《Just a Dream (First Draft)》Bonus Chapter 2 - Dominance
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This time my left hand went downwards to her chest and started to mold her breast in my hand. Still kissing, it stopped with the breast and went down again. With our Link we sent each other our feelings. There was no rejection of what we did or wanted. My hand slid under her underwear and touched her little clit. There I started to rub her in just the way she likes it.
` Being able to share one's feelings, truly is a cheat when it comes to love making. ` Just like that, while kissing and rubbing her clit the way she liked, she came. At the same time I received those feelings as well. The way her body convulsed as it happened, the way the pleasure spread in her body. It was overwhelming and I did not even have the female body to process all of it.
` Once I figured it all out, I am definitely getting my own female form. `
Once she rode down that feeling I stopped kissing her. “ Are you still worried? ”
While no answer came in the physical standard, one came over our Link and it was inviting me to continue and to make her feel better.
` Hmph, want to feel better? Well, I can make that happen. ` With that decided, I pulled my hand out of her panties and pushed her down on her back on the couch. Both hands went all over her to remove the clothes and after that went my own.
Again she was naked. I just loved the way she looked. From those perky c-sized breasts to the still developing hips. I took her legs and placed them above my shoulders and positioned myself just right. Took my cock and placed it on her entrance and plunged in.
Of course slowly, while last night I made it so she didn't feel the pain for the first time, it's not like it didn't happen.
Slowly I went inside and intense feelings were transmitted to me.
“ Aaa, brother it feels so goood. ” With that I went for a final thrust to enter her. “ Aaaaa”
Once inside I felt immense pressure and heat inside her which combined with the pleasure I felt at the head of my cock made it feel awesome. ` It really feels really great, but I feel like acquiring processing power to differentiate the degrees of pleasure broke me. `
` What I was experiencing was not just physical pleasure but the dominance factor too, and right now I feel more pleasure out of making her feel better than myself being inside her. `
I identified all this last night. Men definitely are there to dominate females. As we make them pleasure us or as we give pleasure to them, it is those feelings that when combined with our physical ones that makes us males. All while females have evolved to take that dominating factor and turn it into pleasure alongside the physical ones.
` Seeing my own little sister, panting for breath to my thrusting, to see her every notion of movement, to see her tits bouncing for me, to see her grasping for something as she is about to come, gives me more pleasure than my cock inside her and not to mention everything she sent me over the Link. `
In and out, and she finally came and screamed. “ Aaaaa ” Everything sent to me through our Link was just too much when combined with my own and I also came immediately inside her.
Slightly being out of breath I pulled my cock outside and my cum came out too. ` Good thing, I can make my cum sterile or something similar to that so she wont get pregnant. `
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Once it was out I sat on the couch and looked at Amila. She was focusing on me slightly. “ All night I pleasured you so I think it's about time you do the same thing for me. ”
“ Eh, what? ” I rolled my eyes when I saw her not understanding. “ Come little sister, surely you have seen it on the videos online. Come.”
I offered my right hand for her and she took it. Once I pulled her upwards, I brought her face to mine to kiss her again but it was not a long kiss. As it stopped I pointed down for her to notice it. Last night she had only been on the receiving end and I don't think she had any idea on how it truly looked up close.
As she looked down and noticed my erection she froze for a bit and only stared at it. With that reaction I took her right hand and placed it on my cock. “ There, with how wet you were, it's quite slimy so grip it with your right hand and slowly go up and down. ” Immediately she followed my direction and her hand moved. Up and down it went but when I sent her all my feelings she noticed that the head feels the best and focused there more.
I left her like that for a few minutes. In her focus she totally zoned out a bit so for the next act I sent her a certain desire of mine. The moment she received it her focus broke and gave me a glance but still followed it. Her head slowly lowered and soon she kissed the tip.
Soon, her tongue went to work on it too and soon after that she had it in her mouth. Every time I sent my feelings and guided her on what to do it felt like I was giving her orders and she followed them.
` Looks like the dominance factor multiplies the base pleasure I feel and the more she follows my orders the stronger the pleasure gets. That is one hell of a slippery rope. `
As Amila followed my guided feelings I felt her own pleasure increase every time she followed mine. The more she followed the more she felt pleasure in satisfying me and the more she followed my desire the more my own pleasure increased. This positive feedback loop went on and on.
From simple tongue work on the head to sucking it, slurping it, to licking the shaft from head to base, our pleasure increased and I was going to burst. Another desire was sent and she took it as deep as she could and I came inside her mouth while she swallowed. I felt her own pleasure about to burst but it just was not enough.
So once I was done coming in her mouth I sent another desire and she stopped giving me head and stood up and sat on lap, brought herself into position and placed everything where it should be and slowly lowered herself.
Immediately I felt her pleasure increase and edge towards climax and the moment it was all inside her she came again.
In that moment she lost control of her body and I grabbed her and placed her hands on my shoulders. Once she came back to herself, I sent another desire of mine and she started to move up and down slowly. There was no need for any other movement as it was her first time riding a man.
But there was no need to guide her this time, Her body soon did it on its own as if it was engraved deep in her on how to do this. Up and down, up and down she went and our desires built up again.
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No words were exchanged, there was no need for it, the only thing our mouths did was to take in all the air we need to fuel our motions.
Up and down, our feelings increased, exchanged, mingled as if wanting to fuse and we came again. Me inside her and her convulsing all over the body.
This time she collapsed on me and the only thing we heard was our breaths. We stayed like that for a bit. Just enjoyed each other's warmth. It was me that broke that moment.
“ Amila let's take a break, I think we need to talk a bit about what just happened. ” Back in the moment she looked at me and I noticed her cloudy eyes. I knew she wanted more but we really needed to talk about this.
` Ha, I so want to continue this but the talk had to happen.`
“ Amila, Amila, focus. Find the Link inside you and close it, Now. ”
With a more forceful voice, she did it. With the Link closed from both our sides. I picked her up and slowly brought my cock outside. The moment I did my cum followed.
“ Let's stop it here. We really need to talk. ” Again I emphasized it and we separated totally. '' Let's clean everything up first, I forgot to make a precaution for that. ”
Clothes on, cleaning soon done, we stared at each other again. Amila was no longer as clouded and was more focused. I just wanted to stare at her a bit more but a talk was needed.
“ Amila, when I had started to send my desires to you and you followed them, how did that feel to you? Think about it and explain it as best as possible. ”
With that question I gave her time to think about it. To be honest it didn't take that long anyway, maybe a minute or two. Once she was done she focused back on me and smiled. “ Brother, it felt amazing. To make you feel better and to know the best way to do that, it really feels good to be able to do that and the better I did it the more I felt my own pleasure increase. It simply was amazing. ”
I could only nod to that. “ Indeed it felt amazing, In fact it felt too amazing and there lies the problem. ”
“ Problem? Why would that be a problem? ” She frowned.
“ Sigh, how to best explain this? Listen little sister, sex is a battlefield like any other. Do you know what battlefields are used for? ” I hope this explanation will work.
“ Battlefield? Umm, do you mean the battlefield where armies fight? ”
“ Yes, that. The place where a group of people fight for something. It does not matter what, but what does matter is who wins. So tell me how does one win those fights? ”
“ Umm, by being stronger? ” I rolled my eyes to show her how little i thought about that. “ Yes, that is important, just like the weapons are important and strategy and lots of more factors. But there is one factor that is key to everything to win those fights. Don't bother thinking about it, I will tell you. It is control. ”
“ Control? ” I could see she was intrigued a bit about it.
“ Yes, control. The more one has control over how a fight goes the stronger one is and the stronger one is the more one can dominate the other and win the fight. The key to all this is control. ” I stopped for a second to let her recognise that fact. “ It's easy to explain, the more one has control over something the more dominant one is over the others in that something. ”
“ The same applies to sex, the only difference is the type of fight and where its done. ”
“ Now that I explained that, think again over what happened and tell me what you think.” Again I gave her time to think about it.
Once I pointed it out she quickly realised it. That all that time it was me that was in control and that I dominated her. “ Brother, why is being in control a bad thing. I don't mind it. It felt really great for me. ”
Hearing her answer I knew she did not get the whole picture I was going for. “ Listen, little sister. In our situation with our love for each other and the Link to feel each other being in control for a short time is a good thing but it will become a problem if one side is in control over the other for a longer time period. '' Again I stopped for a bit for her to realise in what direction I was going. “
" Listen, If I become too dominant over you for a long time, it will become a habit for you to feel like that and the more it goes on and the more I express my dominance you would start to love being dominated more and more. And at the end all that would result in is you becoming my sex slave or something similar. ” The moment she heard the word slave she went pale.
“ Yes, a slave to all my desires and you would enjoy being like that with our Link. With time you would do all my biding and care not one thought about yourself. I don't want that to happen. I want our relationship to be of equals. ”
With my desire declared, she smiled again. ` I really do love that smile of hers. `
“ Good, now that you realised it, I can explain how to fix that. ”
“ Lets see, as I will soon leave, you will have plenty of time to work on that but just my absence won't be enough. No, what you will need is the right kind of training. In this case we will need you to create good habits and experience in life. ”
“ Habits and experience? What do I have to do? ” Seeing her eager to learn, I explained. “ It's simple really. So far you have been on the receiving end, so all you would need to learn is to give instead of. So in the case of our relationship where we will express our control in the bedroom you just have to learn to fight in the bedroom. ” With a smirk on my face I looked at her. It took a second for her to realise what I meant.
“ Yes, little sister, once I am gone you will have sex with others. In this case, it will be mostly with boys. ”
The moment i explained she frowned at me. “ But, brother I do not want to have sex with other people. Is there any other way. ”
I shook my head. “ No, little sister. What I want you to learn is not just about sex but about controlling others and dominating them. It doesn't matter if they are male or female. Listen, dominance is about taking control from others. In your case, once you have developed your empathic ability more you will notice how others react to you in a lot of ways. You will notice how they think about you, how they see you, what they want of you and more. ”
“ With that information available and with experience you will know what kind of expression to take, what kind of movement to take, what to say to influence them to your desired end. Whether that be simple conversation or sexual attraction or actual sex, you will know how to give them what they desire, all while they will be thinking they are in control when in fact it will be you. ”
With an eager look she followed me so far. “ Once you have learned enough, you will notice how the World opens to you and how to get what you want from it. As in the end everything in this World is how one can make it bend to one's WILL instead one bending to its. ”
“ To make the World ours? ” She asked for confirmation.
“ Yes, little sister to make the World ours. And if in the future you have trouble, to engage in sexual acts with others just change the way you think of them. Hmm, if you're having trouble, then why don't you think of the boys that will bend their everything for you as living dildos or something like that. ”
` Ha, the moment I mention living dildos she went red again. So cute, but I best give some counterargument to it too. Don't want her to fall into bad habits. ` So I snapped my finger to get her attention again.
“ But let me tell you this. Do not make a habit of thinking of them like that all the time or of controlling everything directly to your needs as that would create bad habits and make one take everything for granted. Listen, its habits that distinguish the people on the top and the bottom. ”
“ Follow me so far? If so then tell me why that is? ” Best to make her think of it instead of me just giving an example.
Tilting her head a bit as if thinking she replied. “ Because good habits are good and bad are not? ”
To be honest I expected a bit of a different answer but no matter it was right anyway. “ Well, basically yes, but it's impossible to only have good ones and not the bad ones. It's all about the balance of things. To not have too much or too little of something. Otherwise even good habits will doom us if left unchecked. ”
“ So, with all that said, think of everything I have told you and everything about what happened that led you to this moment and review it. Understand it, make it yours, and express your desire to the World to make it yours. As you are right now we can not have an equal relationship as I am just too dominant over you. ” With all that said I gave her a lot to think about. “ Oh and one more thing. Men thrive in expressing dominance and women in subverting that dominance. ”
Having expressed my fears and the way forward in our relationship, I stood up and went to her to give her a deep but short kiss. “ Also remember this, I believe you will accomplish this and that we will have an equal relationship when I come back, or maybe it will be just me thinking that was the case while you are in control. Just thinking about it gives me something to look forward to. ”
“ Now think about everything, while I go for a walk as I need inspiration for a goodbye gift. ”
Finally done, I left her to her own thoughts and went for a walk.
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