victor Fedore
Race: Human
Level: 10
Class:
Title: Princess of Peace
Stats:-
Strength: 12
Agility: 8
Endurance: 11
Defence: 12
After this, I took my leave and went into the forest. Since it was starting to get dark, I will get ready for the night and called forth all my minions and then tried to store them all into the storage and in which it seems, that they can indeed be stored into my storage space. At to that end, concluded my day.
[End of chapter 5]
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