《Magune: Let The Magnet Rise》Prologue- Birth
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Prologue:
Hello everyone my name is Derrick Green Also known by the infamous name of (Toobadbro the God of Nipples.) I know I have been on this site royal road for a while but I have not graced you with a story as of yet I write a lot of stories in my mind daily and this specific one just came to me. I think it is time for me to bless my fellow commenters and authors with a unique story of my own which I can say I might post every week starting from today and it won’t be like one of them short like fanfics I read every day I will try and give you the master piece you all deserve.
I will give you a short Preview of what you might want to read over the coming weeks that I will be posting chapters. I will give you one paragraph of the snippet of story I am going to be dishing out every week for you. But before that I will give you a few ideas to bounce off that may peak your interest.
• First the character will be named (“Rai Magune”)
• Second I will name off all of the elements in the story, and yes it is filled to the brim with magic. There will be Fire element, Water element, Earth element, Wind element, Thunder Element, Darkness element, and the infamous light element.
• The Planet will be called Valor it has been around for about 200 million years.
• For the Prefix of the story there will be war alright and it won’t be the stupid crap I keep reading where ultimately light is not bad but darkness is good and that demons are blood thirsty monsters no there will be none of that for my story it going to be the other way around well I’ll let you see that when it happens cant spoil anymore of the story. Now on to the prologue
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It was just another ordinary day on the planet of Valor there are wars going all across the planet and guess what our little bundle of sun shine is being born today. In the slums on the out skirts of the capital city of Alveron, two parents who are to poor to afford going to the capital city hospital are awaiting their little baby to be born.
Before we go into details of the pregnancy I have a need to tell you that were the family currently lives is which is in the alveron kingdom but the thing is that it is not the usual bundle of good plains and grasslands with lakes this city is a very tropical continental kingdom which on the planet on valor is very close to the equator.
Now let’s go back to the real story in a few minutes a baby is about to be born.
Jin: please be a boy, please be a boy
Railin: omg if you don’t shut the fuck up and hold my hand right now I’ll cut off your nutts, Andy and Frank…….
Jin: he turns pale in the face and quickly rushes off his chair so he could get closer to hold her hand. “With the hand of quickness we hear a crunch sound come right after getting his hand grabbed. Jin screams at the top of his lungs while lying on the ground one hand in the air all helpless in the vivid darkness of the shed like shack house a bright light enters the room as the local doctor or what you might call the jack of all trades in the outskirts walks in to see jin on the floor with a purple hand while railin is in pain trying to push the baby out.
He pulls out his magic gloves and puts his hands were the baby head is supposed to come out. ( the jack of all trades name is Ben smallpox let’s just go with Ben)
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Ben: just a few more second railin I can see his head just keep pushing as hard as you can.
As his head comes out everyone in the room heard a plum noise the moment his head came out of her (you know what) then out of nowhere like a bullet made of thunder the newborn known Rai shot out of his mother and hit the doctor in his chest knocking him out. As Ben falls down, he quickly as he loses consciousness he grabs the baby before he falls and lands on his back this all happened in .1 seconds.
After a few more heavy sighs of satisfaction from the mother, she ask jin if she could see her bundle of sun shine then out of nowhere the baby lets out a mind breaking shriek that encompasses the whole room too these new parents it sounded like a very happy and healthy baby. He tries to pick him up and as he does the baby clings on to the father as (Patatattta) sound reverberates in the room.
Jin just stands there like he felt a bit of magic come off his new born son but he quickly disregarded it as you have to be ten too consciously do magic on the first level. As he extends the baby towards his loving mother she lets out a small giggle at how cute her little sunshine is. Then she says out loud I think his name should be Rai then across from her jin also says hmmmm Rai has a nice ring to it.
When little Rai begins to cry this signifies in Railins head her maternal instincts that her little rai was hungry for his first sip of mommies milk. She quickly raised up as side of her shirt and tried to feed rai but his head would not go directly toward the nipple so after a few minutes of fighting it she started using inklings of her real strength this may not be known yet but Railin is an X adventurer who is living on the down low and so is Jin. As soon the nipple got close to rai’s mouth it made the same Patatata sound he did early with his dad and she felt a zip and rai was firmly planted on her nipple.
Author notes:
Spoiler Alert: I’ll just say this now Rai will only have one magic from the start to end of the series, it’s just that when he uses his only magic it won’t be classified under the other magic classes it will be something he has too think for himself. I will call them skills because that’s all it will be. He will have to be creative to make better use of his only power, there wont be body strengthening other than the casual hardcore rebuild your body type work outs that will help him build his strength I think body hardening, or any kinda strength amplifier is just as damn cheat and that include (Ki, Chi, and any fake ass martial arts you people seem to put in for the fuck of it I hate looking at characters who are born knowing how to use every move in the book with a couple uses of training they do so that will not contribute.)
Ill confirm this myself no matter what girl I throw in he will make them fall for him but it will not be a harem he will learn to grow and understand love from all different forms of life so if you get attached to one just know he might end up with her or he might leave her in the dust.
Since its going to take me awhile to write chapters because of my typing speed ill give a spoiler on his magic type, I call it (Magnet Rise).
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