《Magune: Let The Magnet Rise》Chapter 4- "Magnetic Touch"
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Chapter 4:
Age three--
As Rai gets older he begins to actually notice vital signs that his body is changing too adapt to the new senses he begins to develop frequently over time.
It all happened one day when his parents bought him for his third birthday a new bed made of wood and iron bolts with a straw and monster fur bed. Which encompasses his new room.
[rai] hmmm I miss my crib it was a little more, homey like feeling when laying in it rather than flat bed with no bars to hold him in place from rolling right off the bed.
So he starts to plan out a way to get his crib back so he could sleep in it next to his parents.
As he walks in parents’ bedroom he wonders where they put his old crib so he could sleep next to them, since the bed makes him feel lonely.
After minutes on minutes of looking he could not find so he found the next best thing. He slowly crawled on his parent’s bed so that he could lay between them but he couldn’t because something was blocking his way.
It was his mother’s leg he tried crawling over it but the thigh of his maiden mother would not budge from him crawling over it he would always end up at the start of the leg.
Then after quietly giving up he just used his mother’s leg as a pillow and nodded off to sleep.
Railin: fufufufufu so jin you want to get it in while I was sleeping, but you know I can feel the package all on my thigh so if you’re trying to be sneaky ill beat you too the punch.
She lifts her leg up and scoots it over Jin’s waist and pulls him in.
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Then out of nowhere rai starts to wake up.
As he stirs around in bed barely awake his dad jin wakes up thinking its time to fool around again.
Then rai wakes up,
[rai] he slowly opens his eyes to find complete darkness as he tries to get out of it.
Coincidently his mother and father try to scoot even closer so they can embrace each other the moment they almost touch both of Rai hands began too glow yellow with a black rectangle in the middle of it horizontally.
[Jin]-[railin] what was that small little touch just now and as soon as they said that they both flew across the room and hit both sides of the walls.
While they try to understand what happens jin gets up first and grabs the first weapon he see and it happens to be a metal disk like object and before he can get any closer another flash of light appears and he is suddenly pulled towards his wife railin..
[railin&jin] ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh… thud as they both collapsed from the impact of colliding with he and his wife.
After a few seconds it appears that it caused both of them too fall unconscious.
[rai] mommy daddy where are you im scared it’s so dark….
Heiii its kind of easier to see, he notices that he is still inside his mother and fathers bed so what happened. But as he just now notices he has two glowing hands on one it has a positive symbol on the left it is negative.
As he looks closely at his hand he makes a mistake and touches his forehead with his left hand.
A big dark negative sign pops up on his forehead and as he tries to figure out what happens he is met with the most impossible opponent of his child life his own right hand as he tries to slow it down by opening his hand he ends up slapping the life out of his head as he hits the pillows on the bed.
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[Rai] yeouch!!!!! He begins to rubs his head and the two signs disappear.
He ask himself I wonder what that was and we he does he get a big light bulb above his head omg I can use magic just like mother and father.
“Then he recalls his mother always finding clean water to wash him in even though he doesn’t know where it comes from and just one day he asked her and she said it was a unique magic she has. That when there is no water natural to the eye can see but its in the air she sucks it out she called it i think………atmospheric drain.
Atmospheric Drain:
the user of this ability is able to suck out water from the air around them to supplement her magic if there is none in the vicinity.
Hmmm as rai thinks he begins to wonder what kind of magic does he have then he tries to figure it out. So he thinks mentally where that jolt of power came from and he starts to feel a sensation near his stomach he tries his hardest to draw the power out and before he can pull it out he farts then he loses his concentration and laughs.
To any man a fart is just funny in any way.
Then he almost forgets his parents laying on the floor grueling from the pain they just endured unconsciously.
Then for a few seconds he tries to figure out what he has just done by thinking again in his mind on the magic he thinks he has just done and a gets a response after concentrating for a minute. He gets a response and the same symbols appear on his hand but they are a bit smaller.
So right after that rai begins to try and clap his hands but they push each other away then he remember it being two different symbols when they came together so he had an idea if he could change his hand too a positive on one it will attract any thing with the other symbol mark on it.
[rai] say hmm if opposites attract I shall call this magnetic touch and after saying that. Hmmm it rolls off the tongue nicely I can’t wait to tell mother and father when they wake up. Yeeeeeeeeee. Since all the extortion is building up rai decides to sleep it off.
Magnetic touch:
Whenever the user touches a person or object with the corresponding symbol his hand depending on where he puts it you will either be repelled or crushed against whatever the other hand touches but if the user touches himself with it can back fire if touched, to prevent this all you have to do is touch yourself with the same symbol to cancel out.
I will end it here for the week lol I know I said this last time but this is the last one my fingers hurt………
Author’s notes: so what do you think of the new chapter did I fix some things I didn’t in the past chapters. It will be great if everyone who read can comment what they feel on the fourth chapter of the week. omg like im so happy that over a hundred people read my threads.i let out some tears....
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