《Magune: Let The Magnet Rise》Chapter: 5- Explanations/ Amazing Reveal
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Chapter 5
Literally five hours later the sun begins to too start shining the first one to wake up is Jin as he woke up begins to exibit signs of having a crick in his neck.
[jin] ughhh. My head hurts I wonder what happened last night
But as he looks up he sees his son resting asleep in his bed.
I wonder what he is doing there he wasn’t there at first when I got flung out of bed.
As he tries to turn his head he sees his wife squirming on the ground beginning to wake up.
[Railin][thoughts]omg this head ache hurts so much I wonder what that weird magic that was last night.
As she begins to lift herself up against the bed railing she is met with her husband being in the same predicament.
[jin] honey do you know what kind of magic that was last night that knocked each of us out when we were going to do the deed.
( yes my characters parents are some freaks in the sheets since their son Rai has got his own room and bed)
Back to the discussion
[railin] do you think someone broke into our house to steal something or did they come to steal little boy.
[jin] of course not who would try to break into the house of the former greatest b ranked [b] adventures Raiden’s wave.
To have knocked both of them out they would have had to be at least [c] rank and above since their skills have degraded a bit over time from the easy life out in the sticks.
As of right now the parents are trying to figure out what could have happened that could have flung them around the room without actually burning, crushing , freezing them.
Then appearing like a sudden after thought, eureka!!!! like sign appeared in both of their eyes as they remember something similar happening after railin gave birth to rai.
[(the incident when rai shout out like a football and towards his pregnancy doctor and knocking him out after the impact. Of rai’s head hitting the center of his chest.)]
Then as they begin to formulate an answer for these weird phenomenon’s they begin to look for rai thinking he is still in the room.
Suddenly they hear a slight snoring noise coming from the top of their bed!
Then as the begin searching the bed the see a small little bump in the bed next to the wooden head bored.
As jin walks up to the back of the side of the bed he reaches across and pull the cover from over the lump very quickly.
Revealed to the both astonished parents is the perpetrator in all the weird magic phenomenon’s for the last three years.
But they did not know the full extent of his powers as of yet so what they can speculate will have to be confirmed by [rai].
[jin [railin] So as jin and railin look over their son for a quick second they began to shake him awake so he could explain to them what did he last night or what just happened in general.
[Point of view change]
[rai]-[dream] I wonder what mister ball and string wants every night that I see him he starts too swing faster towards my direction I’m about 50 feet away from him today I wonder if anything new might happen as he says that he instantly get closer within 20 feet of it and begins to glow he notices that his body is starting to itch near his belly button.
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Then suddenly he begins to float towards to ball and string and by the time he is within one foot of it shines brighter and brighter till he has to close his eyes from the sudden osculation in light and as he closes his eyes he instantly wakes up the moment his dad touches his body.
He starts to feel incredible pain on his back hands and belly button area. Three big black balls appear on his body and they began to form into a natural rectangle.
After a few more seconds the light in the room dies down and [rai] opens his eye after going through the pain a few seconds ago. Then he noticed while all of this was happening his dad was still reaching for him to see what was wrong with his child.
Out of nowhere his mother picks him up and cradles him half way in her arm binding him to her chest. She thought something obviously bad was happening to her little boy.
[pov change]
[railin] omg my little ball of sunshine was in pain I wonder if he has truly awoken to the start of his magic. While holding rai up she starts to concentrate on the faint magic still in the air from the recent awakening. She opens her eyes and looks down she cant see it but she could make out a big black square on both of rai’s arms.
She tells him to quickly undress his shirt so she can see what’s wrong with his body and as she looks on the moment rai shirt goes above his waist she starts to see a black box around his belly button area. It’s still lightly glowing from the
magic being unconsciously ciphering in to his new tattoo of the sorts.
Then as she starts telling him what’s going on she ask for her husband to come over to look at this.
[jin] woah what is this big black box on my sons body hmmm it seems to be letting out a bit of magic power unconsciously he looks towards his wife and says I think we need to tell him he as just awoken to his abilities as a mage but one they do not know how to explain.
[rai] So rai says," mom dad I think I figured out how to do magic but it’s hard to control how to use it without thinking hard on what I want to push or pull away".
[parents] I wonder what kind of magic he’s awoken too.
As they explain to him about different types of magic he begins to get and acute understanding of the power he has been
born with. And what are the differences between the elements.
1. Fire- too be able to cast fire magic or other variations of it you need to be exposed to very hot weather based on how much your natural body and talent can handle that’s how much you will be able to use for the rest of your life this goes for all of the element you can get tiny boost from artifacts but that is all you are born with with you are born with.
2. Water- to be able to cast water you need to be greatly exposed to water when your young from that age till when your about five is when you stop absorbing the natural affinities with it or any other elements.
3. 3. Earth- you have to be exposed very earthy environments such as large mountains or caves or many natural rock formation. Let your imagination sore with this one. Earth is one of the most common affinity in the world of valor.
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4. Air- to be attuned to the affinity of earth it is a highly sought after affinity since it has many uses other than being cut up and creating barriers. The reason why this affinity is so hard to get is because the only ones who can get the affinity have to strictly have wings of the sort. Also all people with the wind affinity could float, fly, or jet threw the air they are used a lot for transportation needs
5. Thunder- last of not least there is thunder this is another sought after affinity to get since it has many benefits to battling and traveling. To get the thunder r ability you have to be not attuned to any other affinity that’s a first. Then naturally any person who is not attuned to the first four are automatically attuned and thought to be of thunder affinity. To awaken to your abilities as a thunder mage you have to be able to sit threw and entire thunder storm naked and survive this is all. Ps there are some that died.
[parents] they know it’s not thunder because he hasn’t been let outside by himself before and they know it isn’t any of the other four since he doesn’t show signs of being able to cast any of the five forms of magic. So what kind of magic is it.well we will have to wait until her turns five and takes the test to figure his mana affinity and his exact mana reserve? From what they know they may have just found a boy genius but they don’t really know that yet.
As they began to discuss more on his future they mention him joining the academy on a scholarship when he older.
…………
(Skips a head to the future two years it is the day of the test in the village)
---As the Magune family is getting ready for the annual magic test for the kids of the village this year the first one too
wake up is rai.
[Rai] oweeee!!! I cannot wait to take the annual magic test as he get up on his feet he presides to get ready for the event.
And as he put on his newly made shirt and pants he proceeds to get his socks and shoes too wait in the living room so that he can wait for breakfast.
And as he opens the door to his room too the living room a good aroma enters his nose.
As he smells the sweet but savory aroma of the pig bird bacon.
And as his mother is just finishing up his father walks in the house with his smallpox’s in tow. And as soon as rai and gin see each other they quickly run up too each other to catch up on some things.
Before they get to the breakfast. Both their moms call them to come sit at the table. Made of thin wood and metal.
They both sit down and begin to eat and as they begin gin says he does not have a fork or knife.
As soon as he says that rai begins too channel mana into his right arms and as he does a negative sign opens up and floats toward the kitchen cabinet and a fork and knife its engulfed and attracted to his hand slowly.
Everyone stares in amazement.
[gin] woah so cool rai I see you been working on your magic a lot when you first showed me it could barely hold a pebble.
And as they kept talking they both of them got off their chairs and by that time everyone was finish eating so they decided to head to the academy guild in capital city.
They arrived there in a couple of hours on the local wolf bear transportation in the village
[Yes, a wolf bear lol]
And as they were approaching the great walls of Alveron city they began to com to a stop at the big gates of passing or what you might call a large line.
As they waited their turn and showed their registration cards towards the city they were let in.
And as they were let in the giant doors opened up to a beautiful city with many sites.
And since both gin and rai have never set foot out of the village this was thei first time seeing so many people.
Their parents grabbed both of their hands and brought them to the academy guild building in the heart of the city and what they were met with was crying kids and furious parents mad at life because there sons and daughters could not get into the capital city academy.
[Do you guys remember what I said earlier your born with your born with.]
As the six of them stayed and waited in line it was about time for the first one to get tested.
[rai] gin I think you should go first.
[gin] you sure rai I could wait, and when he said that a man covered head to toe it silver armor came to pick him up and bring him to the big status plate
Ten minutes later……. Gin came out with a happy face and as he was getting closer his parents and the magunes were hawking hi for results they said his power Is called “Kinetic Fire” and that he has an above average mana pool
Kinetic fire:
when the user activates this ability is the faster speed you can achieve and the more momentum you can charge the more stronger the flames coating your body will be able to use stronger magic. You can also use the flame of heal by applying the fire onto your injured area as of now it only works on small cuts and scratches.
As they were talking the man in silver armor came again to see to take rai next away for his test.
[rai] so cool I wonder what that big metal thing with the words are on it is that where we are going to take the test, he had many questions. And as he gets closer the man in armor stops and says “put your hand on the plate’.
He does as told and as he puts his hand on the plate and after a few seconds of him getting scanned a voice speaker spoke out and told him everyone in the room including what his mana reserve was and the name of his ability.
[also im sorry for changing up a lot of stuff while writing its hard I will get use too it]
Then a clearly shaken voice speaks out mana reserve…………. Above average and that his magic is named…………….magnet rise.
[random thoughts] tf is magnet rise is that a new type of ability?
Its not categorized in our data………….
Ill end the long chapter here.
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