《Web of Isolation》Update - Not a chapter
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So, it was brought to me attention that some of the Math in my chapter was off, like really off, because square kilometres are 1,000,000 square meters rather than being 1,000 square meters. I've went through and tried to change every measurement I've found to meters and will be using meters in scientific notation in future to side step something like this ever cropping up again but that did lead me towards making some overall changes to the numbers and layout of the dungeon so far. I do have a map but I wanted to post this chapter 20 minutes ago and couldn't because I was trying to get uploading that image to work. It's just not happening for me at the minute, the iPad I'm using both for uploading these chapters and making things like the cover photo for this book is school owned and doesn't let me use image hosting sites. With that out of the way I'll try and describe to you as clearly as possible what the new layout of our dungeon looks like.
The dungeons total territory is a now 10,000m radius (10^4m) or 2*10^4m diameter that extends 10^3km both up and down before stopping as Dane hit some sort of barrier at that point. Within the territory there is the Nest, made up of three caves: a central cave that is 400m north to south and 600m east to west and two auxiliary caverns that are completely blocked by lose rubble from a cave in at the moment but are approximately 200m diameter each even though their shapes are very uneven. Next is the tunnels which can be found both south and north, the northern tunnels coming to a series of dead ends with on path specifically leading to the crystal cavern which is 300m east to west and 400m north to south and the tunnels in total occupy an area of about 2,000m total from the nest till the cavern whereas the northern tunnels are now basically 10,000m long from the exits of the caverns to the tips of Dane's territory, even wrapping around slightly to give them even more area. These tunnels make up the majority of Dane's territory and the rest is mostly solid stone, you can think of Dane's dungeon as a castle on a hill surrounded by plains: obviously the hill is of most importance but it's only really a speck compared to the surrounding landscape.
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