《The Awakening – From a Nobody To The World’s Strongest Antihero》Hiatus Reason & Partial Chapter 16
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Reason:
Too many changes in my daily life instantly killed any motivation I had to continue this story. However, I will finish this and return. I won't let this time be wasted. I'll focus on understanding my own story further and where I want to take this.
Kibo Is part of many worlds, not just one. I have to create those worlds from scratch and keep them original. It's not easy. Some are fantasy, sci-fi, modern, wastelands etc. Then I have to build histories behind them, fill them with characters for our mc to interact with and so on. The more I continue this story as the first version with 50% planning and 50% winging it. The small inconsistencies will start to grow and hurt the story. I have already noticed multiple which will hurt the story greatly if I continue writing it.
Some said this seemed like a well-planned story but that's just an illusion. The first two worlds have detailed histories anything further is unknown.
For the people who were enjoying reading this and saw potential in it, I apologise. I promise you one day that I will get back to finishing this story and it won't become lost in the void. I will continue to write chapters when I'm not here, and I will write one epic journey for our Kibo. I will write epic boss battles, and make him go through the toughest of challenges. I wish to see him succeed in a world I will create.
The story isn't going to change much from what it is now. I will just change how he interacts and talks to people where needed and I will have a more solid idea on how his powers work and where in the story it will be best for him to 'unlock' those powers.
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For the people who wanted to read Chapter 16. I only wrote it partially. Please understand his powers are not finalised and are subject to change in the final version of the story. But what I can say for sure is he will be an incredibly OP character. The only restraints are himself and the seals on his power.
Chapter 16 – Solo Raiding a Blizzard Wolf Dungeon
[One week ago]
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You have Entered the Dungeon
of the Alpha Blizard Wolf
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Kibo emerged from the dying light of the portal. The howling winds raced all around him as it struck his face, the chilling touch sent shivers down his body. He raised his hand to shield his eyes from the countless flakes of snow which were carried by the ferocious winds. The unrelenting wind had forced him to press his chin against his chest. He pulled his fur hood over his head.
Not wanting to give up already, he pushed forward. Each stride sank his feet further into the snow. His visibility was low, but all he could do was press ahead. In a short few minutes, his speed had significantly decreased, and his vision was turning darker, unable to hold on in the extreme temperatures of this dungeon.
“Not now! I need to keep going forward!” he resisted. However, his legs buckled as he collapsed onto his knees.
The eerily familiar status screen popped up.
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User’s Life is at Imminent Danger!
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...
...
Activating Skill: Void Immunity
Seal: 1/6 Class: ??? Titles: ???, Skills: Leap, Passive Skills: Void Immunity,???,???,???,???, The Final Dodge, Summons: Zana, Goblin Lord, Lizardmen Lord, Goblin (+12), Lizardmen (+70), Mana Capacity: 1,000,000
Gradually the piercing feeling from the sub-zero temperatures decreased as he regained his senses in his fingers and toes. He raised his hands in front of his face.
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“Void Immunity?” He spoke to himself, surprised by what just happened.
He thought, ‘if I had a skill like this the entire time, why did it not activate immediately?’ He facepalmed himself and poked his finger towards the text which read Void Immunity.
Passive Skill: Void Immunity (Lvl: MAX)
Description: Absolute Immunity towards all thermal fluctuations and poisons within the network.
Kibo could not fathom what he was seeing. He couldn’t decide what was more surprising, the fact that he has received a maxed out skill which would be considered in the realm of the gods or the fact it says within the network.
“What is this network? Does it mean dungeons or maybe it means the portals in general? I don’t understan-” Kibo was cut off from a distant, daunting howl which echoed between the peaks of the mountains.
After a momentary silence, dozens of smaller howls could be heard all around him. Kibo stumbled back onto his feet as he spun in a circle trying to locate the sound, but it was already coming from all directions.
Within the darkness of the raging blizzard, gleaming blue eyes appeared all around him.
In the distance, a gigantic figure of a wolf appeared hidden behind the never-ending blizzard. An unsettling deep voice filled the air.
“Human turn back now.”
“Wow...”
Kibo stood there with sparkling eyes as he looked up towards the distant horizon. Mesmerised by the hidden figure of the gigantic wolf with it’s shining blue eyes.
“My summon!” He told himself.
“That will be my summon!” He repeated with added vigour.
He smiled intensely at the fact he will command such a massive beast. Confidence was bursting through his skin, not aware of the level of threat which was before him all he could feel was excitement as adrenaline rushed through his veins.
I'll be back 😏😎
Winter 2020?
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